Chatting— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more concise and natural. Start with a clear topic sentence (Yes/No + reason), avoid awkward phrasing and tense errors, and limit to 2–3 sentences. Use linking words (because, although) and give one specific example or brief explanation.

Exemplo: Yes, I do like chatting with friends, but sometimes I prefer to keep to myself because I enjoy reflecting on past events and my own ideas. For example, when I’m tired I often choose to listen rather than take part in long conversations.

Sugestão: Make the answer clearer and more grammatical. Start with a topic sentence and add one specific example. Use linking words like because or for instance to connect ideas.

Exemplo: I usually talk about topics my friends are interested in because people enjoy discussing their hobbies. For instance, with one friend I often talk about photography, while with another I discuss football.

Sugestão: Clarify your position and correct vocabulary/grammar. Say whether you prefer one-to-one or group, explain why with a reason and an example, and avoid confusing phrases like “101.” Keep it within 2–3 sentences and use linking words (because, so).

Exemplo: I prefer one-to-one conversations because they allow deeper and more meaningful discussion. For example, when I talk one-on-one I can focus on the other person’s feelings, while in larger groups the talk often becomes superficial.

Sugestão: Remove repetition and fillers, and produce a concise answer with a clear reason and an example. Use correct expressions (face-to-face, social media) and linking words (because, when).

Exemplo: I prefer face-to-face communication because it’s easier to read body language and have immediate feedback. For example, I find meetings in person more effective than chatting by text when discussing important issues.

Sugestão: Make your answer coherent and avoid repetition and unclear words. Start with a clear statement, explain why arguments can be positive with one reason, and give a short example. Use correct vocabulary (opinions, perspectives, resolve) and linking words (because, for example).

Exemplo: Yes, I sometimes argue with friends, and I think it can be positive because it helps us understand different perspectives. For example, a debate about plans for a trip helped us choose a better itinerary after we discussed everyone’s preferences.

× I generally do like to speak to friends, but most of the time I don't want to speak but rather think within myself.

✓ I generally like to speak to friends, but most of the time I don't want to speak; I prefer to think to myself.

Redundant auxiliary 'do' is unnecessary in affirmative present tense. 'Think within myself' is non-idiomatic; use 'think to myself' or 'think inwardly'. Also use a semicolon or conjunction to join contrasting clauses clearly.

× I like to reminisce what have been and think of the views and hypothesis.

✓ I like to reminisce about what has been and think about different views and hypotheses.

The verb 'reminisce' requires the preposition 'about'. 'What have been' is incorrect word order and tense; use 'what has been'. 'Hypothesis' should be plural to match 'views' and corrected to 'hypotheses'. Also add 'different' for clarity.

× I try to chat about what the friend him or she is interested about because people like to talk about what they like rather than what they're not interested, so I try to do that often.

✓ I try to chat about what the friend is interested in because people like to talk about what they enjoy rather than what does not interest them, so I do that often.

The phrase 'the friend him or she' is ungrammatical; use 'the friend' or 'they' if gender-neutral. Preposition 'interested about' should be 'interested in'. 'What they're not interested' is missing an object; use 'what does not interest them' or 'what they are not interested in'.

× Definitely. I prefer 101 cause the quality of the conversation relies on the participants number.

✓ Definitely. I prefer one-on-one because the quality of a conversation depends on the number of participants.

'101' is unclear and should be 'one-on-one'. 'Relies on the participants number' has incorrect word order and article; use 'depends on the number of participants'. Also use 'a conversation' for general reference.

× If the number increases, the quality of the conversation declines.

✓ If the number increases, the quality of the conversation declines.

This sentence is grammatically acceptable in present simple for general truths; no correction needed but retained for completeness.

× I prefer communicating on a face to face, face to face basis because on social medias and other platforms, text format is suitable when you don't have to, uh, synchronize a conversation at the same time.

✓ I prefer communicating on a face-to-face basis because on social media and other platforms, text is suitable when you do not have to synchronize a conversation in real time.

'Face-to-face' should be hyphenated as a compound adjective and 'basis' only once. 'On social medias' is incorrect pluralization; use 'social media'. 'Text format' is awkward—'text' suffices. 'At the same time' is better expressed as 'in real time'. Avoid filler 'uh' in writing.

× Yes, I sometimes argue with friends and I also believe argument is not only a bad thing, it's rather a good thing.

✓ Yes, I sometimes argue with friends, and I also believe that arguing is not only bad but can be a good thing.

Use 'arguing' (gerund) or 'an argument' consistently; 'argument is not only a bad thing, it's rather a good thing' is stylistically awkward. Adding 'that' improves clause clarity and balancing 'not only... but' construction is appropriate.

× This is because our game means there are different different and separate views that need to be mitigated.

✓ This is because our discussions mean there are different and separate views that need to be reconciled.

'Our game' is unclear in context; likely 'our discussions' or 'our conversations'. 'Different different' is a repetition error. 'Mitigated' is incorrect verb choice for resolving differences; use 'reconciled' or 'addressed'.

× And that's interesting point.

✓ And that's an interesting point.

Missing indefinite article 'an' before a singular count noun 'interesting point'. Also beginning a sentence with 'And' is acceptable informally but ensure completeness of sentence.