Chatting— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be concise and finish sentences. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons and an example. Reduce hesitations and avoid repetition (e.g., "I think" twice). Use linking words like "because" or "and also" to connect ideas.

Exemplo: Yes, I do. I enjoy chatting with friends because it cheers me up when I feel lonely, and it helps us keep our relationship strong. For example, after a stressful week I often call a close friend and we talk for an hour, which always makes me feel better.

Sugestão: Give a clear topic sentence then specific topics and one brief example. Minimize hesitations and grammar errors (use correct word order: "how things are going"). Use linking words like "usually" and "for example" to structure your answer.

Exemplo: Usually we talk about how things are going in our lives and work. For example, we often share updates about projects at the office and sometimes gossip about company news, especially when we meet after a long day.

Sugestão: Begin with a direct statement of preference, then give specific reasons and an example. Correct small errors ("introverted", "because there are so many eyes on me"). Limit to two or three sentences and use a linking phrase like "for example".

Exemplo: I prefer talking with one friend because I'm a bit introverted and feel stressed in large groups. For example, in a group I often struggle to start a conversation because I feel everyone's attention is on me.

Sugestão: State your preference clearly, then give a concise and specific reason. Fix grammar ("a social media interview", "I couldn't see her face clearly") and avoid repetition. Use linking words like "because" and keep it within two sentences.

Exemplo: I prefer face-to-face communication because I find it easier to read facial expressions and feel more comfortable. For example, during an online interview I couldn't see the interviewer clearly and felt more anxious than speaking in person.

Sugestão: This answer is unclear and contradictory ("I really do" then saying arguing is unnecessary). Decide whether you argue or not, then explain briefly with a reason and an example. Use linking words like "because" and avoid repeating the same idea.

Exemplo: I try not to argue with close friends because I believe arguments can damage the relationship and take a long time to fix. For example, when we disagree, we usually pause the discussion and talk calmly later to resolve it without hurting each other.

× Yes, I I'd like to do so because chatting with friends is very helpful to me when I feel sad or lonely and I think it's a good opportunity to renew your relationship with your friends and besides that, I feel quite excited about it because.

✓ Yes, I'd like to, because chatting with friends is very helpful when I feel sad or lonely. I think it is a good opportunity to renew relationships with friends, and it also makes me feel excited.

The original contains run-on sentences, repetition and an incomplete clause ending with 'because'. This is a sentence structure error: multiple independent clauses are joined without proper punctuation or conjunctions. Suggestions: split long sentences into shorter ones, remove redundant words (your/with your friends) and complete clauses. Use 'I'd' once and avoid trailing conjunctions like 'because' without a following clause.

× Uh, when I'm met with my friends, we usually talk about how is it going lately and, and uh, maybe gossip some news in our company.

✓ Uh, when I meet my friends, we usually talk about how things are going lately and maybe gossip about news at our company.

'I'm met with my friends' is incorrect passive/continuous use; use present simple 'I meet' for habitual actions. 'How is it going lately' has incorrect word order for embedded question; use 'how things are going'. 'Gossip some news' needs preposition 'about' and 'news' pairs with 'about'. These are errors involving incorrect verb forms and preposition use; suggestions: use simple present for habits and correct verb patterns: 'gossip about something'.

× It's a very good way for us to do the leisure talk, especially in, in after whole day.

✓ It's a good way for us to have leisure conversations, especially after a long day.

'Do the leisure talk' is unnatural; use 'have leisure conversations' or 'chat'. 'In after whole day' is wrong preposition/order; use 'after a long day'. Suggestion: use common collocations ('after a long day', 'have a conversation') and correct prepositions.

× I prefer to chat with one friend because I'm a little bit introvert.

✓ I prefer to chat with one friend because I'm a little bit introverted.

'Introvert' is a noun; here an adjective 'introverted' is required. This is a pronoun/adjective category error; suggestion: use correct adjective form for personality descriptions.

× For example, when I talk with a group of friends or I'm hanging out with them, I will feel quite stressed I I don't know where to start to chat with them 'cause so many eyes are on me so.

✓ For example, when I talk with a group of friends or hang out with them, I feel quite stressed because I don't know where to start the conversation—so many eyes are on me.

The original is a run-on with repetition, tense mismatches ('I will feel' vs habitual) and informal contractions. Correct by using present simple for habitual feelings, remove duplicate words, use 'because' properly and replace 'so' at the end with a full clause. Suggestions: use clear sentence boundaries and consistent tense.

× A Well, I prefer to communicate face to face.

✓ Well, I prefer to communicate face to face.

The initial 'A' is an extraneous article/utterance; remove it. Article misuse/extra words cause confusion. Suggestion: avoid filler letters and start with 'Well'.

× And for example, I used to have a Internet or social media interview and I cannot, I cannot look her face through the through the media, through the camera.

✓ For example, I had an interview over the internet or on social media, and I couldn't see her face through the camera.

Errors: 'a Internet' should be 'an internet' or 'the internet' (article error); 'used to have' implies past habit—'had' is clearer for a specific event; 'look her face' is incorrect verb-object order and verb choice—use 'see her face'. Repetition 'through the through the' is redundant. Suggestion: use correct articles with vowel sounds ('an internet') and correct verb patterns ('see someone's face').

× So I feel much more anxious than meet with a man in person.

✓ So I feel much more anxious than when meeting someone in person.

'Than meet with a man in person' is ungrammatical: missing conjunction 'when' and awkward noun 'a man' (gender-specific). Use 'someone' and parallel structure 'than when meeting'. Suggestions: ensure comparative clauses are complete and use neutral nouns.

× Well, I really do so because I think it's quite unnecessary to argue with your intimate friends because I think it does harm to your relationship and you have to spend lots of time to amend that kind of relationship with your friends, so.

✓ Well, I don't really argue with close friends because I think it's unnecessary and can harm the relationship, and you may have to spend a lot of time repairing it.

Original has conflicting phrasing 'I really do so' vs context; likely intended 'I don't'. 'Intimate friends' is unnatural—use 'close friends'. 'Does harm to your relationship' should be 'can harm the relationship'. 'Have to spend lots of time to amend' should be 'may have to spend a lot of time repairing'. Modal and lexical choice errors: use appropriate negation and modal verbs ('may'). Suggestions: state position clearly, use 'repair' or 'restore' for relationships, and use 'may' to indicate possibility.