Chatting— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons using linking words. Avoid redundancy and long awkward phrases.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends. For example, I often message them when I can't meet in person so we can stay connected, share updates about our day, and support each other.

Sugestão: Give a focused topic sentence and specific examples. Use linking words like 'for example' and avoid vague or repetitive phrases.

Exemplo: We usually talk about our daily routines and recent experiences. For example, I might tell them about a strange thing that happened at work, and they share plans for the weekend.

Sugestão: Make the comparison clearer with a direct topic sentence and linked reasons. Use correct grammar for comparisons and provide one clear example of each preference.

Exemplo: It depends, but I prefer one-on-one chats when I need support. For instance, if I'm upset I will message a close friend so we can have a focused conversation; however, I enjoy group chats for planning events because more people can join the discussion.

Sugestão: Express your preference clearly and politely. Avoid awkward or self-deprecating phrases like 'feel the same fool.' Give one or two concise reasons and a short example of how social media helps you.

Exemplo: I prefer communicating via social media because I feel more comfortable expressing myself in messages. For example, on WhatsApp I can think before I reply and share photos or voice notes, which makes conversations easier for me.

Sugestão: Be concise and clear about the reason for arguments. Use appropriate vocabulary (e.g. 'discuss' or 'have disagreements') and give a specific example of a recent disagreement and its outcome.

Exemplo: Yes, I sometimes have disagreements with my friends, but they are usually constructive. For example, we argued once about how to split tasks for a group project, and after discussing it calmly we agreed on a fair plan.

× Definitely yes, I like to chat with my friends as chatting is the online as well as the modern type of conversation with other individuals.

✓ Definitely yes, I like to chat with my friends because chatting is an online and modern type of conversation with other people.

Used 'the online' and 'the modern' incorrectly; articles not needed before uncountable or general nouns here. 'Other individuals' is correct but 'other people' is more natural. Also 'as' changed to 'because' for clarity and natural connection.

× So whenever I am not present with my friends so at that time I prefer to chat with them as it helps me to stay connected with them as well as also to share my experiences with them.

✓ So whenever I am not with my friends, I prefer to chat with them because it helps me stay connected and share my experiences.

Redundant conjunctions 'so' and 'as well as also' create awkward repetition. 'Present with' is unnatural; use 'with'. Removed repetition and tightened sentence for clarity.

× Well, there are a lot of things and the conversation that we can talk with each other.

✓ Well, there are a lot of topics that we can talk about with each other.

Phrase 'the conversation that we can talk with each other' is ungrammatical. Use 'topics that we can talk about' or 'things we can talk about' to form correct object of 'talk'.

× First and foremost one is the daily routines that we often experience in our daily life.

✓ First and foremost, our daily routines are something we often talk about.

Awkward and repetitive phrasing 'daily routines...in our daily life'. Reworded to avoid repetition and make adjective-noun relationship clear.

× We often like to share our new experiences that we faced all over the day and also what happened throughout the day and what we have thought about the particular future day.

✓ We often like to share new experiences we had during the day, what happened, and our thoughts about the upcoming day.

Mixed tenses and awkward phrases: 'faced all over the day' incorrect; use simple past 'had' for experiences during the day. 'Particular future day' is unclear; use 'upcoming day'. Consolidated list with parallel structure.

× Well, my mind serves me in the two type when whenever I am sad or thinking about the one thing then I prefer to talk or conversate with the only one friend.

✓ Well, my mind works in two ways: when I am sad or thinking about one thing, I prefer to talk with only one friend.

Phrases 'serves me in the two type' and 'the only one friend' are incorrect. Use 'works in two ways' and 'only one friend'. 'Conversate' is nonstandard; use 'talk' or 'converse'.

× That as the chatting with only one can help to focus on the particular task.

✓ Chatting with only one person can help me focus on a particular issue.

Sentence fragment 'That as the' is ungrammatical. 'One' should be 'one person'. 'Task' may be 'issue' or 'topic' depending on context. Rephrased to complete sentence.

× But it can be challenging to chat with others.

✓ However, it can be challenging to chat in groups.

Original sentence is grammatically possible but vague. Clarified meaning by specifying 'in groups' to contrast with previous sentence about one-on-one chats.

× Well, I like to conversate through the social media platform as whenever I talk to an individual by face to face then I often feel the same fool and quite a not comfortable to talk.

✓ Well, I like to converse through social media platforms because when I speak to someone face-to-face I often feel awkward and not very comfortable.

'Conversate' nonstandard; use 'converse'. 'By face to face' is incorrect; use 'face-to-face'. 'Feel the same fool' is incorrect and unclear; use 'feel awkward'. Adjusted word order and collocations.

× But whenever I send a message on through the social media platforms such as Instagram, WhatsApp then I can be able to share my all the experiences as well as also other thoughts.

✓ But when I send messages through social media platforms such as Instagram and WhatsApp, I can share all my experiences and other thoughts.

Removed incorrect preposition 'on through' and unnecessary modal phrase 'can be able to'. 'My all the experiences' is wrong order; use 'all my experiences'. Simplified for natural English.

× Definitely yes are you firmly argue with my friends as they are very close to me and I often make any discussion on any topic to avoid the distraction from other things with our bonding as well as also I usually make argument with them as they help me to share all the experiences that had occurred in our life.

✓ Definitely yes, I often argue with my friends because they are very close to me; we discuss many topics to strengthen our bond, and arguing helps us share experiences that happen in our lives.

Original sentence contains many errors: 'are you firmly argue' makes no sense; removed and rephrased. 'Make any discussion on any topic' is unnatural; use 'discuss many topics'. 'Make argument' should be 'argue' or 'have arguments'. Corrected tense to 'happen' instead of past perfect 'had occurred' for general statements.