Chatting— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Снижайте количество пауз и слов-паразитов (например, «uh», «as for me») и говорите более плавно. Начните с чёткой тематической фразы, затем добавьте 1–2 конкретных объяснения с логическими связками (because, so, for example). Следите за правильным употреблением предлогов и словообразованием (например, «stay connected», «discuss different problems»). Ограничьте ответ до 3–4 предложений.

Exemplo: I enjoy chatting with friends because it helps me stay connected. For example, we discuss daily problems and share advice, so we can solve issues quickly. Also, chatting is convenient since we can talk from anywhere.

Sugestão: Уточните тему и используйте более точные формулировки. Избегайте повтора «uh» и исправьте ошибки в словах и структурах (например, «I study at university», «exchange information», «easy to get solutions»). Добавьте связку (for example, because) и один конкретный пример вместо общих фраз.

Exemplo: I usually talk about university work because we need to exchange information about different subjects. For example, we compare notes and help each other solve difficult assignments, which makes studying easier.

Sugestão: Уберите лишние слова и повторы («I need I need», «chatty chat»). Начните с прямого ответа («I prefer to chat one-on-one») и дайте 1–2 конкретных причин с логическими связками (because, so). Употребляйте корректную грамматику (например, «be more accurate», «understand his feelings»).

Exemplo: I prefer to chat one-on-one because I can concentrate better and express myself more accurately. Also, talking privately helps me understand my friend’s emotions and respond more appropriately.

Sugestão: Используйте простую и правильную структуру: начните с чёткого предпочтения и объясните почему. Избегайте неверной грамматики («I'm preferred», «advices») и лишних повторов. Используйте слово «because» и приведите конкретный пример о невербальной коммуникации (facial expressions, tone).

Exemplo: I prefer face-to-face communication because I can read facial expressions and tone of voice. For instance, if a friend seems upset I can notice it immediately and offer advice or comfort.

Sugestão: Говорите яснее и избегайте «dis argue» — правильнее «disagree». Дайте ясный ответ и объяснение с примерами: когда и почему возникают споры. Уберите слова-паразиты и используйте связки (sometimes, because, for example). Включите конкретную причину (different opinions, backgrounds).

Exemplo: Yes, sometimes I disagree with friends because we have different opinions and backgrounds. For example, we might argue about politics or plans for the weekend, but we usually resolve it by listening to each other.

× As for me, I like to, As for me, I like chatting with friends.

✓ As for me, I like chatting with friends.

The repetition 'As for me, I like to, As for me' is redundant and the clause 'I like to' is incomplete without a verb complement. Remove the duplicate and use the gerund 'chatting' to express preference. Suggestion: say 'As for me, I like chatting with friends.'

× I think the easiest way to, uh, stay connection with them.

✓ I think the easiest way to stay connected with them.

The noun 'connection' is incorrect here; the adjective 'connected' should be used after 'stay'. Also use 'stay connected with' rather than 'stay connection with'. Suggestion: use the adjective form 'connected' after 'stay'.

× Uh, we can easily, uh, discuss about different problems, issues and solve some of them.

✓ We can easily discuss different problems and issues and solve some of them.

The verb 'discuss' is not followed by 'about' in standard English; 'discuss' takes a direct object. Remove 'about'. Also streamline punctuation. Suggestion: use 'discuss different problems' without 'about'.

× And I think it, it is really comfortable for everyone because you easily can stay where you are.

✓ And I think it is really convenient for everyone because you can easily stay where you are.

'Easily can' is incorrect word order; modal verbs and auxiliaries should precede adverbs like 'easily' or the adverb should follow the auxiliary: 'can easily'. Also 'comfortable' fits less well than 'convenient' in this context. Suggestion: use 'can easily' and prefer 'convenient'.

× I usually chat with my friends about study because I uh, studied university and I need to exchange our information about different subjects uh, because it's easily to uh sell to get a solution in different issues and problems.

✓ I usually chat with my friends about our studies because I studied at university and I need to exchange information about different subjects, because it's easy to get a solution to various issues.

Use 'studies' (plural) or 'my studies' for the noun; 'studied university' is missing the preposition 'at' and sounds non-native. 'It's easily' is wrong: use the adjective 'easy'. 'Sell to get' is incorrect and likely 'easy to get' was intended. Also 'solution in different issues' should be 'solution to various issues'. Suggestion: use 'studied at university', 'exchange information', and 'easy to get a solution to'.

× And I prefer chatty chat with only one friend because I need I need more concentrate when and I also more accurate in my sentences when I chat only with my friend and I understand the his feelings, his emotions and moods.

✓ I prefer chatting with only one friend because I need to concentrate more, and I am also more accurate in my sentences when I chat with just one friend, and I understand his feelings, emotions, and mood.

'Prefer chatty chat' is incorrect; use 'prefer chatting'. 'I need I need more concentrate' should be 'I need to concentrate more'. 'I also more accurate' needs a verb: 'I am also more accurate'. 'the his' is wrong: use 'his'. Use singular 'mood' or 'moods' consistently; 'mood' fits better. Suggestion: use infinitive 'to concentrate', add 'am' for adjectives, and correct pronoun usage.

× To be convinced, I'm preferred to communicate face to face because I evaluate the emotions of my partner and I understand what they feel at the moment and I can suggest to him some advices maybe that help them, that help him.

✓ To be honest, I prefer to communicate face to face because I can evaluate my partner's emotions and I understand how they feel in the moment, and I can give him some advice that may help him.

'To be convinced' is unnatural; use 'To be honest'. 'I'm preferred' is wrong: use 'I prefer'. 'Evaluate the emotions of my partner' is acceptable but 'evaluate my partner's emotions' is more natural. 'Understand what they feel' should be 'understand how they feel'. 'Suggest to him some advices' is incorrect: 'advise' or 'give him some advice' (advice is uncountable). Keep pronouns consistent: 'him' or 'them'. Suggestion: use 'I prefer', 'give advice', and consistent pronouns.

× So I think that it this type of communication is.

✓ So I think that this type of communication is better.

The original is ungrammatical and incomplete ('that it this type ... is'). Complete the sentence by stating a comparison or opinion, e.g., 'is better' or 'is preferable'. Suggestion: finish the clause with an adjective like 'better' or 'more effective'.

× I argue with friends and sometimes I'm dis argue with friends because I think it is, uh, depends on uh, yourself and your friends because you, you and your friends have different types of horizons on this, uh, world and you have their impression.

✓ I argue with friends and sometimes I disagree with them because I think it depends on you and your friends: you and your friends have different perspectives on the world and different impressions.

'I'm dis argue' is incorrect; use 'I disagree'. 'Depends on yourself' is wrong; use 'depends on you'. 'Different types of horizons' is unnatural; use 'different perspectives'. 'You have their impression' is unclear; 'different impressions' or 'different views' is better. Suggestion: use 'disagree', 'depends on you', and 'perspectives' or 'views'.