Chatting— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more concise and natural: start with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition, and add one specific detail about why you enjoy chatting. Use one or two linking words if needed.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy chatting with friends, especially my best friend, because we can share personal news and support each other. For example, I often text her about my day and we send short videos or reels to comment on together.

Sugestão: Give a clear topic sentence and specific, relevant details. Avoid vague or unclear phrases, filler words, and pronunciation errors. Use linking words (e.g., 'now', 'for example') to show time shift from past to present.

Exemplo: When I was at school, we mainly discussed finishing assignments, but now we usually share funny videos and talk about recent events. For example, we send each other reels and then message about the funniest parts.

Sugestão: Begin with a direct statement of preference, then give two clear reasons using linking words (because, however). Correct small grammar mistakes and keep it concise.

Exemplo: I prefer chatting with one friend rather than a group because group chats can be confusing and messages often get lost. For example, in one-on-one chats I can focus on the conversation and respond more quickly.

Sugestão: State your preference clearly and give specific reasons. Avoid mentioning the wrong platform if you mean in-person; say 'in person' instead of 'Facebook'. Use linking words and correct grammar (e.g., 'matters to me').

Exemplo: I prefer face-to-face communication because seeing someone's facial expressions helps me understand their reaction and emotions. For instance, when discussing a sensitive topic I find it easier to judge their response in person.

Sugestão: Answer directly, then give a specific example of a typical disagreement and how you resolve it. Avoid filler words and finish your sentences. Use linking words like 'often' and 'for example' to structure your response.

Exemplo: Yes, I sometimes argue with friends, usually when we have different opinions on subjects like plans or values. For example, we recently disagreed about how to spend our holiday, but we resolved it by discussing our priorities and compromising on a plan.

× Yes, I do like chatting with friends, especially with my best friend.

✓ Yes, I like chatting with friends, especially my best friend.

Using 'do' for emphasis is unnecessary in a simple present statement; remove 'do' for natural speech. Keep present tense to express general preference.

× I can text her regarding anything and anything that happened to me in my home.

✓ I can text her about anything that happens to me at home.

Use 'about' not 'regarding' for informal speech; use present simple 'happens' for habitual events and 'at home' is the correct preposition.

× I can also send her reels and we can talk about the specific topic in the text.

✓ I can also send her reels and we can talk about specific topics in the chat.

Use plural 'topics' to match general meaning and 'chat' is more natural than 'text'; 'specific' does not need 'the' here when speaking generally.

× Umm, I used to chat about the completion of assignments in my school days but in the present we share wheels to each other and umm talk about speci that specific real and laugh about it.

✓ I used to chat about finishing assignments during my school days, but now we share reels with each other and talk about those reels and laugh about them.

Use 'used to' for past habit about school. Replace 'completion of assignments' with 'finishing assignments' for naturalness. 'In the present' -> 'now'. 'Share reels with each other' is correct; 'reels' plural and refer back with 'those reels' and plural pronoun 'them'.

× I prefer to chat with only one friend instead of group of people because a texting too many people at once is quite difficult as you miss the catch of what you were interacting about.

✓ I prefer to chat with only one friend instead of a group of people because texting too many people at once is quite difficult; you miss the point of what you were talking about.

Add the article 'a' before 'group of people'. Remove unnecessary 'a' before 'texting'. Replace 'miss the catch' with idiomatic 'miss the point' and 'interacting about' with 'talking about'.

× But if you're talking with one friend and it, it is easy to stay online.

✓ But if you are talking with one friend, it is easier to stay online.

Remove duplicate filler 'it, it' and use comparative 'easier' to compare staying online with one friend versus many.

× I prefer to communicate face to face rather than social media because I want to see their facial reaction when I talk about anything and their opinion and facial expression really matters us when I'm talking.

✓ I prefer to communicate face to face rather than via social media because I want to see their facial reactions when I talk; their opinions and facial expressions really matter to me when I'm talking.

Use 'via social media' as the correct preposition. 'Facial reactions' plural matches people; use 'opinions' plural. 'Matter to me' is correct phrase instead of 'matters us'.

× That's why I prefer Facebook.

✓ That's why I prefer Facebook.

Sentence is grammatically correct; no article needed before the proper noun 'Facebook'. Included here as confirmation rather than change.

× There is no one who you don't argue with.

✓ There is no one you don't argue with.

Omit 'who' after 'no one' in informal speech; original sentence is awkward—better: 'There's no one you never argue with' or the correction provided for clarity.

× I obviously argue with friends especially on a topic which we have a dis different perspective.

✓ I obviously argue with friends, especially on topics where we have different perspectives.

Use plural 'topics' and 'different perspectives' to match plural subjects; remove extra word 'dis' and correct word order.

× And recently I had a fight with my best friends umm due to the difference in our perspective it regarding the.

✓ Recently I had a fight with my best friend because of differences in our perspectives.

Use 'recently' without 'and' to start sentence. Use singular 'best friend' if referring to one person. 'Because of differences in our perspectives' is a clear, grammatical phrase; remove trailing fragments.