Rules— Part 1 Relatório
Conversa
Part 1
Examinador
Are there any rules for students at your school?
Candidato
No, they aren't, because now I'm a university student, so there's no room for us to where we can decide what we want to wear every day, and I think it's quite comfortable for me.
Examinador
Do you think students would benefit more from more rules?
Candidato
No, I don't think so, because in this day and age, personality and special characteristics are always prioritized. So I think people should decide what they want to show their own personality.
Examinador
Do you have a teacher who does his or her job very well?
Candidato
Yes, I do, and she's my English teacher. She used to be my English teachers when I was a high school student, and she did not only teach me about English, but also about life and how to behave the right way, and I appreciate that.
Avaliação
Total
Part 1
Are there any rules for students at your school?
Pontuação: 65.0Sugestão: Câu trả lời của bạn hơi dài và có một số lỗi ngữ pháp, ví dụ như 'there's no room for us to where we can decide' không rõ nghĩa. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, rõ ràng và sử dụng câu ngắn gọn, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và diễn đạt tự nhiên hơn.
Exemplo: No, there aren't many rules at my university. For example, we can choose what to wear every day, which I find very comfortable.
Do you think students would benefit more from more rules?
Pontuação: 75.0Sugestão: Bạn đã trả lời khá rõ ràng và có ý kiến cá nhân, tuy nhiên câu trả lời có thể được cải thiện bằng cách sử dụng từ nối để liên kết các ý và thêm ví dụ cụ thể để làm rõ quan điểm.
Exemplo: No, I don't think more rules would help students. Nowadays, individuality is important, so students should have the freedom to express their personality through their choices, like their clothing or hobbies.
Do you have a teacher who does his or her job very well?
Pontuação: 70.0Sugestão: Câu trả lời của bạn có nội dung tốt nhưng có lỗi ngữ pháp như 'she used to be my English teachers' (số nhiều). Bạn nên dùng câu ngắn gọn, chính xác và thêm từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.
Exemplo: Yes, I have an English teacher who did a great job. She taught me not only English but also important life lessons, which I really appreciate.
Gramática
× No, they aren't, because now I'm a university student, so there's no room for us to where we can decide what we want to wear every day, and I think it's quite comfortable for me.
✓ No, there aren't, because now I'm a university student, so there's no room for us where we can decide what we want to wear every day, and I think it's quite comfortable for me.
The phrase 'No, they aren't' is incorrect because 'they' does not refer to any plural noun previously mentioned. The correct form is 'No, there aren't' to indicate the absence of rules. Also, 'to where' is incorrect; 'where' alone suffices. This is a 'There be' issue because the sentence incorrectly uses 'they' instead of 'there' to indicate existence or absence.
× She used to be my English teachers when I was a high school student, and she did not only teach me about English, but also about life and how to behave the right way, and I appreciate that.
✓ She used to be my English teacher when I was a high school student, and she did not only teach me about English, but also about life and how to behave the right way, and I appreciate that.
The word 'teachers' is plural, but the subject 'she' is singular, so the noun should be singular 'teacher' to agree with the singular pronoun. This is a singular and plural issue involving noun number agreement.
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