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Part 1

Examinador

Are there any rules for students at your school?

Candidato

Yes, there are many rules at my school, for example, we can't bring phones from from home because the film will distract we arts from the.

Examinador

Do you think students would benefit more from more rules?

Candidato

Yes, because the the student. The student is teenager and and the role is necessary for students to to restrict their behaviour.

Examinador

Do you have a teacher who does his or her job very well?

Candidato

MMM yes, my English teacher does her job very well. She's very patient and kind. She always always touch us some problem in a way.

Avaliação

Total

Total: 5.0Fluência e coerência: 5.5Pronúncia: 5.0Gramática: 5.0Recurso lexical: 5.0

Part 1

Are there any rules for students at your school?

Pontuação: 50.0

Sugestão: 你的回答中有语法错误和表达不清晰的问题,例如“the film will distract we arts from the”这句话不通顺。建议你在回答时注意语法正确,表达清晰,避免重复词汇,并且尽量用完整的句子说明原因。

Exemplo: Yes, there are many rules at my school. For example, students are not allowed to bring phones from home because they can distract us from our studies.

Do you think students would benefit more from more rules?

Pontuação: 40.0

Sugestão: 你的回答中存在重复词汇和语法错误,表达不够连贯。建议你在回答时使用完整的句子,避免重复,并且用连接词使句子更流畅,同时具体说明原因。

Exemplo: Yes, I think more rules would benefit students because teenagers sometimes lack self-discipline, so rules are necessary to guide and restrict their behaviour.

Do you have a teacher who does his or her job very well?

Pontuação: 45.0

Sugestão: 你的回答中有重复词汇和表达不完整的问题,例如“touch us some problem in a way”不清楚。建议你使用准确的词汇表达,并且用连接词丰富句子,使表达更自然流畅。

Exemplo: Yes, my English teacher does her job very well. She is very patient and kind, and she always explains difficult problems to us in a clear and helpful way.

Gramática

Incorrect use of pronouns

× we can't bring phones from from home because the film will distract we arts from the.

we can't bring phones from home because the film will distract us at the arts.

句中使用了错误的代词“we”,应使用宾格“us”。此外,句子中有重复的“from”,应删除一个。正确使用代词能使句子更通顺。

Singular and plural issue

× the the student. The student is teenager and and the role is necessary for students to to restrict their behaviour.

the student. The student is a teenager and the rule is necessary for students to restrict their behaviour.

“student”前多余重复“the”,应删除。“teenager”前缺少冠词“a”。“role”应为“rule”,表示规则。重复词语应删除。

Incorrect use of pronouns

× She always always touch us some problem in a way.

She always explains some problems to us in a way.

“touch us some problem”表达不正确,应改为“explains some problems to us”。“touch”用法错误,且“problem”应为复数“problems”。重复“always”应删除一个。

Vocabulário

ManyNumerous; A great/good deal of
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