Rules— Part 1 Relatório
Conversa
Part 1
Examinador
Are there any rules for students at your school?
Candidato
Yes, my school has several important tools, but one of the most important rules is discipline. Discipline is one of the main reasons for great success in life. For example, being punctual to a meeting can improve your impression on others.
Examinador
Do you think students would benefit more from more rules?
Candidato
No, I certainly do not agree that students would benefit from more rules. Rules are regulation that I have to be followed in a very strict manner. This makes the student feel constrained.
Examinador
Do you have a teacher who does his or her job very well?
Candidato
Yes, my English teacher does her job really well. She makes sure that every one of the students understands each and every word. She always helps one to cope up with anything they've missed upon. This teacher is very sweet and kind hearted.
Avaliação
Total
Part 1
Are there any rules for students at your school?
Pontuação: 75.0Sugestão: Your answer is generally clear but contains a vocabulary error ('tools' instead of 'rules') and could be more concise. Try to directly address the question with correct terms and avoid redundancy. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.
Exemplo: Yes, my school has several important rules, and one of the most important is discipline. This is because discipline helps students succeed in life. For instance, being punctual to meetings creates a good impression on others.
Do you think students would benefit more from more rules?
Pontuação: 70.0Sugestão: Your answer addresses the question but has grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Use plural forms correctly and improve sentence structure. Also, add linking words to make your reasoning clearer.
Exemplo: No, I do not think students would benefit from more rules because rules are regulations that must be followed strictly. As a result, students may feel constrained and less free to express themselves.
Do you have a teacher who does his or her job very well?
Pontuação: 80.0Sugestão: Your answer is good but can be improved by using more natural expressions and avoiding awkward phrases like 'cope up with'. Also, use linking words to connect your points smoothly.
Exemplo: Yes, my English teacher does her job very well. She ensures that every student understands the lessons clearly. Moreover, she always helps students catch up on anything they have missed. She is very kind and supportive.
Gramática
× Rules are regulation that I have to be followed in a very strict manner.
✓ Rules are regulations that have to be followed in a very strict manner.
The word 'regulation' should be plural 'regulations' to agree with the plural subject 'Rules'. Also, 'I have to be followed' is incorrect because 'rules' are followed, not 'I'. The correct phrase is 'have to be followed'. This correction ensures subject-verb agreement and proper pluralization.
× She always helps one to cope up with anything they've missed upon.
✓ She always helps one to cope with anything they've missed.
The phrase 'cope up with' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'cope with'. Also, 'missed upon' is incorrect; the correct phrase is simply 'missed'. Removing 'up' and 'upon' corrects the prepositional errors and makes the sentence grammatically correct.
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