Rules— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer has some grammar mistakes and unclear phrases, such as 'laws in school instruments' and 'wearing a specific crease'. Try to use clearer and correct vocabulary, and structure your sentences properly. Also, avoid redundancy and keep your answer concise within 5 sentences.

Exemplo: Yes, there are several rules that students must follow at my school. For example, we have to wear a specific uniform and show respect to senior students. These rules help maintain discipline and create a good learning environment.

Sugestão: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and unclear, especially the phrase 'get the right stuff'. Try to use linking words to connect your ideas and provide specific reasons why more rules could benefit students. Also, avoid vague expressions and be more precise.

Exemplo: Yes, I believe students would benefit from having more rules at school because it helps them understand discipline better. Moreover, clear rules can create a safer and more organized environment, which is important for effective learning.

Sugestão: Your answer contains grammatical errors and unclear expressions like 'lectured in a concerts way'. Try to use correct verb forms and clearer vocabulary. Also, organize your answer with linking words to make it coherent and concise.

Exemplo: Yes, I have a teacher who does his job very well. He takes good care of the class and supports us when we need help. Additionally, he teaches in an organized and clear manner, which makes learning easier.

× There are several laws in school instruments should follow them such as wearing a specific crease or respected the senior.

✓ There are several rules in school that students should follow, such as wearing a specific uniform or respecting the seniors.

The original sentence lacks proper conjunctions and has incorrect word choices like 'laws' instead of 'rules', 'instruments' instead of 'students', 'crease' instead of 'uniform', and 'respected' instead of 'respect'. The sentence structure is incorrect and confusing. To improve, use correct vocabulary and connect clauses properly with 'that'.

× This rules are include in school.

✓ These rules are included in the school.

'This' is singular but 'rules' is plural, so 'these' should be used. Also, 'include' should be in past participle form 'included' to form the passive voice. The article 'the' is needed before 'school'.

× Yes, I think that a student would benefit from having rules in the school.

✓ Yes, I think that students would benefit from having rules in the school.

The sentence talks generally about students, so plural 'students' is more appropriate than singular 'a student'.

× They are likely to maintain it and they know about the discipline as well.

✓ They are likely to maintain it and know about discipline as well.

The phrase 'know about the discipline' is awkward; 'know about discipline' is more natural. Also, 'they' is repeated unnecessarily before 'know'.

× And having more rules in school is essential for students to get the right stuff.

✓ And having more rules in school is essential for students to learn the right things.

'Get the right stuff' is informal and vague. 'Learn the right things' is clearer and more appropriate in this context.

× Yes I have a teacher who does he do pretty well.

✓ Yes, I have a teacher who does his job pretty well.

The phrase 'who does he do' is incorrect. The relative pronoun 'who' should be followed by a verb phrase without repeating the subject pronoun. 'Does his job' is clearer and grammatically correct.

× He take care of his class also he take care of us and he lectured in a concerts way or organized he teaches.

✓ He takes care of his class and also takes care of us. He lectures in a concise and organized way.

The verbs 'take' should be 'takes' to agree with the third person singular subject 'He'. 'Lectured' should be present tense 'lectures' to match the context. 'Concerts way' is incorrect; likely meant 'concise way'. The sentence is also run-on and needs to be split for clarity.