RulesPart 1 Relatório

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Part 1

Examinador

Are there any rules for students at your school?

Candidato

Yes, there are. There are many rules for students in my school, such as students cannot put leaders on the floor and we should turn off the lights and the air conditioners when we leave the classroom.

Examinador

Do you think students would benefit more from more rules?

Candidato

Yes, of course. I really think students will benefit more from rules for they will make make themselves more self-control and they will be more help.

Examinador

Do you have a teacher who does his or her job very well?

Candidato

Yes, I think my English teacher did her job very well. Then I was a student because my English teacher is very responsible for our learning and she always helped us when we need some help.

Avaliação

Total

Total: 5.0Fluência e coerência: 5.5Pronúncia: 5.0Gramática: 5.0Recurso lexical: 5.0

Part 1

Are there any rules for students at your school?

Pontuação: 65.0

Sugestão: 回答中存在表达不清和用词错误,如“put leaders on the floor”不符合语境,且句子结构较为简单,建议使用更准确的词汇和简洁的句子表达规则内容。

Exemplo: Yes, there are several rules at my school. For example, students are not allowed to place their belongings on the floor, and we must turn off the lights and air conditioners when leaving the classroom.

Do you think students would benefit more from more rules?

Pontuação: 50.0

Sugestão: 回答中语法错误较多,如“make make themselves more self-control”和“they will be more help”表达不准确,建议使用正确的语法结构和更具体的理由来支持观点。

Exemplo: Yes, I believe more rules can help students develop better self-discipline and improve their behavior, which benefits their learning and personal growth.

Do you have a teacher who does his or her job very well?

Pontuação: 55.0

Sugestão: 回答中时态使用不当,如“did her job”与“Then I was a student”不连贯,且表达不够流畅,建议使用一致的时态和更自然的表达方式。

Exemplo: Yes, I have an English teacher who does her job very well. She is very responsible and always helps us whenever we need assistance.

Gramática

Singular and plural issue

× students cannot put leaders on the floor

students cannot put their leaders on the floor

这里的 'leaders' 应该是复数形式,但缺少了所有格 'their',表示学生不能把他们的领导放在地上。需要加上所有格以明确所属关系。

Incorrect use of pronouns

× we should turn off the lights and the air conditioners when we leave the classroom

we should turn off the lights and air conditioners when we leave the classroom

这里 'the air conditioners' 中的定冠词 'the' 可以省略,因为是泛指教室里的空调。

Modal verb usage

× students will benefit more from rules for they will make make themselves more self-control and they will be more help

students will benefit more from rules because they will make themselves more self-controlled and they will be more helpful

这里 'for' 用法不当,应改为 'because' 表示原因。'make make' 是重复错误,应删除一个。'self-control' 应为形容词 'self-controlled','more help' 应为形容词 'more helpful'。

Past tense issue

× I think my English teacher did her job very well. Then I was a student because my English teacher is very responsible for our learning and she always helped us when we need some help

I think my English teacher does her job very well. I was a student because my English teacher is very responsible for our learning and she always helped us when we needed some help

这里时态不一致。'did' 应改为现在时 'does',因为老师现在仍然表现很好。'Then I was a student' 语义不清,改为 'I was a student'。'need' 应改为过去时 'needed',因为描述过去的情况。

Vocabulário

ManyNumerous; A great/good deal of
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