Rules— Part 1 Relatório
Conversa
Part 1
Examinador
Are there any rules for students at your school?
Candidato
Yes, of course there must be some rules for students to keep their study efficiency. For example, we need to scan a QR code before every classes and if we do not do that, we need we maybe there may be some punishment for us, so it motivates us to attend the classes.
Examinador
Do you think students would benefit more from more rules?
Candidato
Yes, I think the rules could benefit them because they are not mature enough to control and regulate themselves and the rules could give them guidance. However, if the rules there are too many rules, the efficiency would be low.
Examinador
Do you have a teacher who does his or her job very well?
Candidato
Yes, my maths teacher in junior high school was very responsible for us. For instance, there is a time when I was not interested in studying maths. She perceived that and gave me much encouragement. Also, she gave me some additional classes.
Avaliação
Total
Part 1
Are there any rules for students at your school?
Pontuação: 70.0Sugestão: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不够自然，且有重复和犹豫的词汇。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，使用更准确的表达。
Exemplo: Yes, there are several rules at my school to help maintain study efficiency. For instance, we have to scan a QR code before each class, and if we fail to do so, there might be penalties. This rule encourages us to attend classes regularly.
Do you think students would benefit more from more rules?
Pontuação: 75.0Sugestão: 回答内容较好，但句子结构稍显重复，且衔接词使用不够自然。建议使用更流畅的连接词，并避免重复表达。
Exemplo: Yes, I believe rules can benefit students since they may lack maturity to self-regulate. However, if there are too many rules, it might reduce their efficiency and motivation.
Do you have a teacher who does his or her job very well?
Pontuação: 80.0Sugestão: 回答较完整且内容具体，但部分表达略显生硬。建议使用更自然的表达方式，并适当使用连接词使内容更连贯。
Exemplo: Yes, my junior high school math teacher was very responsible. For example, when I lost interest in math, she noticed and encouraged me a lot. Moreover, she offered extra classes to help me improve.
Gramática
× For example, we need to scan a QR code before every classes and if we do not do that, we need we maybe there may be some punishment for us, so it motivates us to attend the classes.
✓ For example, we need to scan a QR code before every class and if we do not do that, there may be some punishment for us, so it motivates us to attend the classes.
“every classes”中“classes”应为单数形式“class”，因为“every”后面应接单数名词。
× For example, we need to scan a QR code before every classes and if we do not do that, we need we maybe there may be some punishment for us, so it motivates us to attend the classes.
✓ For example, we need to scan a QR code before every class, and if we do not do that, there may be some punishment for us, so it motivates us to attend the classes.
句子中“we need we maybe there may be”结构混乱，应删除多余部分，调整为“there may be some punishment”，使句子结构清晰。
× However, if the rules there are too many rules, the efficiency would be low.
✓ However, if there are too many rules, the efficiency would be low.
句子中“if the rules there are too many rules”结构重复且错误，应改为“if there are too many rules”，去掉多余的“the rules”。
× Yes, my maths teacher in junior high school was very responsible for us.
✓ Yes, my maths teacher in junior high school was very responsible to us.
“responsible”后面通常搭配介词“to”表示对某人负责，而非“for”。
× For instance, there is a time when I was not interested in studying maths.
✓ For instance, there was a time when I was not interested in studying maths.
描述过去的时间点应使用过去时态“was”，而非现在时“is”。
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