Rules— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer addresses the question but lacks clarity and natural phrasing. Avoid redundancy like 'very compulsory' and unclear phrases such as 'well corporate corporation'. Use simpler, clearer sentences and limit your response to about 4-5 sentences. For example, start with a clear topic sentence, then add specific details using linking words.

Exemplo: Yes, there are several rules at my school. Firstly, all students must wear the school uniform to maintain a sense of unity. Additionally, discipline is strictly enforced to create a good learning environment. These rules help students focus better on their studies.

Sugestão: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and lacks coherence. Try to organise your ideas logically using linking words like 'however' or 'for example'. Also, avoid vague phrases like 'some rules are there'. Be specific about which rules are helpful and which are not, and explain why.

Exemplo: I believe it depends on the type of rules. For example, some rules like wearing uniforms help maintain discipline. However, prohibiting students from using the playground is unnecessary because playing is important for their health and relaxation.

Sugestão: Your answer is relevant but can be improved by using more natural expressions and linking words. Instead of 'very well in her job', say 'does her job very well'. Also, avoid repeating 'very' and use more precise adjectives. Add linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

Exemplo: Yes, I remember a teacher from my 10th class named Miss Payal. She does her job very well because she is caring and disciplined. Moreover, she teaches us in a clear and effective manner, which helps us understand the lessons better.

× it is very compulsory for all the students to be a school uniform

✓ it is compulsory for all the students to wear a school uniform

The word 'compulsory' is an adjective and does not need 'very' before it. Also, 'to be a school uniform' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'to wear a school uniform' because students wear uniforms, not 'be' them.

× teachers and principal prohibited the students for going to the playground

✓ teachers and principal prohibited the students from going to the playground

The verb 'prohibit' is followed by 'from' when indicating what is forbidden. Using 'for' is incorrect in this context.

× Her name is Miss Payal. She's very well in her job because she's very caring and very disciplined and she also teaches us in a well manner.

✓ Her name is Miss Payal. She's very good at her job because she's very caring and very disciplined and she also teaches us in a good manner.

The phrase 'very well in her job' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'very good at her job'. Also, 'in a well manner' should be 'in a good manner' or better 'in a good way'.