Shoes— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Answer the frequency question directly and use accurate sentence structures. Say “I often buy shoes” or “I buy them whenever I travel abroad,” rather than “I am stand buying.” Avoid repetition such as “another another country,” and connect your reasons more clearly with “because” and “so.” Also, explain what you usually consider, such as brand, quality, condition, and price.

Exemplo: Yes, I do. I usually buy shoes when I travel abroad, especially if I find a good brand at a reasonable price. I normally check the quality, condition, and comfort before making a purchase.

Sugestão: Give a clear answer first, then explain that online shopping saves time and is convenient. Use correct comparative and noun forms: “easier,” “more convenient,” and “time.” Replace unclear phrases such as “especially itself my time” and “go or solve to shopping.” You could also mention a specific situation, such as buying shoes for a special event, and use the correct phrase “they are delivered quickly.”

Exemplo: Yes, I have. I prefer buying shoes online because it is easier and more convenient, especially when I am busy. For example, if I need shoes for a special event, I can order them from home and have them delivered quickly.

Sugestão: State an approximate amount or range to answer “how much” more directly. Correct the structure “I'm like 20 collection shoes” to “I have a collection of about 20 pairs of shoes,” and use “scroll through social media” instead of “score social media.” Explain your habit logically with linking words such as “because” and “whenever,” and avoid repeating the idea that you buy what you want.

Exemplo: I usually spend around 100 to 150 dollars on shoes every few months. I have a collection of about 20 pairs, so I do not buy them very often. However, whenever I see a new collection on social media, I am sometimes tempted to buy a pair.

Sugestão: Your main idea and comparison are clear, but correct the grammar and word choice. Use “When it comes to comfortable shoes,” “I wear them for hiking,” and “fashionable shoes” rather than “fashionable source.” Explain the situations in a more parallel way and use a linking expression such as “whereas” to make the contrast clearer.

Exemplo: Personally, I prefer both, depending on the occasion. I choose comfortable shoes for hiking, going to school, or working out at the gym because they are more practical. However, I prefer fashionable shoes when I go out for dinner or attend a special event.

× Yes, absolutely. I am stand buying shoes every time I traveling in another another country and if that country have the good brand and with high quality and I also look at condition and price so I often buy what I think.

✓ Yes, absolutely. I usually buy shoes whenever I travel to another country, especially if that country has good, high-quality brands. I also look at the condition and price, so I often buy the shoes I like.

Use the simple present tense for repeated habits: usually buy and travel, not am stand buying and I traveling. Country is singular, so the verb must be has, not have. Use the plural noun brands when speaking about brands in general. The definite article the is needed before condition when referring to the specific condition of the shoes.

× Yes, of course, because I think online is more easy and convenient, especially itself my time. For example if I have ever a busy day I cannot go or solve to shopping or I have special event I ultimately I will buy online and they delivery very quickly.

✓ Yes, of course. I think shopping online is easier and more convenient, especially because it saves me time. For example, if I have a busy day, I cannot go shopping. If I have a special event, I will buy online, and the company will deliver my shoes very quickly.

The comparative form of easy is easier, not more easy. Itself is an incorrect pronoun here; use because it saves me time. Ever is incorrectly placed and is unnecessary in this conditional sentence. After go, use the -ing form shopping. Use a before the singular countable noun event. Deliver is the correct present-tense verb, not delivery, which is usually a noun. The original answer also contains several incomplete or incorrectly joined clauses, so separate them into clear sentences.

× To be honest, I spend a lot of money on shoes because I'm like 20 collection shoes and every time I score social media and so new collection I always think about want to buy them. Then I always buy what I want.

✓ To be honest, I spend a lot of money on shoes because I have a collection of about 20 pairs of shoes. Every time I scroll through social media and see a new collection, I always think about buying them. Then I buy what I want.

Use the verb have to express possession; I'm like is incorrect in this context. Use the quantifier about with an approximate number and specify the plural unit pairs. A collection is a singular countable noun, so it needs the article a. The original sentence joins several ideas incorrectly; use separate clauses with clear verbs such as scroll and see. After think about, use the -ing form buying.

× Personally I prefer both of them but it depends on the situation. When it come to comfortable shoes I usually wear it to hiking or going to school, going to the gym because it is needed and the fashionable source is what I want as we I wear it going to dinner.

✓ Personally, I prefer both, but it depends on the situation. When it comes to comfortable shoes, I usually wear them for hiking, to school, or to the gym because they are suitable for those activities. Fashionable shoes are what I want when I wear shoes to dinner.

The fixed expression is when it comes to, so the singular subject it requires comes. Shoes is plural, so use the pronouns them and they instead of it. Use for hiking rather than to hiking. The original clauses are joined incorrectly, so use clear structures such as when I wear shoes to dinner. The verb and pronoun forms must agree with the plural subject shoes: they are, not it is.