Shoes— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Make your answer grammatically correct, more concise, and include a clear topic sentence followed by one specific reason and a brief example. Avoid redundancy and limit to 2–3 sentences. Use linking words such as 'because' or 'so' to connect ideas.

Exemplo: I don't enjoy buying shoes, so I only purchase a new pair about every six months when my old ones wear out because shopping takes too much time. For example, I usually replace my sneakers only after the soles are worn through.

Sugestão: Begin with a direct yes/no response, then give a specific benefit and a short example. Correct word choice and grammar (e.g., 'categories' and 'sites'). Use a linking word like 'because' or 'so'.

Exemplo: Yes, I often buy shoes online because it's convenient and lets me compare different styles and prices quickly. For example, I recently looked at three websites to find the most comfortable trainers at the best price.

Sugestão: Provide a clear amount and reason in one or two concise sentences. Correct unclear phrases and be specific about the currency and typical purchase. Use linking words like 'because' to explain your budget choice.

Exemplo: I usually spend less than $200 on a pair of shoes because I'm not very interested in fashion and prefer comfortable, practical options. For example, I buy affordable sneakers that last rather than expensive fashion shoes.

Sugestão: Answer directly and confidently, avoid fillers, and give one clear reason with a brief supporting detail. Keep it to 1–2 sentences and use linking words like 'because' or 'so'.

Exemplo: I prefer comfortable shoes because I value practicality and a simple style for everyday wear. For instance, I choose cushioned sneakers that allow me to walk long distances without discomfort.

× I don't like shopping for shoes, so I only buy one new pairs about six months when my old ones wear out.

✓ I don't like shopping for shoes, so I only buy one new pair about every six months when my old ones wear out.

The noun 'pairs' is plural but preceded by 'one', so it should be the singular 'pair'. Also add 'every' before 'six months' to indicate regular frequency. Suggestion: use 'one new pair' and 'every six months' for correct singular/plural agreement and natural phrasing.

× Buying shoes feel time consuming to me and I prefer to replace them only when necessary.

✓ Buying shoes feels time consuming to me and I prefer to replace them only when necessary.

The gerund phrase 'Buying shoes' is a singular subject, so the verb should be 'feels' not 'feel'. Suggestion: match verb to singular subject: 'Buying shoes feels...'. Use 'time-consuming' in speech but 'time consuming' is acceptable colloquially.

× Yes, and I have some experience buying shoes online and it's very convenient and I can compare the different category and the price with the online series.

✓ Yes, I have some experience buying shoes online; it's very convenient and I can compare different categories and prices on the websites.

Issues: 'the different category' needs plural 'different categories'; 'the price' should be plural 'prices' when comparing multiple items; 'with the online series' is incorrect phrasing — use 'on the websites' or 'on online sites'. Also remove redundant 'and' and use punctuation to separate ideas. Suggestion: use plural nouns when referring to multiple items and more natural preposition 'on' for websites.

× I usually spend less than 200, follow a new shift because I think it's just necessary and actually I'm not a fashion person, so I think I'm comfortable. It's OK for me.

✓ I usually spend less than 200, and I only buy a new pair when necessary because I'm not a fashionable person; comfort is more important to me.

Original sentence has unclear quantifier use and awkward phrases: 'follow a new shift' is incorrect and likely intended 'buy a new pair' or 'replace them'. 'Not a fashion person' is better as 'not a fashionable person'. Streamline to show spending limit, purchase frequency, and preference for comfort. Suggestion: be clear about amount, use 'less than 200' followed by explanation, and correct collocations ('fashionable person').

× Uh, I should uh, prefer the comfortable shoes because, uh, I, I like to stick a basic style and just ensure the shoes are comfortable and casual and for me and umm, yes, this is my preference.

✓ I prefer comfortable shoes because I like to stick to a basic style and make sure the shoes are comfortable and casual; this is my preference.

Problems: unnecessary filler words ('uh', 'umm') and 'should prefer' is incorrect — use simple 'prefer'. Use 'stick to a basic style' instead of 'stick a basic style'. Remove redundant phrases like 'and for me'. Suggestion: eliminate fillers, use correct verb patterns ('prefer'), and correct prepositional phrase 'stick to'.