Shoes— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng hơn và mạch lạc. Hãy bắt đầu bằng một câu chủ đề trực tiếp trả lời câu hỏi, rồi nêu tần suất cụ thể và lý do với ví dụ chi tiết. Tránh lặp từ và sửa ngữ pháp (ví dụ: “when I started a new journey” không phù hợp với hiện tại). Sử dụng liên từ để nối ý và giữ tối đa 4-5 câu.

Exemplo: Yes, I do enjoy buying shoes. I usually buy new shoes two or three times a year, mainly when I start a new activity like hiking or a new job. For example, before joining a hiking group last year I bought a pair of trail shoes for comfort and support. Overall, I prefer to buy shoes that suit the specific purpose I need.

Sugestão: Cần câu trả lời trực tiếp và giải thích rõ ràng lý do. Sửa lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng (“office shop” không đúng; có lặp từ). Nên dùng linking words như ‘however’ hoặc ‘because’ để kết nối ý và đưa ví dụ cụ thể về trải nghiệm mua online.

Exemplo: Yes, I have bought shoes online a few times, but I rarely do so now because I prefer trying them on in a physical store. For instance, when I ordered running shoes online once, they did not fit well and I had to return them. Therefore, I usually visit shoe shops to check the size and comfort before buying.

Sugestão: Cần nói rõ khoảng giá bằng cách sử dụng đơn vị tiền tệ và cấu trúc ngữ pháp chính xác. Tránh lặp và thêm lý do tại sao chi tiêu ở mức đó (chất lượng, thương hiệu). Dùng câu ngắn gọn và một ví dụ cụ thể.

Exemplo: I usually spend between 1,000,000 and 2,000,000 Vietnamese dong on a pair of shoes. I prefer to invest in well-known brands because they offer better quality and durability. For example, I bought a pair of leather shoes last year for about 1.5 million dong and they lasted over a year.

Sugestão: Cần trả lời trực tiếp và giải thích rõ ràng bằng lý do cụ thể; sửa ngữ pháp (ví dụ: 'it makes me more confident when I wear them'). Tránh ý mơ hồ như ‘my friend option’. Dùng 2-3 câu, kèm ví dụ hoặc so sánh giữa thời trang và sự thoải mái.

Exemplo: I prefer fashionable shoes because they boost my confidence and help me follow current trends. However, I also consider comfort, so I usually choose stylish shoes that are still comfortable to wear for several hours. For example, I often buy sneakers that look fashionable but have good cushioning for everyday use.

× Well, I quite enjoy buying shoes.

✓ Well, I quite enjoy buying shoes.

No change needed. Sentence correctly uses present simple to express a general preference.

× It's one of my favorite items.

✓ Shoes are one of my favorite items.

Original sentence is vague because the subject 'It' does not clearly refer to 'buying shoes' or 'shoes'. Use plural 'Shoes are' to clearly match 'favorite items' and improve clarity.

× Well, I often buy shoes when I started a new journey and I have to train A and I have to prepare a suit which can uh.

✓ Well, I often buy shoes when I start a new journey because I have to train and prepare a suitable outfit.

Mixed tenses: 'often' requires present simple 'start', not past 'started'. 'Have to train A' is unclear; likely meant 'have to train'. 'Prepare a suit which can' is incomplete; changed to 'prepare a suitable outfit' for clarity and correct present tense.

× Well actually I have bought shoes online several times in my life but until now umm I rarely buy buy new shoe because I prefer buying shoes directly in the office shop because it's more con more.

✓ Well, actually I have bought shoes online several times, but until now I rarely buy new shoes because I prefer buying shoes directly in physical stores since they are more convenient.

Tense and number: 'have bought' is fine, but 'rarely buy new shoe' should be 'rarely buy new shoes' (plural). 'Office shop' is incorrect collocation; changed to 'physical stores'. 'More con more' unclear, corrected to 'more convenient'.

× Well, I quite like expensive shoe in some famous agen agency, so it's often very high cost.

✓ Well, I quite like expensive shoes from some famous brands or agencies, so they often cost a lot.

Number agreement: 'expensive shoe' should be 'expensive shoes'. 'agen agency' is a typo; clarified to 'famous brands or agencies'. 'Very high cost' is awkward; 'cost a lot' is natural.

× Umm, well, I actually often spend about 1,000,000 Vietnamese to 2 million Vietnamese to buying a shoe to buy a shoe.

✓ I actually often spend about 1,000,000 to 2,000,000 Vietnamese dong to buy a pair of shoes.

Redundant and ungrammatical phrases removed. Use 'spend ... to buy' and correct currency unit 'Vietnamese dong'. 'A pair of shoes' is natural.

× Well, I quite like some item which are really beautiful, so I prefer fashionable shoe.

✓ Well, I quite like items that are really beautiful, so I prefer fashionable shoes.

Number agreement and pronoun/reference: 'some item which are' should be 'items that are' (plural agreement). 'Fashionable shoe' should be 'fashionable shoes'.

× It's not only make me more confident when I brings, but also fashionable shoes can help me keep up with the trends.

✓ Not only do they make me more confident when I wear them, but fashionable shoes also help me keep up with the trends.

Subject-verb agreement and tense: 'It's not only make' is incorrect; use auxiliary 'do' for negative inversion: 'Not only do they make'. 'When I brings' is wrong in verb form and subject; should be 'when I wear them'.

× And also my friend option often buy fashionable shoes.

✓ Also, my friends often choose to buy fashionable shoes.

'Friend option' is incorrect collocation. Use 'my friends often choose to buy' for natural expression and correct plural 'friends' with verb 'choose'.

× So I think it's the the way that I can.

✓ So I think that's the way for me to fit in or express myself.

Original is incomplete and ungrammatical ('the the way that I can'). Provide a complete, natural ending such as 'the way for me to fit in' or 'express myself' to convey likely intended meaning.