Shoes— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Make the response more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one supporting detail with correct grammar and linking words. Avoid repetition and filler words.

Exemplo: Yes, I love buying shoes. I usually buy a new pair about once a month, mainly sports shoes because I run regularly for exercise and work.

Sugestão: Reduce hesitations and use past tense consistently. Give one clear supporting detail and use linking words to connect ideas. Be specific about what you liked (fit, comfort, style).

Exemplo: Yes, I bought a pair of formal shoes online recently. They fitted me perfectly and were very comfortable, so I was really pleased with the purchase.

Sugestão: Give a direct estimate and clarify with reasons. Use correct grammar (subject-verb agreement) and avoid vague phrases. Provide a price range and explain when you spend more.

Exemplo: It depends on the brand, but I usually spend between $40 and $100 on a pair. If I need high-quality running shoes I will pay more, but for casual shoes I choose more affordable options.

Sugestão: Answer directly and give a brief contrast with linking words. Fix grammar (it depends) and finish the final thought. Be specific about occasions and reasons.

Exemplo: It depends on the occasion. For work or the gym I prefer comfortable shoes because they support my feet, but for special events like parties or ceremonies I choose fashionable shoes to look more polished.

× Yes of course I'm fan of I'm big fan of buy shoes I usually buy every month, especially sports shoes.

✓ Yes, of course. I'm a big fan of buying shoes. I usually buy them every month, especially sports shoes.

Missing and incorrect pronouns and articles: 'I'm fan of' needs the article 'a' and 'big fan of buy shoes' should use the gerund 'buying' as the object of 'fan of'. Also 'I usually buy every month' lacks an object; add 'them' to refer to 'shoes'. Suggestion: include articles and use gerunds after 'fan of', and include pronouns for objects. Grammar problem type ID:12

× Yes, of course. Recently I purchased uh, purchase a new shoes for my work and it was uh, very comfortable and uh, it's uh, it was uh, formal shoes, uh, but uh, very nice and uh, the size is very umm equal by my leg and uh, I was very cheerful when I. Wear my shoes.

✓ Yes, of course. Recently I purchased a pair of new shoes for work, and they were very comfortable. They were formal shoes but very nice, and the size fitted my feet well. I was very happy when I wore my shoes.

Multiple issues: 'purchase a new shoes' mixes tenses and has article and number errors; use 'purchased' with 'a pair of new shoes' or 'new shoes' with no 'a'. 'it was...formal shoes' mismatches singular pronoun with plural 'shoes'—use 'they were'. 'the size is very equal by my leg' is incorrect; use 'the size fitted my feet well'. 'when I. Wear my shoes' wrong tense and punctuation—use past 'wore'. Suggestions: ensure subject-pronoun agreement for plural nouns, correct articles ('a pair of'), use past tense consistently for completed actions, and use correct collocations like 'fit my feet'. Grammar problem type ID:9

× Actually it depend on the brand. Sometimes I uh like some shoes uh is expensive uh, so I prefer umm buy uh, with a lot of uh, money, plenty of money uh, but uh, if I see affordable shoes, affordable price shoes, I prefer.

✓ Actually it depends on the brand. Sometimes I like shoes that are expensive, so I prefer to buy them even if they cost a lot of money, but if I see shoes at an affordable price, I prefer those.

Subject-verb agreement and tense: 'it depend' should be 'it depends' (present simple third person). 'I like some shoes is expensive' needs relative clause 'shoes that are expensive' and plural agreement. 'prefer buy' should be 'prefer to buy' or 'prefer buying'. 'plenty of money' is informal; use 'cost a lot of money'. Suggestion: use correct third-person singular verb forms, relative clauses ('that are'), infinitive after 'prefer', and explicit pronouns for clarity. Grammar problem type ID:27

× Oh, it's really depend on occasion and situation. If I want to work and at the gym, I prefer comfortable shoes.

✓ Oh, it really depends on the occasion and situation. If I am going to work or to the gym, I prefer comfortable shoes.

'it's really depend' should be 'it really depends' (third-person singular present). Also 'If I want to work and at the gym' is ungrammatical; use 'If I am going to work or to the gym' to express purpose/going. Suggestion: use correct verb agreement and clear expressions for activities ('going to work', 'going to the gym'). Grammar problem type ID:6

× But if I want to, uh, special occasion like a ceremony or birthday party, I prefer, uh, fashionable because, uh, it make, uh, me a.

✓ But if I have a special occasion, like a ceremony or birthday party, I prefer fashionable shoes because they make me look good.

Sentence fragments and incorrect pronoun use: 'if I want to, special occasion' should be 'if I have a special occasion'. Missing noun after 'prefer'—specify 'fashionable shoes'. 'it make me a' is ungrammatical; use plural pronoun 'they' to match 'shoes' and correct verb form 'make' -> 'make me look good'. Suggestion: include the noun after 'prefer', match pronouns to plural nouns, and complete the clause with an appropriate complement. Grammar problem type ID:12