Shoes— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Make your answer direct and organized: start with a clear topic sentence about whether you like buying shoes and how often, then give one or two specific reasons with linking words. Use correct vocabulary (shoes, not shorts/suits) and simpler grammar. Avoid repetition and keep to 2–4 sentences.

Exemplo: Yes, I like buying shoes and I do it every few months. I enjoy finding new brands and styles because shoes can change the look of an outfit. Also, I prefer shoes that are neat and comfortable since they affect how I feel all day.

Sugestão: Answer the question directly, then give one or two clear reasons or conditions. Use correct nouns (shoes, not shirts), and use linking words like 'but' or 'however' to contrast. Mention specifics: what sites, why you trust them, or how you check authenticity.

Exemplo: Yes, I have bought shoes online, but I usually prefer to buy in stores when I can try them on. However, I buy online if the brand is official and reviews look genuine, because I check seller ratings and return policies before I buy.

Sugestão: Give a clear numeric answer first, then explain briefly why you spend that amount. Use correct words (shoes, not suits) and concise reasons such as quality, brand, or comfort. Keep language simple and avoid unclear phrases.

Exemplo: I usually spend around 10,000 Nepalese rupees on a pair of shoes. I pay that much because I prefer branded, high-quality shoes that are comfortable and long-lasting.

Sugestão: Start with a direct choice, then give one or two specific reasons. Use correct nouns and avoid repetition. Use linking words like 'because' or 'so' to connect your reason. Mention a concrete example (e.g., sports shoes) to support your preference.

Exemplo: I prefer comfortable shoes because I often run and move around a lot. For example, I usually buy sports shoes since they are lightweight, supportive and suitable for training.

× Yes, I usually I like buy shorts because I will coming new brand and new style shoes I buy.

✓ Yes, I usually buy shoes because new brands and styles are always coming, so I like to buy them.

Multiple sentence structure issues: unnecessary repeated words, incorrect verb forms ('like buy', 'will coming'), wrong noun ('shorts' instead of 'shoes'), and run-on sentence. Suggestion: remove repetitions, use correct verb collocations ('buy shoes'), use present simple for habits ('usually buy'), and use present continuous passive/active for arriving items ('new brands and styles are coming') or simple present to express general truth.

× This is my fashion and I I loved the suits because shoes is neat more comfortable our whole body in depend on shoes.

✓ This is my style and I like branded shoes because they are neat and more comfortable; our whole body depends on shoes.

Errors include wrong word choice ('fashion' vs 'style'), tense inconsistency ('loved' vs present), subject-verb agreement ('shoes is'), and awkward word order ('neat more comfortable our whole body in depend on shoes'). Suggestion: use 'style' for personal preference, present simple for habits ('I like'), ensure subject-verb agreement ('shoes are'), and place adjectives correctly before nouns or use linking verbs ('they are neat and comfortable').

× Yes I do especially I buy shirts for my especially in shop physically.

✓ Yes, I do, but I usually buy shoes in physical shops.

Confused modal/auxiliary usage and wrong noun ('shirts' vs 'shoes'), repetition ('especially' twice), and awkward phrase 'for my especially'. Suggestion: keep sentence concise, use 'do' to confirm a question ('Yes, I do'), and clarify location with 'in physical shops' or 'in-store'.

× But sometime I buy online shirts when I show the online brand and original shoes.

✓ But sometimes I buy shoes online when I see the brand is authentic.

Errors: wrong time adverb ('sometime' -> 'sometimes'), wrong nouns ('shirts' vs 'shoes'), awkward phrasing ('when I show the online brand and original shoes'). Suggestion: use 'sometimes', match nouns to context, and use 'see the brand is authentic' or 'the product is original'.

× And if I come from this is not true scam I buy.

✓ If I find that it is not a scam, I will buy it.

Unclear structure and incorrect tense/phrasing ('come from this is not true scam'). Suggestion: use conditional structure 'If I find that...' and future/modal 'I will buy' or present 'I buy' depending on context.

× If this is real I buy.

✓ If it is genuine, I will buy it.

Missing subject pronoun clarity and tense choice. Use conditional 'If it is genuine' and 'I will buy it' to indicate intent. Also 'real' better replaced by 'genuine' or 'authentic'.

× I spend money usually when I buy shoes, many 10,000 Nepali rupees because I I always wear brand suits like and I love it suits because our whole body depend on suits.

✓ I usually spend a lot on shoes, about 10,000 Nepali rupees, because I always wear branded items and I like them since our whole appearance depends on clothing.

Awkward adverb placement ('spend money usually'), incorrect quantifier phrase ('many 10,000'), repetition, wrong noun 'suits', and subject-verb agreement ('our whole body depend'). Suggestion: place adverbs before main verb or after subject ('I usually spend'), use 'about' for approximate amounts, use 'branded items' or 'branded clothes', and ensure subject-verb agreement ('appearance depends').

× So shoes isn't it more brown more.

✓ So shoes are not very cheap.

Original sentence is unclear; likely attempting to say shoes are expensive or not cheap. Errors include wrong verb form 'isn't it', adjective misuse 'more brown more'. Suggestion: clarify meaning (e.g., 'shoes are expensive' or 'shoes are not cheap') and use correct plural verb agreement ('shoes are').

× I usually buy comfortable shirts and because when work running everywhere shoots need comfortable, especially I buy sports shoes because I am a sportsman so I like sports shoes is not heavy everywhere running everywhere can go sports with this I like I love it.

✓ I usually buy comfortable shoes because when I run or work everywhere I need comfort. Especially, I buy sports shoes because I am an athlete and I prefer lightweight shoes that let me move easily.

Many pronoun and noun errors: 'shirts' and 'shoots' are wrong nouns, missing subjects ('when work running everywhere'), incorrect pronoun use and repetition. Suggestion: use clear subjects ('I'), correct nouns ('shoes'), and concise clauses ('when I run'/'I need comfort'). Use 'athlete' or 'sportsman' consistently and ensure adjectives modify nouns correctly ('lightweight shoes').