Shoes— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be direct and grammatical: start with a clear topic sentence answering the question, then give concise supporting details with linking words. Correct grammar (singular/plural, verb forms) and avoid fillers. Mention frequency using clear phrases (e.g., "rarely" or "once every few months") and a brief reason. Keep it within 2–4 sentences.

Exemplo: Yes, I like buying shoes, but I rarely buy them. I already have a large collection of basketball shoes, so I only buy new pairs when an old pair is worn out or when I find a special design. Therefore, I usually buy shoes once every few months at most.

Sugestão: Answer directly and give a short, clear reason using linking words. Improve fluency by avoiding repetition and informal fillers. Use specific language about concerns (e.g., fit, authenticity, return policy) and conclude with a brief consequence (what you do instead). Keep to 2–3 sentences.

Exemplo: No, I have never bought shoes online because I'm worried about authenticity and sizing. For example, I prefer trying shoes on in local shops to make sure they fit well and are genuine, so I usually buy them in-stores.

Sugestão: Provide a clear direct answer with specific figures, and organize supporting details using linking words. Correct grammar (subject-verb agreement, article use) and precise currency phrasing. State a typical price range and explain variation briefly (e.g., brand, type). Keep it to 2–3 sentences.

Exemplo: It depends on the type, but I usually spend about 4 to 5 million Vietnamese dong on basketball shoes, which is around $150–$200. For running shoes I might spend less, as prices vary by brand and quality.

Sugestão: Give a clear preference in a topic sentence, then provide a concise, specific reason without too many fillers. Use linking words like "because" and give one or two concrete examples of how fashionable shoes matter to you. Avoid repetition and improve grammar (prefer X to Y; want to impress others). Limit to 2–3 sentences.

Exemplo: I prefer fashionable shoes rather than purely comfortable ones because I like to make a style statement. For instance, when I go out with friends I choose eye-catching sneakers to look stylish and attract compliments.

× Yeah, shoes is the most crucial accessories for me.

✓ Yeah, shoes are the most crucial accessories for me.

Subject 'shoes' is plural, so the verb should be plural 'are' not 'is' (subject-verb agreement). Also 'accessories' matches plural 'shoes'. Suggestion: match plural subjects with plural verbs (shoes + are).

× Uh, I like rarely go by go to buy shoes because I have a collections of basketball shoes.

✓ Uh, I rarely go to buy shoes because I have a collection of basketball shoes.

Incorrect word order and forms: 'like rarely go by go to' is ungrammatical. 'Like' is unnecessary here; use 'rarely' before the verb 'go'. 'Collections' should be singular 'collection' after 'a'. Suggestion: place adverbs of frequency before the main verb (I rarely go), and use correct singular/plural nouns with articles ('a collection').

× So when I'm done and it's all all like not.

✓ So when I'm done, they are usually worn out or not good anymore.

Original sentence is incomplete and unclear. It lacks a clear subject and verb; 'it's all all like not' is ungrammatical. Provide a clear clause: 'they are worn out' referring to shoes. Suggestion: ensure each sentence has a clear subject and predicate and avoid filler words like 'like'.

× No, I've never bought shoes online because my dad says you buy online, this may be fake or real.

✓ No, I've never bought shoes online because my dad says when you buy online, the shoes may be fake or not genuine.

Tense and clause clarity: 'you buy online, this may be fake or real' mixes present simple and demonstrative 'this' awkwardly. Use 'when you buy online' and 'may be fake' for possibility. Also 'real' vs 'not genuine' clarified. Suggestion: use subordinate clauses (when/if) and maintain modal verb for possibility ('may').

× You cannot know, you cannot predict it.

✓ You cannot know; you cannot predict it.

Content is acceptable but punctuation improves clarity. Two independent clauses should be separated properly. Suggestion: use a semicolon or separate sentences for clarity.

× So I always go to like the shops near me to buy shoes to buy real.

✓ So I always go to the shops near me to buy authentic shoes.

Redundant and informal 'to like' and 'to buy shoes to buy real' misuse of 'real'. Use 'authentic' and remove redundancy. Suggestion: avoid filler phrases and use correct adjectives ('authentic') and proper preposition 'to the shops near me'.

× MMM specifically it's depend on the type of issues, uh, basketball shoes or running shoes.

✓ Specifically, it depends on the type, such as basketball shoes or running shoes.

Incorrect verb form: 'it's depend' should be 'it depends' (present tense third-person singular). 'Type of issues' is wrong noun choice; use 'type' or 'type of shoes'. Suggestion: use subject 'it' with correct verb 'depends' and correct noun phrases ('type of shoes').

× It's have a, it's have a different price.

✓ They have different prices.

'It's have' is ungrammatical: 'it' + 'has' or plural 'they have'. Here 'shoes' (plural types) take 'they have'. Simplify to 'They have different prices.' Suggestion: match pronoun number to the noun and use correct verb forms ('they have').

× Umm, just usually buy, uh, basketball shoes.

✓ Um, I usually just buy basketball shoes.

Missing subject 'I' and awkward word order. Place adverb 'usually' before the verb and keep 'just' next to verb for emphasis. Suggestion: include subject and order adverbs properly: 'I usually just buy...'.

× So it's around 4 to 5 million Vietnam domes convert to USD that $200.

✓ So it's around 4 to 5 million Vietnamese dongs, which converts to about $200 USD.

Wrong currency name 'domes' should be 'dongs' and use 'Vietnamese' as adjective. 'Convert to USD that $200' is awkward; use 'which converts to about $200 USD.' Suggestion: use correct currency names and clearer relative clauses for conversions.

× Yeah, I prefer fashionable shoes than comfortable shoes.

✓ Yeah, I prefer fashionable shoes to comfortable shoes.

Preference uses 'prefer A to B', not 'prefer A than B'. Suggestion: use 'prefer X to Y' or 'I prefer fashionable shoes rather than comfortable ones.'

× Why? Because like, I'm really like to show off, so to impress and being like being like attractive for everyone's around me when they see my shoes.

✓ Because I really like to show off, to impress people, and to look attractive to everyone around me when they see my shoes.

Multiple issues: 'I'm really like to show off' mixes 'I'm' with 'like'; correct is 'I really like to show off.' 'Being like being like attractive' is repetitive and wrong form; use 'to look attractive.' 'Everyone's' wrong possessive, should be 'everyone'. Suggestion: simplify phrases, remove filler 'like', use infinitives for purposes ('to impress', 'to look attractive'), and use correct pronouns ('everyone').