Shoes— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more concise and natural: start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid repetition (e.g. "I like buying shoes" repeated) and correct minor grammar ("interested to buy" → "interested in buying"). Aim for 2–3 sentences and include frequency.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy buying shoes. I often buy them a few times a year, and I own different kinds such as running shoes, casual sneakers and formal shoes because I need appropriate footwear for work and exercise.

Sugestão: Start with a direct answer and give one specific example and one reason, using linking words. Correct word choice ("show" → "sites"; "safe over time" unclear). Mention delivery, selection or convenience to support the opinion.

Exemplo: Yes, I have bought shoes online several times from sites like Flipkart and Amazon because they offer more choice and convenient home delivery. For example, I recently ordered running shoes that were cheaper online and arrived in two days.

Sugestão: Give a clear topic sentence with a typical range and explain briefly why you spend that amount. Use correct prepositions ("spend on shoes") and provide currency if needed. One or two sentences are enough.

Exemplo: I usually spend about 1,000 to 1,500 rupees on a pair of shoes, depending on the brand and purpose. For example, I buy cheaper shoes for daily use but spend more on running shoes for better support.

Sugestão: Answer directly and give two clear reasons with linking words (e.g. "because", "so"). Avoid vague or repetitive phrasing and fix grammar ("walk on a regularly comfortably" → "walk comfortably every day"). Keep to two sentences max.

Exemplo: I prefer comfortable shoes rather than fashionable ones because I need to walk and stand for long periods. For instance, comfortable sneakers with good cushioning help me stay on my feet all day without pain.

× I'm so interested to buy shoes.

✓ I'm very interested in buying shoes.

Use 'interested in' plus a noun or gerund; 'interested to' is incorrect here. Also use the gerund 'buying' after 'interested in' rather than the infinitive. Suggestion: say 'interested in buying' or 'interested in shoes.'

× I have so many types of shoes like sports shoes, sneaker shoes and the various type of shoes I have.

✓ I have many types of shoes, such as sports shoes, sneakers and various other types of shoes.

Mismatch between plural and singular: 'sneaker shoes' is awkward and 'the various type' should be plural 'various types.' Use 'such as' to give examples and plural 'sneakers' for the shoe type. Suggestion: use consistent plural forms for lists of types.

× Yes, so many times I bought the shoes online from the show Flipkart and Amazon.

✓ Yes, I have bought shoes online many times from sites like Flipkart and Amazon.

Present perfect 'have bought' is appropriate for life experience or repeated past actions that connect to the present; 'so many times I bought' is unnatural word order. Also 'show' is wrong; use 'sites' or 'websites.' Suggestion: use 'I have bought... many times' and 'sites like'.

× It's quite good to buy online shoes.

✓ It's quite good to buy shoes online.

Adverbial phrase 'online' should follow the noun 'shoes' or be used as 'buy online' (verb + adverb). 'Buy online shoes' is awkward word order. Suggestion: place 'online' after the verb or noun: 'buy shoes online.'

× It's safe over time.

✓ It's safe overall.

'Safe over time' suggests safety changing across time; likely intended meaning is 'generally safe' or 'overall safe.' Use 'overall' or 'generally' instead of the preposition phrase. Suggestion: say 'It's generally safe' or 'It's safe overall.'

× Usually I spend money in shoes like 1000 or 1200 or 1500.

✓ Usually I spend 1000, 1200 or 1500 on shoes.

Use 'spend ... on' not 'spend ... in.' Also list numbers without 'like' when giving examples; include currency if needed. Suggestion: say 'I spend 1000 to 1500 on shoes' or 'I spend around 1000, 1200 or 1500 on shoes.'

× I really prefer comfortable shoes, not fashionable shoes.

✓ I really prefer comfortable shoes rather than fashionable ones.

Repeating 'shoes' is acceptable but using 'ones' is more natural; 'rather than' is a better contrast connector. This is mainly style; pronoun 'ones' avoids repetition. Suggestion: use 'fashionable ones' to avoid repeating the noun.

× If we consider only fashion so we can't walk on a regularly comfortably, people have to or not only people.

✓ If we focus only on fashion, we can't walk comfortably every day; this applies not only to some people but to everyone.

The original sentence has multiple structural problems: incorrect connectors ('so'), awkward adverb order ('regularly comfortably'), and unclear referent 'people have to or not only people.' Rephrase to clarify meaning: use 'if' clause, correct adverb order 'walk comfortably', and clarify that it applies to all people. Suggestion: simplify: 'If we consider only fashion, we can't walk comfortably every day; everyone should choose comfort.'

× And I also prefer comfortable shoes and people have to choose comfortable shoes for a daily life.

✓ I also prefer comfortable shoes, and people should choose comfortable shoes for daily life.

Awkward connector 'And' at sentence start and modal choice 'have to' is too strong for general advice; 'should' is better. 'for a daily life' is incorrect; use 'for daily life' or 'for everyday life.' Suggestion: use 'I also prefer...' and 'people should choose... for daily life.'