Shoes— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be clear and concise: start with a direct topic sentence stating whether you like buying shoes, then add one or two specific details (how often and why), using correct vocabulary and simple linking words. Avoid repetition and unclear words. Focus on correct sentence structure and accurate word choice (e.g., “shoe” not “shows”, “occasion” not “ocean”).

Exemplo: Yes, I like buying shoes. I usually buy new shoes once a month because I need different pairs for work, parties, and casual wear. For example, I prefer formal shoes for the office and sneakers for weekends.

Sugestão: Answer directly, then give a clear reason and an example. Use correct grammar for preference (e.g., “I don’t like buying shoes online because…”). Mention a solution or occasional exception if true. Keep to two or three sentences and use linking words such as “because” or “however.”

Exemplo: No, I usually avoid buying shoes online because sizes can be inconsistent and I prefer to try them on. However, I will buy online if I know the brand and my exact size.

Sugestão: Give a clear estimate and justify it with two specific reasons. Start with a topic sentence stating a typical amount (or range), then explain why you spend that much with concrete examples (work, sports, formal events). Use correct nouns and avoid repetition.

Exemplo: I usually spend about $100–$150 on shoes each month because I buy several types: formal shoes for work, sneakers for sports, and nicer shoes for parties. For example, I buy one pair of dress shoes and one pair of trainers most months.

Sugestão: Give a direct opinion first, then explain with a clear condition and an example. Use linking words like “however” or “when” to contrast situations. Use correct vocabulary (fashionable, comfortable, depending on the occasion). Keep it to two or three sentences.

Exemplo: It depends on the situation. For work or formal events I prefer fashionable shoes to look professional, but for long days or exercise I choose comfortable shoes so I can walk easily.

× Ah yes, I have always been shoes and always I am going to every every month to to be a new shows.

✓ Ah yes, I have always liked shoes and I go every month to buy new shoes.

Multiple errors: wrong verb choice ('been' should be 'liked' for preference), incorrect word order, repetition, and wrong verb phrase 'to be a new shows'. This fits sentence structure and verb form problems (IDs 26, 6, 8). Suggestion: use simple present for habits (I have always liked; I go every month to buy new shoes). Remove repetitions and use correct verb 'buy' and noun 'shoes'.

× The issues depended on the ocean.

✓ It depends on the occasion.

Wrong noun 'ocean' instead of 'occasion' and wrong tense 'depended' for a general statement. This is a vocabulary/word-choice error and tense/structure issue (IDs 26, 6). Suggestion: use present simple for general facts: 'It depends on the occasion.'

× Sometimes I am being the shoes for work and for for party sometime or for ocean.

✓ Sometimes I wear shoes for work and sometimes for parties or other occasions.

Awkward progressive 'I am being the shoes' is incorrect; use 'I wear' for habitual actions (present simple). Preposition and noun errors ('for party' -> 'for parties'; 'ocean' -> 'occasions'). This matches present tense and preposition errors (IDs 6, 11). Suggestion: use simple present 'I wear' and pluralize 'parties'.

× Therefore it is a different type of the different type of the.

✓ Therefore, there are different types of shoes.

Nonsensical repetition and wrong structure. Use 'there are' to indicate existence (There be issue, ID 3) and plural 'types' (singular/plural issue, ID 1). Suggestion: restructure to a clear sentence: 'Therefore, there are different types of shoes.'

× Uh, as an extra, actually, I don't like them to put the shoes online because it is not always keep to keep the my shoe, my feet to my feet size.

✓ Uh, actually, I don't like buying shoes online because it does not always match my foot size.

Incorrect verb patterns and awkward phrasing: 'them to put the shoes online' and 'keep to keep the my shoe, my feet to my feet size' are incorrect. Use the verb 'buy' and the structure 'does not always match my foot size.' This fits modal/verb usage and sentence structure issues (IDs 4, 26). Suggestion: use clear subject-verb-object and 'match' for size compatibility.

× Therefore I'm always there to be on on the store online on the store nowadays, therefore I don't prefer to the shoes.

✓ Therefore I always try shoes in the store, so I don't prefer to buy them online.

Awkward structure and repeated phrases. 'I'm always there to be on on the store' is incorrect; use 'I always try shoes in the store.' Also add 'buy them online' for clarity. This is a sentence structure and preposition error (IDs 26, 11). Suggestion: use clear clauses connected by 'so' or 'therefore' and correct verb 'try' and 'buy'.

× I am spending more money for the shoes because I am using or being a different type of the shoes, such As for work, for a party, for ocean, for a week, work only on, for sport and for sport.

✓ I spend more money on shoes because I use different types for work, parties, vacations, and sports.

Incorrect use of present continuous for habitual action; use simple present 'I spend' and 'I use'. Preposition 'on' for spending, and 'ocean' corrected to 'vacations' or 'occasions'. Repetition removed. This addresses present tense and preposition errors (IDs 6, 11). Suggestion: use simple present for usual activities and correct prepositions.

× Therefore there is a many type for to be, to be, to be some of the shows.

✓ Therefore there are many types of shoes.

Wrong use of 'there is' with a plural noun and incorrect word order. Use 'there are' for plural (There be issue and singular/plural issue, IDs 3 and 1). Suggestion: match 'there are' with plural 'types' and use 'of shoes'.

× Therefore it is spending more time more.

✓ Therefore I spend more on them.

Awkward and unclear phrase. Use 'I spend more on them' to refer to spending money on shoes. This is a sentence structure and word choice issue (ID 26). Suggestion: replace vague phrasing with concise present simple statement.

× Actually it is dependent on the situation.

✓ Actually, it depends on the situation.

Use present simple 'it depends' rather than 'it is dependent on' for natural speech. This is a present tense / sentence structure issue (IDs 6, 26). Suggestion: use concise, common expressions.

× Sometimes I prefer to be to be a choose the flex to be a shoes for a work or for a casual and sometimes and from other side I am choicing comfortable shoes voice fashionable for shoes for a party or for.

✓ Sometimes I prefer to choose flexible shoes for work or casual wear, and other times I choose comfortable shoes rather than fashionable ones for parties.

Multiple errors: repetition, incorrect verb forms ('prefer to be to be a choose', 'choicing'), wrong word choices ('flex' -> 'flexible'), and missing comparisons. Use simple present 'prefer' and 'choose' for habits. This fits verb form and sentence structure problems (IDs 6, 8, 26). Suggestion: simplify and use correct verb forms: 'prefer to choose' -> 'prefer' or 'choose'; use 'rather than' for contrasts.