Shoes— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Improve clarity and grammar, give a direct topic sentence, then one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Use correct tense and avoid repetition. Mention frequency clearly (e.g., every few months or years) and give reasons (comfort, running) with simple cohesive devices like 'because' or 'so'.

Exemplo: Yes, I like buying shoes, but I do it only occasionally. For example, I usually buy new shoes every three to five years because I am not wealthy, and I prefer to invest in comfortable, high-quality running shoes that last.

Sugestão: Answer directly and succinctly, then give a clear reason using linking words. Correct word choice: 'I've' or 'I have', 'in person' instead of 'offline' can be used, and explain why (fit, trying on). Avoid repetition.

Exemplo: Yes, I have bought shoes online, but I usually prefer buying in person because I can try them on to check the fit and see if they look good on me.

Sugestão: State a clear typical price range in one sentence, then add a brief reason using linking words. Use correct currency phrasing and avoid unnecessary self-deprecation. Be specific about when you spend more (e.g., for running shoes).

Exemplo: I usually spend about $20 to $30 on casual shoes, but I sometimes spend up to $100 on comfortable running shoes because they need better support and quality.

Sugestão: Give a direct preference, then add specific supporting reasons with linking words. Be concise and avoid filler words. Mention an example (current shoes) to illustrate your point.

Exemplo: I prefer comfortable shoes because I walk around the house a lot and need good support. For example, I currently wear sneakers that are both comfortable and look decent for casual occasions.

× Definite yes, I lie definitely, but I'm not to buy it often.

✓ Definitely yes, I like it, but I do not buy shoes often.

The sentence has multiple structure and word choice problems: 'Definite yes' should be 'Definitely yes' (adverb), 'I lie definitely' is incorrect; likely 'I like it' was intended. 'I'm not to buy it often' is an incorrect structure; use 'I do not buy shoes often' for present habitual action. Suggestion: use adverb 'definitely', the verb 'like', and the simple present negative with 'do not' for habits.

× I like to buy it for 3/4 or more than that five year and I am the poor guy.

✓ I like to buy them every three or four years or sometimes more often, and I am not rich.

The original mixes numbers and time expressions awkwardly. Use plural 'them' for shoes (or 'shoes'), 'every three or four years' expresses frequency. 'and I am the poor guy' is unnatural; use 'I am not rich'. Also ensure subject-verb agreement and correct quantifier usage.

× So like I like to buy expense expensive thing because it really a comfortable.

✓ So I like to buy expensive things because they are really comfortable.

'expense' is a noun; should be adjective 'expensive'. 'thing' should be plural 'things' to match general statement. 'it really a comfortable' is incorrect: use plural pronoun 'they' and verb 'are' with adjective 'comfortable'. Suggest using correct adjective form and agreement between subject and verb.

× I am the a running guy.

✓ I am a runner.

'the a' is redundant. 'running guy' is awkward; use the noun 'runner' for clarity. Correct article use 'a'.

× Yes, I ever bought shoes online but I prefer to buy it offline because it I I can I can show it to the buyer to the buyer to see me that I am look comfortable and look good.

✓ Yes, I have bought shoes online, but I prefer to buy them offline because I can try them on and show the seller that I look comfortable and good.

Use present perfect 'have bought' for experience. 'ever bought' without question is incorrect. Use plural pronoun 'them' for shoes. 'try them on' is the correct phrase for checking fit. Remove repetition 'I I can I can'. 'show the seller that I look comfortable and good' fixes pronoun and verb forms.

× Normally I bought I bought the shoes around 20 to $30 or sometime I bought the expensive one and and comfortable I ate around 100.

✓ Normally I buy shoes for around $20 to $30, but sometimes I buy expensive and comfortable ones that cost around $100.

Use simple present 'buy' for habitual action instead of past 'bought'. Currency expression should be '$20 to $30'. 'sometime' should be 'sometimes'. 'and and' is duplicated. 'I ate around 100' is incorrect; likely 'they cost around $100'. Ensure correct verb tense and clear phrasing.

× I am so I am so like I am not too rich and I really spend a lot of money it really bad.

✓ I'm not very rich, so I don't spend a lot of money; that would be bad for me.

Remove repetitive 'I am so I am so like'. Use causal conjunction 'so' to link ideas. Use negation 'don't spend a lot of money' and explain consequence 'that would be bad'. Improves clarity and corrects tense and modality.

× Comfortable shoes definitely but I am prefer to look good and comfortable shoes because I am I am always well around my house so I need a comfortable shoes to walk around if.

✓ Definitely comfortable shoes, but I prefer shoes that look good and are comfortable because I am often at home and need comfortable shoes to walk around in.

'I am prefer' is incorrect; use 'I prefer'. 'comfortable shoes' should agree with verbs 'are comfortable'. 'I am always well around my house' is incorrect; 'often at home' expresses frequency. 'a comfortable shoes' mixes singular article with plural noun; use 'comfortable shoes' or 'a comfortable shoe'. End clause 'to walk around in' completes the prepositional phrase.

× Also right now I wear sneaker so it really comfortable for myself.

✓ Also right now I am wearing sneakers, so they are really comfortable for me.

Use present continuous 'am wearing' for current state. 'sneaker' should be plural 'sneakers'. 'it really comfortable for myself' has pronoun and verb errors: use 'they are really comfortable for me'. Avoid reflexive 'myself' here; use 'me'.