Shoes— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Говорите более уверенно и ясно: давайте прямой موضوعный ответ, избегайте лишних пауз и фонетических ошибок (например, «shows» → «shoes»). Дайте одну-две конкретные детали о частоте покупок и причинах, используя связки (because, so, usually). Практикуйте короткие законченные предложения и заменяйте словечки-паразиты («uh», «you know») на паузы.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy buying shoes. I usually buy new shoes two or three times a year because I like trying different styles and I often replace worn-out pairs.

Sugestão: Сформулируйте ответ ясно и хронологически: начните с прямого «Yes» и укажите когда. Уберите лишние «uh», используйте связки (because, so) и конкретные сравнения цены и комфорта. Уточняйте количество и бренд аккуратно и избегайте грамматических ошибок (например, «more cheaper»).

Exemplo: Yes. I bought two pairs of sneakers online last weekend. They were comfortable and cheaper than similar models in shops, and both were Nike, which I trust for fit and quality.

Sugestão: Отвечайте конкретно с примерной суммой или диапазоном и объясняйте причину. Используйте связки (it depends, when, because) и избегайте неясных выражений («I am a changed»). Говорите о том, как бюджет влияет на выбор и какие факторы важны (комфорт, бренд).

Exemplo: It depends, but usually I spend between $50 and $120 on a pair of shoes. When I have more money I choose better brands for comfort, otherwise I buy cheaper but comfortable options.

Sugestão: Дайте чёткий выбор и объясните причины логично: начните с ответа, затем приведите 2 конкретные причины и завершите выводом. Избегайте противоречий (не говорите одновременно «I prefer comfortable» и «usually I like to wear fashionable» без объяснения). Употребляйте связки (because, however, although) для ясности.

Exemplo: I prefer comfortable shoes because they protect my feet and reduce the risk of pain. However, I sometimes choose fashionable shoes for special occasions when appearance matters more than comfort.

× Uh, yes, I like buying shows because it's, can I say it's my favorite hobby, uh, which I can, uh, spend my money, uh, more activity and genetic form.

✓ Uh, yes, I like buying shoes because it's, can I say it's my favorite hobby, and I can spend my money on activities and new styles.

The sentence contains incorrect word choice and adjective/adverb use: 'shows' should be 'shoes'; 'more activity and genetic form' is incorrect and unclear. Replace with 'activities and new styles' to convey meaning. Also add 'on' after 'spend my money' for correct preposition use (preposition error related to grammar list 11). Use conjunction 'and' to connect ideas clearly. Ensure word choice matches intended meaning.

× Uh, you know, I think it's, uh, probably the everybody, uh, by some shows and.

✓ Uh, you know, I think it's probably that everybody buys some shoes.

'the everybody' is incorrect article and noun form; use 'everybody' without 'the'. 'by some shows' should be 'buys some shoes' — verb form and noun corrected. This fixes singular/plural and article misuse and word order (subject-verb agreement and article errors).

× Yes uh it was the last weekend I bought uh the two types of the sneakers uh it was comfortable uh and cozy for me it's more cheaper than the other uh type of sneakers uh it's a brand it's Nike uh it's more it's.

✓ Yes, last weekend I bought two types of sneakers. They were comfortable and cozy for me, and they were cheaper than the other type of sneakers. One was a Nike brand.

Remove unnecessary 'the' before time expressions and plural nouns ('the last weekend' -> 'last weekend'; 'the two types' -> 'two types'). Use 'they were' to describe plural shoes (there be/subject-verb agreement). 'More cheaper' is incorrect comparative; use 'cheaper' only. Break into sentences for clarity and correct pronoun reference. Clarify brand statement.

× It depends my cash when I have some money I can spend them but now I am a changed I say which of the shows I'm like it and it looks like be more comfortable and cozy.

✓ It depends on my cash. When I have some money I can spend it, but now I have changed; I choose the shoes I like, and they seem to be more comfortable and cozy.

Missing preposition 'on' after 'depends' and incorrect pronoun agreement: 'spend them' should be 'spend it' (money is uncountable). 'I am a changed' is incorrect; use 'I have changed' or 'I am more selective'. 'Which of the shows I'm like it' is ungrammatical; rephrase to 'I choose the shoes I like'. Also correct 'it looks like be' to 'they seem to be'. This addresses pronoun misuse and sentence structure.

× I prefer comfortable shoes because fashionable, uh, you can stress or your leg, uh, I think it's healthy.

✓ I prefer comfortable shoes because fashionable ones can stress your legs; I think comfort is healthier.

'fashionable' needs a noun 'ones' to refer to shoes. 'you can stress or your leg' is ungrammatical; change to 'can stress your legs'. 'I think it's healthy' is vague; specify 'comfort is healthier'. This fixes adjective use, reference, and clarity.

× Firstly, healthy is important. Uh, it looks like be, uh, how was the type of the uh, people like to buy, but usually I like to wear, uh, fashionable, but.

✓ Firstly, health is important. It depends on the type of people and what they like to buy, but usually I like to wear fashionable shoes sometimes.

Use 'health' not 'healthy' as the noun. 'It looks like be' is incorrect; use 'It depends on'. Remove filler and complete the thought: 'what they like to buy'. The original sentence ended abruptly; provide a complete clause 'I like to wear fashionable shoes sometimes.' This improves sentence structure and word choice.