Shoes— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be direct and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence (Yes/No), then give a brief explanation with specific details and correct grammar. Avoid irrelevant or confusing phrases like "while I was born in this world." Use linking words (because, so) to connect ideas.

Exemplo: No, I don't often buy shoes because my mother usually buys them for me. As a result, I rarely feel the need to shop for footwear myself.

Sugestão: Give a clear direct answer first, then explain a concrete reason with one or two supporting sentences. Use linking words (because, so) and correct tense. Mention specific concerns such as sizing or fit.

Exemplo: No, I have never bought shoes online because I'm worried about the fit. Since I can't try them on, I prefer to buy shoes in a shop where I can measure and test comfort.

Sugestão: Answer directly with a typical amount and clarify whether it's usual or a preference. Use one or two supporting reasons with clearer grammar and linking words. Be specific about what you mean by "quality."

Exemplo: I usually spend around $100 on a good pair of shoes because I value durability and comfort over price. For example, I choose leather or well-cushioned sneakers that last longer.

Sugestão: Start with a clear preference, then give concise reasons and an example. Improve vocabulary (coordinate my outfits, follow fashion blogs) and avoid repetition. Use linking words like because and for example.

Exemplo: I prefer fashionable shoes because I enjoy coordinating my outfits and keeping up with trends. For example, I follow fashion blogs and choose shoes that match the clothes I wear to social events.

× I have never bought my shoes while I was born in this world because my mother bought me some shoes without asking.

✓ I have never bought my own shoes since I was born because my mother bought shoes for me without asking.

The original sentence mixes incorrect time expression 'while I was born' and awkward possessive 'my shoes'. Use 'since I was born' for a time starting in the past and 'my own shoes' or 'shoes for me' for possession; also simplify 'bought me some shoes' to 'bought shoes for me'. Suggestion: use 'since' with present perfect to show an action that has not happened from birth until now.

× Never because if I was I if I like the shoes and however I don't I want I wouldn't buy shoes online because I cannot measure my my shoes.

✓ Never, because even if I liked the shoes, I would not buy shoes online since I cannot measure my feet.

The sentence contains mixed and incorrect tense and conditional forms. Use a second conditional 'even if I liked' with 'I would not' to express hypothetical situations. Replace 'measure my my shoes' with 'measure my feet' to convey the measurement problem. Remove redundant fillers ('if I was I if I like', 'however I don't I want'). Suggestion: keep conditional structure consistent: if + past simple, would + base verb.

× If I bought my shoes in the future, I want to spend money for shoes at least $100 because I want I consider quality rather than cost, uh.

✓ If I buy shoes in the future, I will spend at least $100 because I consider quality more important than price.

The original mixes conditional forms and tenses ('If I bought' suggests unreal past, but context is a real future possibility). Use first conditional for real future possibilities: 'If I buy..., I will...'. Use 'consider quality more important than price' for natural comparison; replace 'spend money for shoes' with 'spend at least $100' and remove filler words. Suggestion: use 'if + present, will + verb' for future plans and correct comparative structure.

× I prefer to use fashionable shoes because I really like coordinate my fashion.

✓ I prefer fashionable shoes because I really like coordinating my outfits.

After 'like' when expressing a hobby or preference, the gerund (verb + -ing) 'coordinating' is required. 'Coordinate my fashion' is unnatural; use 'coordinating my outfits' for clarity. Also 'prefer to use' is wordy; 'prefer fashionable shoes' is smoother. Suggestion: after like, use gerund when talking about activities: like + -ing.

× I always watch some article of fashion and I research everything of fashion.

✓ I always read fashion articles and research everything about fashion.

You do not 'watch' articles; you 'read' them. Use the preposition 'about' with 'everything' to indicate the topic: 'everything about fashion'. 'Some article of fashion' should be 'fashion articles'. Suggestion: choose correct verbs for actions (read articles) and use 'about' to show the subject of research.