Shoes— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be careful with grammar and sentence variety. Start with a clear topic sentence, correct verb forms, and reduce redundancy. Use one or two supporting details with linking words. For example, change “I already own variety of style” to “I already own a variety of styles,” and “only buying” to “only buy.”

Exemplo: I enjoy buying shoes, but I don't do it often because I already have a variety of styles, such as heels, boots and sandals. Therefore, I prefer to invest in high-quality pairs and only buy new ones when I really need them.

Sugestão: This answer has coherence and pronunciation issues and contains many grammatical errors and repetitions. Begin with a clear topic sentence, then give two specific supporting points using linking words (for example, “because” and “also”). Correct pronouns and article use (“Sheen app”, “it’s more affordable”, “the shoes are delivered”). Avoid repeating the same idea twice.

Exemplo: Yes, I often buy shoes online, mainly through the Sheen app. Because I live in Japan, brand-name shoes are expensive here, so the app is more affordable and usually delivers within a week. Also, the shoes I buy there tend to be good quality, which is why I prefer shopping online.

Sugestão: Correct grammar (shows → shoes), verb forms, and sentence linking. Give a clear topic sentence about spending, then support with a specific example and a linking phrase like “for example” or “therefore.” Reduce awkward phrasing such as “so I see them and is investment.”

Exemplo: I usually spend a bit more money on shoes because I believe good-quality shoes last longer and are more comfortable. For example, I bought leather trainers last year that are still in great condition, so I consider them an investment rather than a waste.

Sugestão: Answer needs completion and more fluent linking. Start with a clear topic sentence and finish the comparison. Use linking words (“when”, “but”, “however”) and avoid filler sounds (“uh”). Provide one or two concise examples to clarify when you choose each type.

Exemplo: I prefer both, depending on the occasion. For example, when I go hiking or expect to walk for a long time, I choose comfortable shoes; however, for parties or evenings out I usually pick fashionable shoes.

× I like buying shoes but I don't buy them very often because I already own variety of style like heels, boots, chunky shoes and sandals.

✓ I like buying shoes but I don't buy them very often because I already own a variety of styles like heels, boots, chunky shoes, and sandals.

The countable noun 'variety' requires the article 'a' before it and 'style' should be plural 'styles' to match 'variety of'. Also add a comma before 'and' in a list for clarity. Suggestion: use 'a variety of + plural noun' pattern. Grammar problem type ID: 1

× I prefer to invest in good quality pairs so I only buying new shoes when I really need them.

✓ I prefer to invest in good-quality pairs so I only buy new shoes when I really need them.

After 'only' and in this clause the base form 'buy' is required; 'buying' is incorrect here. Also use the infinitive structure 'prefer to invest' is fine and 'good-quality' should be hyphenated as a compound adjective before 'pairs'. Suggestion: use base verb after auxiliary or adverb phrases and hyphenate compound adjectives. Grammar problem type ID: 8

× She needs more affordable and shoes are really delivered within a week.

✓ They are more affordable and the shoes are usually delivered within a week.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'She' likely instead of 'They' or 'It'; subject pronoun must agree with 'app' or 'service' which are neutral. Also sentence structure needed 'the shoes are' and verb tense/adverb 'usually' fits better than 'really delivered'. Ensure subject-verb agreement and correct pronoun choice. Grammar problem type ID: 2

× So I prefer shopping online.

✓ So I prefer shopping online.

This sentence is grammatically acceptable but relates to previous pronoun ambiguity; no change needed. However, keep consistent subjects in nearby sentences. (No grammar problem matching list required.) Grammar problem type ID: 12

× And also I want to say the quality of the shoes are very good.

✓ And also I want to say the quality of the shoes is very good.

The subject 'quality' is singular, so the verb must be 'is' not 'are'. Suggestion: identify the grammatical subject (quality) rather than a nearby plural noun (shoes) when choosing verb form. Grammar problem type ID: 27

× They are in very good quality and material.

✓ They are of very good quality and made of good materials.

'In very good quality' is not idiomatic; use 'of very good quality'. Also 'material' should be plural 'materials' or rephrased 'made of good material(s)'. Suggestion: use 'of good quality' and 'made of' for material descriptions. Grammar problem type ID: 13

× So I think it's. Both to buying Shane app, yes.

✓ So I think it's good to buy from the Sheen app, yes.

Original is fragmented and has word order errors. Use 'good to buy from' and correct app name spelling 'Sheen' if intended. 'Both to buying' is incorrect structure; replace with infinitive 'to buy' and preposition 'from'. Suggestion: form a complete clause with subject and predicate and use correct infinitive forms. Grammar problem type ID: 26

× I usually spend a bit more shows because I believe that good quality shows last longer and much more comfortable.

✓ I usually spend a bit more on shoes because I believe that good-quality shoes last longer and are much more comfortable.

Missing preposition 'on' after 'spend', 'shows' is misspelling of 'shoes'. 'Good quality' should be hyphenated before noun, and comparative needs verb 'are' before 'much more comfortable'. Suggestion: include correct prepositions, hyphenate compound adjectives, and ensure verbs precede adjectives in comparisons. Grammar problem type ID: 13

× For example, I bought leather trainers last year that are still in great condition, so I see them and is investment rather than a waste.

✓ For example, I bought leather trainers last year that are still in great condition, so I see them as an investment rather than a waste.

Missing preposition 'as' and article 'an' before 'investment'. 'Is' must agree with plural 'them' so use 'see them as an investment'. Suggestion: use 'see X as Y' pattern and include appropriate articles. Grammar problem type ID: 9

× I prefer both. It's depend on occasion, uh, when I go to a hike or uh, someplace I need to uh, walk a long time, I prefer comfortable shoes, but when I go to the party or hang out all day, I.

✓ I prefer both. It depends on the occasion: when I go hiking or to a place where I need to walk for a long time, I prefer comfortable shoes, but when I go to a party or hang out all day, I prefer fashionable shoes.

Use 'depends' (third-person singular), include 'the' before 'occasion', use gerund 'hiking' not 'go to a hike', and finish the contrasting clause with the appropriate verb and object. Also change 'someplace I need to walk a long time' to 'a place where I need to walk for a long time'. Suggestion: ensure subject-verb agreement, use correct prepositions and gerunds, and complete sentences with parallel structure. Grammar problem type ID: 6