Shoes— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Give a direct topic sentence, correct grammar, avoid repetition and be concise. Mention frequency and be specific (e.g., once a month). Use linking words if adding details.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy buying shoes. I usually buy new shoes about once every two months because I like variety. For example, I recently bought a pair of white sneakers to wear casually, and a pair of leather shoes for work.

Sugestão: Answer the question directly (yes or no), then give a clear reason or example. Correct grammar (this/these shoes, I visit websites). Keep it to 2–3 sentences and use linking words like because or so.

Exemplo: Yes, I have bought shoes online. I usually check reviews and size charts because I want to make sure they will be comfortable, and I return them if they don't fit.

Sugestão: Provide a clear estimate (e.g., about $50–100 per pair or $100 a month). Use correct sentence order and avoid filler words. Give a brief reason for your spending and one specific example brand or recent purchase.

Exemplo: I usually spend about $80 to $120 on a good pair of shoes, and around $150 a month if I buy several pairs. For instance, I recently spent $90 on Nike running shoes because I needed them for exercise.

Sugestão: Give a clear preference (one or a balanced opinion), explain why with specific situations, and use linking words (because, so, for example). Avoid repeating words and fix grammar (I prefer both comfort and style).

Exemplo: I prefer a balance of both comfort and fashion because I want to look good but also feel comfortable. For example, for dates I choose stylish sneakers that look smart but have cushioned soles so I can walk easily.

× Yes, I like buying shoes because shoes is my first priority and I'm so glad when I purchase shoes and so many type of shoes in my wardrobe.

✓ Yes, I like buying shoes because shoes are my first priority and I'm so glad when I purchase shoes and have so many types of shoes in my wardrobe.

The noun 'shoes' is plural, so it requires the plural verb 'are' (singular/plural agreement). Also 'type' should be plural 'types' when referring to many kinds. Suggestion: match plural nouns with plural verbs and pluralize countable nouns when referring to more than one. Grammar problem type ID:1

× No problem for visit uh, but when I purchase new shoes though, I see this shoes is comfortable, then I'll buy and uh.

✓ No problem to visit, but when I purchase new shoes, if I see these shoes are comfortable, then I'll buy them.

There are multiple issues: 'for visit' should be 'to visit' (preposition) but according to allowed types we focus on 'There be' and number agreement. 'This shoes is' mixes singular demonstrative 'this' with plural 'shoes' and uses singular verb 'is'; correct form is 'these shoes are'. Also pronoun for objects 'them' is needed. Suggestion: use 'this' for singular and 'these' for plural, match verb number accordingly. Grammar problem type ID:3

× Yes, actually I lot of spend money for shoes and uh, I like shoes, but then I'm lot of money spend on shoes because uh, I have a lot of shoes for Adidas, Nike, Zara, uh ETC. So then I purchase and.

✓ Yes, actually I spend a lot of money on shoes; I like shoes, so I spend a lot of money on brands like Adidas, Nike, and Zara.

The original has incorrect word order and missing auxiliary/inflection for present simple. 'I lot of spend money' is incorrect; the correct verb form is 'I spend a lot of money'. Preposition 'on' is used with 'spend money on'. Suggestion: use subject + base verb for present simple, place 'a lot of' before the noun, and use 'on' for spending money on something. Grammar problem type ID:6

× Yes, actually I lot of spend money for shoes and uh, I like shoes, but then I'm lot of money spend on shoes because uh, I have a lot of shoes for Adidas, Nike, Zara, uh ETC. So then I purchase and.

✓ Yes, actually I spend a lot of money on shoes; I like shoes, so I spend a lot on brands like Adidas, Nike, and Zara.

The phrase 'spend money for' is incorrect in this context; the correct preposition is 'spend money on'. Also when listing brands, use 'on' or 'from' depending on meaning. Suggestion: use 'spend money on' for purchases and place prepositions directly after 'spend'. Grammar problem type ID:11

× Yeah, actually I prefer both shoes comfortable and uh, fashionable shoes because both are comfortable and uh, I like when I'm going to outside for my date with my girlfriend. So I prefer and I wear shoes fashionable.

✓ Yeah, actually I prefer both comfortable and fashionable shoes because I like both when I'm going out on a date with my girlfriend. So I prefer fashionable shoes and wear them.

The phrase 'both shoes comfortable' has incorrect word order; 'both' should modify the adjectives 'comfortable and fashionable shoes'. 'Going to outside' is incorrect; use 'going out' or 'going outside'. Also 'wear shoes fashionable' is incorrect order; use 'wear them' or 'wear fashionable shoes'. Suggestion: place adjectives before 'shoes' and use 'going out' for leaving the house. Grammar problem type ID:1