Shoes— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Người nói cần sửa ngữ pháp cơ bản (thì, danh-động từ, số nhiều) và trình bày rõ ràng: bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề trả lời trực tiếp, rồi nêu tần suất mua sắm và lý do. Hạn chế câu lắp ghép không rõ nghĩa và tối đa 4-5 câu. Cụ thể: dùng thì hiện tại đơn cho thói quen, dùng từ chỉ tần suất (always, often, sometimes) và nêu lý do ngắn gọn.

Exemplo: I don't buy shoes very often. I only buy new shoes when my old ones are worn out, which happens maybe once every year or two. I usually avoid frequent purchases because I don't have a lot of money, so I try to take good care of my shoes.

Sugestão: Cần chỉnh thì và cấu trúc câu (sử dụng present perfect cho kinh nghiệm). Cần rõ ràng khi giải thích lý do: nêu 2-3 lý do cụ thể và dùng liên từ để mạch lạc (for example, because, so). Tránh lặp từ và cải thiện từ vựng (convenient, cheaper, discounts, vouchers).

Exemplo: Yes, I have bought shoes online several times. I prefer shopping online because it is more convenient and often cheaper, especially when I use discount vouchers. Also, online stores offer more styles and customer reviews that help me choose the right size.

Sugestão: Cần dùng đơn vị tiền tệ và con số hợp lý, sửa ngữ pháp (a pair of shoes, real shoes → maybe 'branded' or 'expensive'). Trả lời trực tiếp rồi giải thích ngắn gọn về ngân sách và tần suất. Nếu muốn dùng khoảng, nói rõ currency và hàng nghìn/millions nếu cần.

Exemplo: I usually spend about 100,000 to 300,000 Vietnamese dong on a pair of shoes. Because I have a limited budget, I focus on affordable options rather than expensive brands. Occasionally I spend more if I really need a special pair.

Sugestão: Cần trả lời trực tiếp và ngắn gọn (I prefer...), rồi nêu 2-3 lý do cụ thể, dùng linking words (because, for example). Sửa ngữ pháp (comfortable shoes suit me → comfortable shoes suit me / are more suitable). Tránh lặp từ 'comfortable' nhiều lần, thay bằng synonyms (practical, supportive).

Exemplo: I prefer comfortable shoes because I wear them for daily activities and long walks. For example, I choose shoes with good cushioning and arch support so my feet don't get tired. They make me feel more confident and are usually more practical for everyday use.

× My shoes is my also very happy but I don't have too much money to buy very often but never it broken or stuff like that. I will took a new one.

✓ My shoes make me very happy, but I don't have much money to buy them often. They have never broken or anything like that. I will get a new pair.

Subject-verb agreement and related issues: 'My shoes is' should be 'My shoes make' because 'shoes' is plural and requires a plural verb. 'My also very happy' is ungrammatical; express as 'make me very happy'. 'Too much money' with countable plural 'shoes' is better as 'much money' in negative contexts. 'Buy very often' needs 'buy them often' to refer back to shoes. 'Never it broken' is incorrect word order and verb form; use present perfect 'have never broken' for experience up to now. 'I will took' mixes future and past; correct is 'I will get' or simple future 'I will buy'.

× Yes I do and I always buy shoes online because I think it much easier and affordable whenever I get the voucher that it will minimize the price of the shoes I buy.

✓ Yes, I do. I always buy shoes online because I think it is much easier and more affordable when I get a voucher that reduces the price of the shoes I buy.

Missing verb form and adjective comparison: 'I think it much easier' is missing the verb 'is' and needs comparative structure 'much easier'. Use 'more affordable' rather than just 'affordable' for comparison. 'Whenever I get the voucher that it will minimize' has redundant 'that it will'; use 'when I get a voucher that reduces the price' or 'when I get a voucher, it reduces the price'.

× As I said earlier, I don't have too much money to buy a real shoes, so I think it's around from 100 to 300 Vietnam Dong to buy a pair of shoes.

✓ As I said earlier, I don't have much money to buy real shoes, so I think it's around 100 to 300 Vietnamese dong for a pair of shoes.

Article and quantity errors: 'a real shoes' mixes singular article 'a' with plural 'shoes'; use 'real shoes' (no article) or 'a real pair of shoes'. 'Too much money' in negative contexts is better as 'much money'. 'Around from 100 to 300' is redundant; use 'around 100 to 300' or 'from 100 to 300'. Currency name should be 'Vietnamese dong' and preposition 'for a pair of shoes' is appropriate.

× Honestly, comfortable shoes is suit for me to do every activities every day and many people as well will choose comfortable shoes. I think it's affordable, comfortable and give me a sense of confidence as well.

✓ Honestly, comfortable shoes suit me for daily activities, and many people also choose comfortable shoes. I think they're affordable, comfortable, and give me a sense of confidence.

Plural agreement and verb choice: 'comfortable shoes is suit for me' is incorrect; plural subject 'shoes' requires plural verb form 'suit' and idiomatic object order 'suit me'. 'To do every activities every day' is ungrammatical; use 'for daily activities' or 'for doing everyday activities'. 'Many people as well will choose' is wordy; 'many people also choose' is natural. 'I think it's affordable, comfortable and give me' mixes singular 'it's' with plural verb 'give'; use 'they're' and 'give' to agree with plural 'shoes'.