Shoes— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 回答は意味が通じますが、繰り返しや文法ミス、語順の不自然さが目立ちます。まず短く明確な主題文を述べ、続けて頻度を具体的に示してください。例えば“every year”や“because”の後に理由を簡潔に述べ、不要な言い直し（repetition）を避けましょう。また語彙を少し増やし、“choose favorite shoes”は“pick the right pair”など自然な表現に替えてください。発音や流暢さを向上させるために、簡潔な文を練習してスムーズに話す練習をしてください。

Exemplo: No, I don't really like shopping for shoes because I rarely have time. I usually buy shoes once a year, mainly when my old pair wears out.

Sugestão: 良い理由を述べていますが、表現をより自然で一貫性のある形にまとめると高得点になります。まず主題文で直接答え（No, I haven't）を述べ、その後に理由を一文で整理してください。例えば“it's important to check the fit”のように具体的な語彙を使い、代わりに使えるフレーズ（try them on, check the fit）を使うと効果的です。最後に短い補足（例：exceptions）を加えると会話が広がります。

Exemplo: No, I haven't bought shoes online because I prefer to try them on to make sure they fit. Occasionally I might buy simple styles online if I know my exact size.

Sugestão: 金額の表現や理由の説明が不明瞭で文法も不完全です。まず具体的な金額を明確に述べ（例：around ¥10,000）、その後に理由を一文で説明してください。理由では“cheap ones wear out quickly”など結果を示すと説得力が増します。あいまいな音（uh）は避け、文を短くして流暢さを保つ練習をしてください。

Exemplo: I usually spend around ¥10,000 on a pair of shoes because cheaper ones tend to wear out quickly, so I prefer to buy something more durable.

Sugestão: 良い対比の考え方ですが、文が途切れており、語順や接続が不自然です。まず直接答え（It depends）を述べ、続けて状況ごとの選択を2つの簡潔な文で示してください。接続詞（for example, when, but）を使って論理的に繋げ、最後に簡単な結論を追加すると良いです。具体例（outdoor activities, parties, work）を入れると説得力が増します。

Exemplo: It depends. For outdoor activities I prefer comfortable shoes because they are practical, but for parties or formal events I choose fashionable shoes to look smart.

× No, no I don't because I don't have enough time to choose favorite shoes and go shopping.

✓ No, I don't, because I don't have enough time to choose my favorite shoes and go shopping.

The sentence needs possessive determiner 'my' before 'favorite shoes' to indicate whose shoes they are; also remove redundant 'no'. Use commas for clarity. Suggestion: include 'my' and simplify the negation.

× So to be honest, I I usually buy shoes everyone year.

✓ So to be honest, I usually buy shoes every year.

Replace 'everyone year' with 'every year' for correct time expression. Remove duplicated 'I'. 'Usually' fits present habitual action.

× It's it means really.

✓ It really means that.

Original is ungrammatical and redundant. Rephrase to 'It really means that' to form a complete clause with subject and verb. Ensure clear referent for 'that' in context.

× No, not really, because when I buy shoes I think it's important to select the size.

✓ No, not really, because when I buy shoes I think it's important to select the right size.

Add adjective 'right' to clarify 'select the size' and make collocation 'select the right size'. Present tense 'think' is appropriate for habitual opinion.

× I think it's better to try it once.

✓ I think it's better to try them on once.

Use phrasal verb 'try on' for clothing and plural 'them' to refer to shoes. 'Once' is fine for a single fitting.

× I usually buy shoes which cost about ¥100 uh and more because if I choose cheap one.

✓ I usually buy shoes that cost about ¥100 or more, because if I choose a cheap one, ...

Use 'that' for defining relative clause, 'or more' for amounts, and include indefinite article 'a' before 'cheap one'. Sentence needs completion after 'because'—suggest adding result clause. 'Choose' present simple fits habitual action.

× It is not good.

✓ They are not good.

Referent is 'shoes' (plural), so use plural pronoun 'they' and plural verb 'are'. Ensure agreement between pronoun and noun number.

× It depends on situation when I want to the shoes which I want to wear at the in the outdoor activity I choose comfortable shoes and when I want to use the shoes which.

✓ It depends on the situation: when I want shoes to wear for outdoor activities, I choose comfortable shoes, and when I want shoes for formal occasions, I choose fashionable ones.

Add definite article 'the' before 'situation'. Use 'to wear for' and 'outdoor activities' (plural). Split into two clauses with a clear contrast; 'formal occasions' and 'fashionable ones' provide a parallel structure. Original had missing articles, wrong prepositions and incomplete clauses.