Shoes— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be concise and grammatically correct. Start with a clear topic sentence answering the question, then add one or two specific supporting details. Avoid repetition and incorrect tense/word forms (e.g., 'last week', 'a pair of sandals', 'from Gucci'). Use linking words like 'but' or 'however' correctly.

Exemplo: I don’t buy shoes very often. Last week I bought a pair of sandals from Gucci, and I really like the design because it is simple yet elegant.

Sugestão: Give a direct answer and explain clearly with correct grammar. Use present perfect or simple past accurately (e.g., 'I have bought shoes online'). Clarify habits with phrases like 'usually' or 'sometimes'. Use linking words such as 'but' or 'so' to show contrast or reason.

Exemplo: Yes, I have bought shoes online several times because it’s convenient. However, I sometimes prefer going to a shop to try them on before buying.

Sugestão: Answer with clear figures and correct currency, and use proper sentence structure. Start with a direct statement about your typical spending, then give a range and a reason. Avoid unclear words like 'rent' when you mean 'spend'.

Exemplo: I don't spend a lot on shoes. Usually I spend between 1,000 and 10,000 [local currency] depending on the brand and style; I prefer affordable options unless it's a special purchase.

Sugestão: Answer directly and check for meaning and grammar. State your preference clearly ('comfortable shoes'), explain why with a specific reason, and give one brief example. Use linking words like 'because' and correct verb forms.

Exemplo: I prefer comfortable shoes because they make daily life easier. For example, I often wear sneakers when I go to university because they are good for walking and last through long days.

× I usually don't buy shoes too often but I just got one sandals last last week ago.

✓ I usually don't buy shoes very often, but I just got a pair of sandals last week.

The sentence mixes singular 'one' with plural 'sandals' and uses redundant time words 'last last week ago'. Use 'a pair of sandals' or 'one pair of sandals' for footwear, and 'last week' for past time. Also replace 'too often' with 'very often' for naturalness.

× I just got it from a Gucci and I really love it. Design.

✓ I bought it from Gucci and I really love the design.

'a Gucci' is incorrect when referring to the brand; use the brand name without an article. 'It. Design.' is fragmented; combine into 'I really love the design.' to form a complete sentence.

× Yes, I used to bought shoes or like definitely I often bought shoes all.

✓ Yes, I used to buy shoes, or rather, I often bought shoes before.

After 'used to' the base form 'buy' must be used, not past 'bought'. The original also has redundant and unclear phrasing; clarify with 'I often bought shoes before.'

× I then go to a shop because it's very convenient and you don't need to go.

✓ Now I go to a shop less because online shopping is very convenient and you don't need to go out.

The original sentence has contradictory and unclear structure ('I then go' vs 'you don't need to go'). Clarify the meaning: that online shopping is convenient so you don't need to go out to a shop.

× Actually it don't that much because I don't want to use much money but about shoes I I just rent about 1000 to a 10,000 depends on that shoes.

✓ Actually I don't spend that much because I don't want to use a lot of money, but for shoes I usually spend about 1,000 to 10,000, depending on the shoes.

'it don't' is incorrect; subject should be 'I' and verb 'don't'. 'use much money' is unnatural; use 'spend a lot of money'. 'rent' is wrong; use 'spend'. Numbers formatted and 'depends on that shoes' should be 'depending on the shoes'.

× In my opinion, it's definitely uncomfortable shoes because uh, comfortable shoe is make my life easily.

✓ In my opinion, I definitely prefer comfortable shoes because they make my life easier.

The original uses 'uncomfortable' but context shows preference for comfortable shoes. Agreement and noun forms are wrong: 'comfortable shoe is make' should be 'they make' with plural pronoun. Use 'easier' (comparative adverb) and 'prefer comfortable shoes' is natural.

× For example, I wear sneakers often to go to UMM.

✓ For example, I often wear sneakers to go to UMM.

Placement of adverb 'often' is more natural before the verb 'wear'. The preposition 'to go to UMM' is acceptable, but moving 'often' improves fluency.