Shoes— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Cải thiện ngữ pháp cơ bản và từ vựng: tránh dùng các cấu trúc sai (ví dụ "wants in a blue moon", số từ không đúng), dùng cụm từ tự nhiên hơn (ví dụ "once in a blue moon"). Trả lời trực tiếp bằng câu chủ đề ngắn gọn, sau đó cung cấp 1–2 chi tiết hỗ trợ rõ ràng về tần suất và lý do. Giữ tối đa 4-5 câu, dùng liên từ đơn giản (because, so, and).

Exemplo: I only buy shoes once in a blue moon because my current pair fits me well and is comfortable. For example, I usually replace shoes only when they are worn out or damaged, so I rarely shop for new ones.

Sugestão: Sửa lỗi ngữ pháp và trật tự từ: tránh sử dụng từ không chính xác (ví dụ "Leslie"), sử dụng thì phù hợp (have you ever => present perfect). Nói rõ trải nghiệm hoặc lý do cá nhân, dùng linking words như "because" và "for example" để làm rõ. Hạn chế lặp từ và diễn đạt không cần thiết.

Exemplo: No, I have never bought shoes online because I once saw a friend receive a pair that was uncomfortable and looked different from the pictures. For example, the material and fit were not what he expected, so I prefer buying shoes in person.

Sugestão: Trả lời cụ thể hơn với con số hoặc khoảng giá, dùng cấu trúc rõ ràng (topic sentence + lý do). Tránh từ sai và lặp ý ("it's just a small amount" lặp). Sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp về chi phí (e.g., "usually around", "per pair").

Exemplo: I usually spend a small amount on shoes, around $20–$40 per pair, because I don't follow fashion trends or buy from trendy shops. I prefer practical, affordable options rather than expensive branded shoes.

Sugestão: Nói rõ sở thích bằng câu chủ đề trực tiếp ("I prefer comfortable shoes") rồi giải thích với lý do rõ ràng và ngắn gọn. Sử dụng từ vựng chính xác (luxury, comfortable, practical) và liên từ (because, so) để mạch lạc. Loại bỏ các câu dư thừa và câu bị lỗi ngữ pháp.

Exemplo: I prefer comfortable shoes because they are easier to walk in and suit my daily activities. For instance, when I need to move quickly during the day, comfortable sneakers allow me to be more efficient and avoid foot pain.

× It definitely wants in a blue moon because I'm not a huge fan of buying new shoes when my current 1 is really fascinating and also is very fit with my legs, so I feel that I don't need to really buy a new one.

✓ It definitely happens once in a blue moon because I'm not a huge fan of buying new shoes when my current ones are really comfortable and fit my feet well, so I feel that I don't really need to buy a new pair.

Original sentence uses incorrect pronouns and noun forms: 'wants' is wrong for 'happen', 'in a blue moon' needs 'once in a blue moon', 'current 1' should be 'current ones' or 'current pair', 'fascinating' is wrong adjective for comfort, 'is very fit with my legs' is ungrammatical — use 'fit my feet' or 'fit me well'. Also 'a new one' for shoes is better as 'a new pair'. Suggestions: replace incorrect verbs and pronouns, use plural 'ones' for shoes, choose appropriate adjectives (comfortable), and reorder phrases for natural English.

× Leslie never, I will never buying shoe online when my friend who buy it and then he said that the shoes are very uncomfortable and also not fascinating as they see as they saw on the Internet.

✓ Honestly never; I will never buy shoes online because my friend who bought them said the shoes were very uncomfortable and not as attractive as they looked on the Internet.

Errors: incorrect modal/verb form 'will never buying' should be 'will never buy'; 'Leslie' likely meant 'Honestly' or 'Honestly never' (fix content), 'who buy it' should be 'who bought them' (past tense and plural), 'not fascinating as they see as they saw' is ungrammatical — use 'not as attractive as they looked'. Suggestions: use base verb after 'will', change verb tenses to past for reported experience, and use plural pronouns for 'shoes'.

× So I think that I will never change to go to the online shop and buy them.

✓ So I think that I will never switch to buying from online shops.

Problems: 'change to go to the online shop' is awkward and ungrammatical. Use 'switch to' plus gerund 'buying' or 'buying from online shops'. Suggestion: use phrasal verb 'switch to' and gerund form for the action.

× It will definitely a small amount of money when I think that I don't need to wear some fascinating shoes, some really highly recommend shoes on some Tiktok shop.

✓ I usually spend a small amount of money because I don't feel the need to buy fashionable shoes or highly recommended ones from TikTok shops.

Errors: 'It will definitely a small amount of money' lacks a verb and incorrect tense; use 'I usually spend a small amount of money'. 'Wear some fascinating shoes' is odd—'buy fashionable shoes' is better. 'Highly recommend shoes' should be 'highly recommended ones'. Suggestions: use complete clause with subject and verb, use appropriate nouns/adjectives, and gerunds where needed.

× So I think that it would just it's just a small amount of money and I can't afford it.

✓ So I think it's just a small amount of money and I can afford it.

Confusion between 'would' and present tense 'is'; contradictory 'can't afford it' vs 'small amount' — likely intended to say they can afford it. Use present tense 'is' and 'can afford'. Suggestions: keep tense consistent and ensure logical meaning.

× I think that I don't love anything that I will luxury and also very hard to wear.

✓ I don't like anything that is luxurious and hard to wear.

Problems: 'I don't love anything that I will luxury' is ungrammatical; 'will luxury' makes no sense. Use adjective 'luxurious'. 'Love' vs 'like' nuance: 'don't like' is more natural. Suggestions: use correct adjective forms and simpler verbs.

× So I will choose comfortable shoes when it can help me to wearing it fast when I have to do something that are very quickly.

✓ So I choose comfortable shoes because they help me put them on quickly when I have to do things in a hurry.

Errors: 'I will choose' unnecessary future — present habitual 'I choose' better. 'Help me to wearing it fast' should be 'help me put them on quickly'. 'Things that are very quickly' should be 'things in a hurry' or 'when I'm in a hurry'. Suggestions: use correct verb forms after 'help', use plural pronouns for shoes, and choose idiomatic expressions.

× So that I wearing shoes is one of the thing that I think it is very important in for me to have a new day.

✓ Wearing shoes comfortably is one of the things I think is very important for starting a new day.

Original sentence has multiple structure problems: 'So that I wearing shoes' lacks auxiliary and incorrect gerund usage; 'one of the thing' should be 'one of the things'; 'very important in for me to have a new day' is ungrammatical — use 'important for starting a new day'. Suggestions: use gerund phrases correctly, ensure subject-verb agreement, and use idiomatic expressions like 'starting a new day'.