Shoes— Part 1 Relatório
Conversa
Part 1
Examinador
Do you like buying shoes? How often?
Candidato
How often I do not often buy shoes. This shoes that I'm wearing now was brought when I was in primary school. It is its age is more than four years, I believe. I seldom go some exercise, so I do not need so much shoes to wear because they are always new.
Examinador
Have you ever bought shoes online?
Candidato
Yes, I have two shoes brought online. They are lethal. They are just brought to save myself in some emergency situation like tomorrow I have an conference to take part in in my school and it is very very formal and I need to wearing a white black shoes but I don't want to.
Examinador
How much money do you usually spend on shoes?
Candidato
I do not believe the quality of the shoes can be definited by how much I cost on them. The shoes that I am wearing now is my mother send me as my birthday gift and it is more than CN¥100, but the shoes that I bought on my own always less than 50.
Examinador
Which do you prefer, fashionable shoes or comfortable shoes?
Candidato
I always believe comfortable is more important than anything. For shoes, for shirts, for trousers, they are the same. Comfortable is the most and the most most significant factor for me to buy something.
Avaliação
Total
Part 1
Do you like buying shoes? How often?
Pontuação: 55.0Sugestão: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不够自然，且句子结构混乱。建议简化句子，注意时态和单复数，避免重复表达，并使用连接词使回答更连贯。
Exemplo: I don't buy shoes very often. The pair I'm wearing now is more than four years old, as I bought them when I was in primary school. Since I rarely exercise, I don't need many pairs of shoes.
Have you ever bought shoes online?
Pontuação: 50.0Sugestão: 回答中存在语法错误和用词不当，如“lethal”用错，句子不连贯。建议使用正确词汇，简洁表达，并用连接词组织句子。
Exemplo: Yes, I have bought two pairs of shoes online. I usually buy them for emergencies, for example, if I have a formal event at school and need to wear black and white shoes, but I don't own any.
How much money do you usually spend on shoes?
Pontuação: 60.0Sugestão: 回答表达较为清晰，但有语法错误和用词不准确。建议注意时态和句子结构，使用更准确的词汇，并用连接词使内容更流畅。
Exemplo: I don't think the quality of shoes depends on their price. The pair I'm wearing now was a birthday gift from my mother and cost over CN¥100, but the shoes I buy myself usually cost less than CN¥50.
Which do you prefer, fashionable shoes or comfortable shoes?
Pontuação: 65.0Sugestão: 回答表达了观点，但句子重复且不够自然。建议避免重复，使用更地道的表达，并用连接词增强逻辑性。
Exemplo: I always believe comfort is more important than fashion. Whether it's shoes, shirts, or trousers, comfort is the most significant factor for me when buying anything.
Gramática
× How often I do not often buy shoes.
✓ I do not often buy shoes.
句子结构错误，疑问句中主语和频率副词位置错误，应为陈述句时主语在前，频率副词放在动词前。
× This shoes that I'm wearing now was brought when I was in primary school.
✓ These shoes that I'm wearing now were bought when I was in primary school.
“shoes”为复数，指示代词应使用复数形式“these”，动词“was”应改为复数“were”，动词“brought”应为“bought”。
× This shoes that I'm wearing now was brought when I was in primary school.
✓ These shoes that I'm wearing now were bought when I was in primary school.
“brought”是“bring”的过去式，表示带来；此处应使用“buy”的过去分词“bought”，表示买的动作。
× It is its age is more than four years, I believe.
✓ I believe it is more than four years old.
句子结构混乱，重复使用“is”，应调整为“it is more than four years old”。
× I seldom go some exercise, so I do not need so much shoes to wear because they are always new.
✓ I seldom do any exercise, so I do not need many shoes to wear because they are always new.
“go some exercise”搭配错误，应为“do any exercise”；“so much shoes”应为复数“many shoes”。
× Yes, I have two shoes brought online.
✓ Yes, I have bought two pairs of shoes online.
“two shoes”不合适，鞋通常以“pairs”计数，且“brought”应为“bought”。
× Yes, I have two shoes brought online.
✓ Yes, I have bought two pairs of shoes online.
“brought”是“bring”的过去式，表示带来；此处应使用“buy”的过去分词“bought”，表示买的动作。
× They are lethal.
✓ They are comfortable.
“lethal”意为致命的，语义不符，应使用形容鞋子合适的词，如“comfortable”。
× I need to wearing a white black shoes but I don't want to.
✓ I need to wear white and black shoes but I don't want to.
“need to”后应接动词原形“wear”，且“white black shoes”应分开为“white and black shoes”。
× I have an conference to take part in in my school and it is very very formal
✓ I have a conference to take part in at my school and it is very, very formal.
“conference”以辅音音素开头，冠词应为“a”；“in in”重复，应改为“in at”。
× I have an conference to take part in in my school
✓ I have a conference to take part in at my school
“take part in”后面接地点时应用“at”而非重复“in”。
× The shoes that I am wearing now is my mother send me as my birthday gift
✓ The shoes that I am wearing now were sent to me by my mother as my birthday gift
主句谓语应为复数“were sent”，且“send me”应改为被动语态“sent to me by”。
× The shoes that I am wearing now is my mother send me as my birthday gift
✓ The shoes that I am wearing now were sent to me by my mother as my birthday gift
“shoes”为复数，谓语动词应使用复数形式“were”。
× I do not believe the quality of the shoes can be definited by how much I cost on them.
✓ I do not believe the quality of the shoes can be defined by how much I spend on them.
“definited”拼写错误，应为“defined”；“cost on”搭配错误，应为“spend on”。
× the shoes that I bought on my own always less than 50.
✓ the shoes that I bought on my own always cost less than 50.
缺少谓语动词“cost”，使句子完整。
× I always believe comfortable is more important than anything.
✓ I always believe comfort is more important than anything.
“comfortable”是形容词，需用名词“comfort”作主语。
× Comfortable is the most and the most most significant factor for me to buy something.
✓ Comfort is the most significant factor for me when buying something.
“comfortable”应改为名词“comfort”；“the most and the most most”重复，应简化为“the most significant”；“to buy something”改为“when buying something”更自然。
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