Shoes— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is clear but can be more natural and concise. Instead of 'my frequency is quite often', say 'I buy shoes quite often'. Also, avoid redundancy by combining ideas smoothly.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy buying shoes and usually buy a new pair every season.

Sugestão: Try to use present perfect tense for experiences and improve sentence structure for clarity. For example, say 'I have often bought shoes online' and explain reasons more naturally. Also, use linking words to connect ideas.

Exemplo: Yes, I have often bought shoes online, especially sneakers. I prefer brands like Adidas or Nike because I know my size fits well, which makes online shopping convenient.

Sugestão: Your answer is a bit unclear and grammatically incorrect. Try to express your ideas more clearly and use linking words. For example, explain the cost per pair and then the total yearly expense.

Exemplo: Each pair of shoes costs around a hundred dollars, so individually it's not much. However, if I add up all my purchases over a year, it becomes quite a significant amount.

Sugestão: Good answer with clear reasons. To improve, avoid repeating 'prefer' and use linking words like 'because' and 'so'. Also, correct minor grammar errors such as 'helps' to 'help'.

Exemplo: I prefer comfortable shoes because of my work experience. Since I have to walk and stand for long periods, comfortable shoes help me feel better and last all day.

× Yes, I often bought shoes online, especially sneakers and I prefer the brand from Adidas or Nike because I know my size to fit this brand and it's helped me convenience to purchasing online.

✓ Yes, I often buy shoes online, especially sneakers, and I prefer brands from Adidas or Nike because I know my size fits these brands and it helps me to purchase online conveniently.

The sentence incorrectly uses the past tense 'bought' when referring to a habitual action, which should be in the present tense 'buy'. Also, 'helped me convenience to purchasing' is incorrect; it should be 'helps me to purchase online conveniently' to express ongoing assistance. The verb 'fit' should be 'fits' to agree with the singular noun 'size'. The phrase 'brand from Adidas or Nike' should be plural 'brands from Adidas or Nike' because it refers to multiple brands.

× Yes, I often bought shoes online, especially sneakers and I prefer the brand from Adidas or Nike because I know my size to fit this brand and it's helped me convenience to purchasing online.

✓ Yes, I often buy shoes online, especially sneakers, and I prefer brands from Adidas or Nike because I know my size fits these brands and it helps me to purchase online conveniently.

The phrase 'the brand from Adidas or Nike' is incorrect because 'Adidas' and 'Nike' are two different brands, so the plural 'brands' should be used. Also, 'this brand' should be 'these brands' to match the plural form.

× Yes, I often bought shoes online, especially sneakers and I prefer the brand from Adidas or Nike because I know my size to fit this brand and it's helped me convenience to purchasing online.

✓ Yes, I often buy shoes online, especially sneakers, and I prefer brands from Adidas or Nike because I know my size fits these brands and it helps me to purchase online conveniently.

The phrase 'convenience to purchasing' is incorrect. The correct form is 'helps me to purchase online conveniently' where 'purchase' is the base verb after 'helps me to' and 'conveniently' is the adverb modifying the verb.

× If I look into every item it will not spend a lot of money because every pair of my shoe about hundreds, but if I put them all together and count in yearly or annually it will be a bit big amount.

✓ If I look at every item, I will not spend a lot of money because every pair of my shoes costs about a hundred, but if I put them all together and count yearly or annually, it will be a bit of a big amount.

The phrase 'every pair of my shoe' is incorrect because 'shoe' should be plural 'shoes' when referring to multiple pairs. Also, 'about hundreds' is vague and should be 'about a hundred' to indicate approximate cost. The phrase 'count in yearly or annually' is awkward; 'count yearly or annually' is better.

× If I look into every item it will not spend a lot of money because every pair of my shoe about hundreds, but if I put them all together and count in yearly or annually it will be a bit big amount.

✓ If I look at every item, I will not spend a lot of money because every pair of my shoes costs about a hundred, but if I put them all together and count yearly or annually, it will be a bit of a big amount.

The preposition 'look into' is incorrect here; the correct preposition is 'look at' when referring to examining items. Also, 'count in yearly or annually' should be 'count yearly or annually' without 'in'.

× If I look into every item it will not spend a lot of money because every pair of my shoe about hundreds, but if I put them all together and count in yearly or annually it will be a bit big amount.

✓ If I look at every item, I will not spend a lot of money because every pair of my shoes costs about a hundred, but if I put them all together and count yearly or annually, it will be a bit of a big amount.

The phrase 'a bit big amount' is incorrect; it should be 'a bit of a big amount' or better 'a fairly large amount' to correctly quantify the money spent.

× I prefer comfortable shoes because of my work experiences. I need to walk a lot and stand for a long time so I prefer comfortable shoes that can helps me to feel better and last all day long.

✓ I prefer comfortable shoes because of my work experiences. I need to walk a lot and stand for a long time, so I prefer comfortable shoes that can help me feel better and last all day long.

The phrase 'can helps me to feel better' is incorrect because after modal verb 'can', the base form of the verb 'help' should be used, not 'helps'. Also, 'help me feel' is more natural than 'help me to feel' in this context.

× I prefer comfortable shoes because of my work experiences. I need to walk a lot and stand for a long time so I prefer comfortable shoes that can helps me to feel better and last all day long.

✓ I prefer comfortable shoes because of my work experiences. I need to walk a lot and stand for a long time, so I prefer comfortable shoes that can help me feel better and last all day long.

The verb 'helps' is incorrectly used after the modal verb 'can'. After 'can', the base form 'help' should be used regardless of the subject.