Shoes— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Try to use correct vocabulary and grammar to make your answer clearer and more natural. Also, avoid repeating words like 'amazing' and keep your answer concise within 5 sentences. For example, say "Yes, I enjoy buying shoes and usually purchase about two pairs each month, including both flats and heels."

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy buying shoes and usually purchase about two pairs each month, including both flats and heels. Shopping for shoes is exciting to me because I like to have different styles for various occasions.

Sugestão: Focus on correct sentence structure and avoid repeating words like 'amazing'. Use linking words to connect ideas logically. For example, "Yes, I buy shoes online every month, usually from apps based in Xi'an or the US. It is exciting to receive the orders at home and open them."

Exemplo: Yes, I buy shoes online every month, usually from apps based in Xi'an or the US. It is exciting to receive the orders at home and open them because I never know exactly how they will look.

Sugestão: Improve grammar and clarity by structuring your answer properly. Avoid incomplete sentences. For example, "The amount I spend on shoes depends on my budget each month, but usually, I spend around 10 to 20 riyals."

Exemplo: The amount I spend on shoes depends on my budget each month, but usually, I spend around 10 to 20 riyals.

Sugestão: Try to organize your answer with clear linking words and correct grammar. For example, "I prefer both fashionable and comfortable shoes because I wear fashionable ones to parties or clubs, while comfortable shoes are better for university or shopping with my family."

Exemplo: I prefer both fashionable and comfortable shoes because I wear fashionable ones to parties or clubs, while comfortable shoes are better for university or shopping with my family.

× Yes I like paying shoes every month.

✓ Yes, I like buying shoes every month.

The verb 'paying' is incorrect here because the action is about purchasing shoes, so the correct verb is 'buying'. The verb 'like' is followed by the gerund form of the verb that describes the activity one enjoys.

× That is amazing.

✓ That is amazing.

This sentence is grammatically correct but is a fragment and lacks context. However, it is acceptable as a short response expressing enthusiasm.

× Amazing thing to me that to go to shopping and buy many shoes.

✓ It is amazing to me to go shopping and buy many shoes.

The original sentence has incorrect word order and missing subjects. The corrected sentence includes the subject 'It' and corrects the phrase to 'go shopping' instead of 'go to shopping'.

× Maybe in one month I'll buy 2 shoes between flat or height shoes and also.

✓ Maybe in one month I'll buy 2 pairs of shoes, either flat or high-heeled shoes.

The word 'shoes' is plural and should be counted as 'pairs of shoes'. Also, 'height shoes' is incorrect; the correct term is 'high-heeled shoes'. The phrase 'between flat or height shoes' is corrected to 'either flat or high-heeled shoes' for clarity.

× Yes of course I every month I have do online shopping from Xi'an or on US app and it is very amazing.

✓ Yes, of course, every month I do online shopping from Xi'an or on US apps and it is very amazing.

The phrase 'I have do' is incorrect; the correct form is 'I do'. The modal verb 'have' is unnecessary here. Also, 'app' should be plural 'apps' if referring to multiple applications.

× It is very fun and amazing things to buy online and when the order is delivered to home when I open it this.

✓ It is very fun and amazing to buy online, and when the order is delivered to my home, I feel excited when I open it.

The original sentence has awkward structure and unclear phrasing. 'Amazing things' is incorrect here; it should be 'amazing' as an adjective. Also, 'delivered to home' should be 'delivered to my home'. The sentence is restructured for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× That's depend on how much of money I have in this in this month.

✓ That depends on how much money I have this month.

The verb 'depend' should be in third person singular form 'depends' to agree with the subject 'That'. The phrase 'how much of money' is incorrect; it should be 'how much money'. The repetition 'in this in this month' is corrected to 'this month'.

× Maybe like 1020 reals every month and I want to.

✓ Maybe like 10 to 20 reals every month, and I want to.

The number '1020' is unclear and likely meant to be '10 to 20'. Also, the sentence is incomplete but corrected for clarity and number expression.

× I prefer both of them because fashionable shoes maybe I can use it for party for clubs but comfortable shoes I use it for university or when I go to shopping with my family or anything.

✓ I prefer both of them because I can use fashionable shoes for parties or clubs, but I use comfortable shoes for university or when I go shopping with my family or for other activities.

The original sentence has run-on structure and incorrect pronoun use ('it' instead of 'them'). Also, 'go to shopping' is incorrect; it should be 'go shopping'. The sentence is restructured for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Is it depends on the situation that I want to.

✓ It depends on the situation.

The phrase 'Is it depends' is incorrect; the correct form is 'It depends'. The phrase 'that I want to' is unnecessary and incomplete, so it is removed for clarity.