Shoes— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 回答不够自然，表达不清晰，语法错误较多，建议简化句子结构，直接回答问题，并补充具体细节。

Exemplo: Yes, I like buying shoes because they make me feel confident. I usually buy new shoes about once a year.

Sugestão: 回答中有语法和表达错误，句子不连贯，建议使用简单句子表达观点，并用连接词使回答更流畅。

Exemplo: Yes, I have bought shoes online several times. It is very convenient because I can see many styles and sizes without leaving my room. I enjoy this experience.

Sugestão: 回答不够清晰，语法错误较多，建议直接回答问题并说明原因，使用正确的词汇和句型。

Exemplo: It depends on the type of shoes, but I usually spend about 100 RMB. I prefer not to spend too much money on shoes.

Sugestão: 回答表达不够流畅，语法错误较多，建议简化句子，直接表达观点并给出具体原因。

Exemplo: I prefer comfortable shoes because I wear them every day. Comfort is more important to me than fashion.

× I almost once a year buy a shoes.

✓ I almost once a year buy shoes.

这里的'shoes'是复数名词，前面不需要加不定冠词'a'，因为'a'用于单数可数名词。应去掉'a'。

× Temperature, how about your shoes online several times, I think that is very convenient, and then I can browse a wonderful style and size without lifting my room.

✓ I have bought shoes online several times, I think that is very convenient, and then I can browse wonderful styles and sizes without leaving my room.

句子开头的'Temperature'无意义，应删除。'your shoes online several times'表达不清，应改为'I have bought shoes online several times'。'a wonderful style and size'应为复数形式'styles and sizes'。'lifting my room'应为'leaving my room'，动词用错。

× I really love buying shoes on Internet, it's very wonderful experience.

✓ I really love buying shoes on the Internet, it's a very wonderful experience.

'on Internet'前应加定冠词'the'。'it's very wonderful experience'中缺少不定冠词'a'，应为'a very wonderful experience'。

× Is it depend on different types?

✓ It depends on different types.

疑问句结构错误，应为陈述句'It depends on different types.'。

× I almost spy in the 100 RB by shoes.

✓ I almost spend 100 RMB on shoes.

'spy'应为'spend'，拼写错误。'the 100 RB'应为'100 RMB'，且不加定冠词。'by shoes'应为'on shoes'。

× I prefer comfortable shoes over fashionable ones because it comfortable is essential for deliver because I wear shoes everyday so comfortable is very important issues.

✓ I prefer comfortable shoes over fashionable ones because comfort is essential for me since I wear shoes every day, so comfort is a very important issue.

'it comfortable is'语序错误，应为'comfort is'。'essential for deliver'表达不清，应为'essential for me'。'everyday'应为副词短语'every day'。'comfortable is very important issues'主谓不一致，应为'comfort is a very important issue'。