Library— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Ваш ответ звучит неестественно и содержит повторения. Постарайтесь отвечать более прямо и избегать излишних слов. Используйте связки для плавности речи и разнообразьте лексику.

Exemplo: No, I don't often go to the library because I prefer watching movies in my free time. I find reading books less interesting, so I usually spend my leisure time differently.

Sugestão: Ответ не соответствует вопросу и содержит грамматические ошибки. Старайтесь отвечать прямо, используя связки и конкретные детали, избегая повторов и некорректных выражений.

Exemplo: I usually don't spend time in the library because I don't read books. However, I notice that many people come here to study and read regularly to improve their knowledge.

Sugestão: Ответ неясен и содержит ошибки. Постарайтесь строить предложения логично, отвечая прямо на вопрос и добавляя конкретные детали с помощью связок.

Exemplo: Yes, I used to go to the library when I was a kid. I enjoyed reading interesting books there, which helped me learn new things.

Sugestão: Ответ содержит догадки и нечеткие выражения. Лучше отвечать прямо, используя связки и избегая ненужных деталей, не относящихся к вопросу.

Exemplo: I am not sure about Chinese kids, but I believe many of them visit libraries regularly to study and read books.

× I just like watching movies but reading book is not for me because they are so boring.

✓ I just like watching movies but reading books is not for me because they are so boring.

The word 'book' should be plural 'books' because it refers to reading in general, which is a countable noun in plural form here.

× As I don't read any books so other people in library especially read books every day.

✓ As I don't read any books, other people in the library especially read books every day.

The preposition 'in' requires the definite article 'the' before 'library' to specify the place. Also, the conjunction 'so' is redundant after 'As' and should be removed.

× I think people who read books every day, they have more brain and intelligent people.

✓ I think people who read books every day are more intelligent.

The sentence is redundant and awkward. 'They have more brain and intelligent people' is incorrect. The correction simplifies the sentence and uses the adjective 'intelligent' properly.

× They are very intelligent people so they can receive memory more.

✓ They are very intelligent people so they can remember more.

The phrase 'receive memory more' is incorrect. The verb 'remember' is appropriate here, and 'more' should follow the verb directly.

× As I know study in international, another wife I took to school, I don't have any time to go any libraries, but in my childhood, yes, of course I go to the library when I was a kid and I like read interesting books.

✓ As I studied in an international school, and my other wife took me to school, I didn't have any time to go to any libraries, but in my childhood, yes, of course I went to the library when I was a kid and I liked reading interesting books.

The sentence has multiple tense errors: 'know study' should be 'studied', 'go' should be 'went', 'like read' should be 'liked reading'. Also, 'any libraries' should be preceded by 'to', and 'another wife' is unclear but kept as is.

× I don't have any time to go any libraries

✓ I don't have any time to go to any libraries

The verb 'go' when followed by a place requires the preposition 'to' before the noun.

× yes, of course I go to the library when I was a kid

✓ yes, of course I went to the library when I was a kid

The action happened in the past, so the verb should be in the past tense 'went' instead of 'go'.

× Due to the I am Kazakh person, I unfortunately I don't know about Chinese kids, but maybe I think that most of the Chinese people, they wear the glasses and so I think they often go to the library and read books.

✓ Because I am Kazakh, unfortunately I don't know much about Chinese kids, but maybe I think that most Chinese people wear glasses and so I think they often go to the library and read books.

The phrase 'Due to the I am Kazakh person' is incorrect; 'Because I am Kazakh' is better. Also, 'the Chinese people, they' is redundant; 'most Chinese people' suffices. 'Wear the glasses' should be 'wear glasses' without 'the'.