Library— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is understandable but a bit long and slightly redundant. Try to make your response more concise and natural by avoiding unnecessary details and grammatical errors. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Exemplo: No, I don't often go to the library because there is a large bookstore near my home where I can buy books. This way, I don't have to worry about returning them later.

Sugestão: Your answer is clear but can be improved by using more natural expressions and linking words. Avoid filler sounds like 'MMM' and try to be more concise while providing specific details.

Exemplo: I usually read books in the library. Also, I like to check books I'm interested in before buying them, so I can understand the content and decide if I want to purchase them later.

Sugestão: Your answer is good but can be more fluent by removing filler words like 'Uh' and improving sentence structure. Use linking words to connect ideas logically.

Exemplo: No, I didn't go to the library often when I was a kid because I wasn't very interested in reading. However, I enjoy going now since I decided to major in literature.

Sugestão: Your answer addresses the question but can be improved by using more precise vocabulary and better linking words. Also, avoid informal phrases like 'I mean' and check for grammatical accuracy.

Exemplo: I don't think Chinese kids generally go to the library often. However, it depends on the location. For example, in Shanghai, there are many libraries near universities, so children of teachers often visit them.

× I can buy a tons of books from there instead of having to borrow books from the library and have to keep in mind to return them back.

✓ I can buy tons of books from there instead of having to borrow books from the library and keep in mind to return them.

The phrase 'a tons of books' is incorrect because 'tons' is plural and should not be preceded by the singular article 'a'. Also, 'return them back' is redundant because 'return' already implies 'back'. So, 'a tons of books' should be corrected to 'tons of books' and 'return them back' to 'return them'.

× I tend to check upon books that I'm not sure of buying beforehand in the library so I get a good grasp of what the book is about and whether I would like it if I do buy it later.

✓ I tend to check books that I'm not sure about buying beforehand in the library so I get a good grasp of what the book is about and whether I would like it if I do buy it later.

The phrase 'check upon books' is incorrect; the correct verb phrase is 'check books' or 'look up books'. Also, 'not sure of buying' should be 'not sure about buying' because 'sure about' is the correct prepositional phrase. Therefore, 'check upon books that I'm not sure of buying' should be corrected to 'check books that I'm not sure about buying'.

× I don't usually go to the library. Uh, I didn't go to the library that often as many kids did, but I do enjoy going to the library now since I decided to major in literature.

✓ I didn't usually go to the library. Uh, I didn't go to the library as often as many kids did, but I do enjoy going to the library now since I decided to major in literature.

The sentence 'I don't usually go to the library' is in present tense but the context is about the past, so it should be 'I didn't usually go to the library'. Also, 'didn't go to the library that often as many kids did' is incorrect; the correct comparative structure is 'as often as many kids did'.

× there are tons of library here, especially near higher institutions.

✓ there are tons of libraries here, especially near higher institutions.

The word 'library' is singular, but 'tons of' requires a plural noun. Therefore, 'tons of library' should be corrected to 'tons of libraries'.

× So the kids of teachers often go to the library.

✓ So the kids of teachers often go to the libraries.

Since the previous sentence refers to multiple libraries, it is more consistent to say 'go to the libraries' instead of 'go to the library'. This maintains plural agreement and clarity.