Library— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: In English (Cambodia), try to make your answer clearer and more natural by using correct sentence structures and avoiding redundancy. For example, say "I often go to the library on weekends. Sometimes, if I don't have time to study at home, I go there with my friends to study and relax."

Exemplo: I often go to the library on weekends. Sometimes, if I don't have time to study at home, I go there with my friends to study and relax.

Sugestão: In English (Cambodia), focus on answering the question clearly and logically. Use simple and correct sentences to explain your activities in the library. For example, "We usually study questions given by our teacher. Sometimes, we have meetings to discuss our university projects."

Exemplo: We usually study questions given by our teacher. Sometimes, we have meetings to discuss our university projects.

Sugestão: In English (Cambodia), try to organize your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details. Use correct grammar and vocabulary. For example, "Yes, I often went to the library as a child. I enjoyed reading funny and magic books, and sometimes the teacher gave us books to read in class. We had fun and laughed together."

Exemplo: Yes, I often went to the library as a child. I enjoyed reading funny and magic books, and sometimes the teacher gave us books to read in class. We had fun and laughed together.

Sugestão: In English (Cambodia), try to express your opinion clearly and use correct vocabulary. For example, "From what I see on television, Chinese children often go to the library. They are hardworking and smart, and they have many libraries where they can read."

Exemplo: From what I see on television, Chinese children often go to the library. They are hardworking and smart, and they have many libraries where they can read.

× Yes I do I often go to the library on my weekend day and sometimes when I don't have the study time then I go there after with my friend and visit in the table and enjoy our.

✓ Yes, I do. I often go to the library on my weekend days, and sometimes when I don't have study time, I go there afterwards with my friends, sit at the table, and enjoy ourselves.

The sentence has singular and plural issues such as 'weekend day' should be 'weekend days' because it refers to multiple days. 'Friend' should be 'friends' to match the plural context. Also, 'enjoy our' is incomplete and should be 'enjoy ourselves' to correctly use the reflexive pronoun.

× Actually, we usually take out one the question that we missing from a teacher and sometimes we use meeting for my parents for our chromosome to submit people in our university.

✓ Actually, we usually take out one question that we are missing from the teacher, and sometimes we have meetings with my parents for our coursework to submit to people at our university.

The sentence has singular/plural issues such as 'one the question' should be 'one question'. 'Chromosome' is incorrect and likely a misused word; 'coursework' fits better. 'Meeting' should be plural 'meetings' if referring to multiple occasions. Also, 'submit people' is incorrect; it should be 'submit to people' or 'submit work to people'.

× Yes, of course, we always go there to make fun, to read the comedy book, the the magic book and the teacher write it to our class man.

✓ Yes, of course, we always went there to have fun, to read comedy books, magic books, and the teacher wrote them to our class.

The question is about past habits, so the verb tense should be past tense: 'go' should be 'went', 'make fun' should be 'have fun', 'book' should be plural 'books' to match the context, and 'write' should be 'wrote' to match past tense.

× And we make fun and laugh together and we join together.

✓ And we have fun and laugh together, and we join together.

'Make fun' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'have fun'. The rest is acceptable but adding commas improves clarity.

× Actually, I see on the television the heat in China country, always going to the library.

✓ Actually, I see on television that people in China always go to the library.

The sentence has present tense issues and awkward phrasing. 'Heat in China country' is unclear; likely meant 'people in China'. 'Always going' should be 'always go' to match present simple tense for habitual actions.

× They are hardworking. They are so well, so smart that has a lot of liberal in there that they have the opportunity to read it.

✓ They are hardworking. They are very smart and have a lot of libraries there, so they have the opportunity to read.

'Has' should be 'have' to agree with plural subject 'they'. 'Liberal' is incorrect; the correct word is 'libraries'. 'So well' is incorrect here; 'very' is better to modify 'smart'. 'Read it' is vague; 'read' suffices.