Library— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and slightly unclear. Try to avoid repeating the same idea (not liking to read) and improve sentence structure for clarity. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. For example, instead of repeating 'because I don't like', you can say 'I don't often go to the library as I prefer other ways of learning.'

Exemplo: No, I don't often go to the library because I prefer studying at home. However, I sometimes visit the library to read English books that help me improve my language skills since I want to study abroad.

Sugestão: Your answer has some grammar mistakes and unclear phrases like 'I spend my vocabulary.' Try to use correct expressions and provide more specific details. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

Exemplo: In the library, I usually read different types of books, including sports and English books. I focus on English books because they help me improve my language skills and expand my vocabulary.

Sugestão: Your answer is generally clear but has some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. For example, say 'my room' instead of 'at my room' and 'comfortable and relaxing' instead of 'comfortable and relaxed.' Use linking words to improve flow.

Exemplo: No, I didn't go to the library when I was a kid because I preferred studying English in my room. It was a comfortable and relaxing place where I could concentrate better, so I found it easier to focus on my studies at home.

Sugestão: Your answer is unclear and contains irrelevant or confusing information. Try to directly answer the question with a clear opinion or admit if you don't know. Avoid unrelated ideas like 'good business' or 'selling a lot.'

Exemplo: I'm not sure if Chinese kids often go to the library, but I think many of them do because libraries provide useful information and a good environment for studying.

× However, sometimes use the library.

✓ However, sometimes I use the library.

The sentence is missing the subject 'I'. Every sentence requires a subject to be complete. Adding 'I' corrects the sentence structure.

× I usually read a variety of books in the library such as sports and English.

✓ I usually read a variety of books in the library such as sports books and English books.

The word 'sports' alone is unclear; it should be 'sports books' to specify the type of books. This clarifies the plural noun usage.

× I read a lot of English books because English books improve my language skill and I spend my vocabulary.

✓ I read a lot of English books because English books improve my language skills and I expand my vocabulary.

'Language skill' should be plural 'language skills' to refer to multiple abilities. 'Spend my vocabulary' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'expand my vocabulary' meaning to increase it.

× I prefer to study English at my room because it was a very comfortable and relaxed where I could concentrate better.

✓ I preferred to study English in my room because it was very comfortable and relaxing, where I could concentrate better.

Since the question is about the past, 'prefer' should be in past tense 'preferred'. 'At my room' is incorrect preposition; 'in my room' is correct. 'Relaxed' should be 'relaxing' to describe the environment.

× I prefer to study English at my room because it was a very comfortable and relaxed where I could concentrate better.

✓ I preferred to study English in my room because it was very comfortable and relaxing, where I could concentrate better.

The correct preposition for a room is 'in', not 'at'. Also, 'relaxed' should be 'relaxing' to describe the atmosphere.

× I have no idea Chinese kids go to the library or not.

✓ I have no idea whether Chinese kids go to the library or not.

The sentence lacks the conjunction 'whether' to introduce the indirect question properly.

× I think they go because they have a lot of information and have a good business for that kids.

✓ I think they go because they have a lot of information and there is a good business for those kids.

The sentence is missing 'there is' to indicate existence. 'That kids' is incorrect; it should be 'those kids' as a demonstrative pronoun for plural.

× I think they are selling a lot.

✓ I think they sell a lot.

The present continuous 'are selling' is less appropriate here; the simple present 'sell' is better to express habitual action.