Library— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Câu trả lời của bạn cần tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và sử dụng từ chính xác hơn. Ví dụ, "a piece effects" nên là "a peaceful and calming effect". Ngoài ra, câu trả lời nên ngắn gọn, tự nhiên và tránh lặp từ như "libraries" nhiều lần.

Exemplo: I often go to the library because I enjoy reading books there. It gives me a peaceful and calming atmosphere that helps me focus.

Sugestão: Bạn cần chú ý ngữ pháp, ví dụ "I usually reading" nên là "I usually read". Ngoài ra, câu trả lời nên có cấu trúc rõ ràng hơn và sử dụng liên từ để câu văn mạch lạc.

Exemplo: I usually read books in the library, especially manga like Conan and Doraemon. When I read there, I feel relaxed because the environment is quiet.

Sugestão: Câu trả lời có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và cấu trúc không rõ ràng. Bạn nên tránh dùng từ không phù hợp như "You were a kid" và sử dụng liên từ hợp lý hơn như "but" thay vì "and however". Câu trả lời nên ngắn gọn, rõ ràng và mạch lạc.

Exemplo: I didn't often go to the library when I was a kid because there were not many libraries in my city. However, I sometimes visited the library with my parents to borrow books.

Sugestão: Câu trả lời quá ngắn và không trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi. Bạn nên mở rộng câu trả lời bằng cách giải thích lý do hoặc đưa ra ý kiến cá nhân. Ngoài ra, câu trả lời nên đúng ngữ pháp, ví dụ "I'm Vietnamese kid" nên là "I'm a Vietnamese kid".

Exemplo: I'm not sure about Chinese kids, but in my experience, many Vietnamese kids often go to the library to study and read books.

× It brings me a piece effects and calming effect when I reading books in a piece environment.

✓ It brings me a peaceful and calming effect when I read books in a peaceful environment.

The phrase 'a piece effects' is incorrect; it should be 'a peaceful and calming effect' to correctly describe the feeling. Also, 'when I reading' is grammatically incorrect; it should be 'when I read' to match the present tense and subject-verb agreement.

× I usually reading books, especially manga like Conan and Doraemon.

✓ I usually read books, especially manga like Conan and Doraemon.

The verb 'reading' is incorrectly used after 'usually'. The correct form is the base verb 'read' to indicate habitual action.

× When I'm reading in the library I feel relaxed and quiet.

✓ When I'm reading in the library, I feel relaxed and quiet.

A comma is needed after the introductory clause 'When I'm reading in the library' to improve sentence clarity and correctness.

× You were a kid. I didn't go to a library when I was a kid because there's not many libraries in my city and however, I remember something sometimes visiting the library with my parents to borrow books.

✓ When I was a kid, I didn't go to a library because there weren't many libraries in my city; however, I sometimes remember visiting the library with my parents to borrow books.

The sentence starts with 'You were a kid,' which is incorrect in context; it should be 'When I was a kid.' Also, 'there's not many libraries' should be 'there weren't many libraries' to match past tense and subject-verb agreement. The phrase 'I remember something sometimes visiting' is awkward; it should be 'I sometimes remember visiting.' Proper punctuation is added for clarity.