Library— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Try to correct grammar mistakes and improve sentence clarity. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid redundancy. For example, say "I frequently go to the library because it is quiet and has a wide variety of books, including online resources."

Exemplo: I often visit the library because it is a quiet place where I can focus. Moreover, it offers a wide range of books and online materials that help me with my research.

Sugestão: Make sure to form complete sentences and use linking words to connect ideas. Also, avoid repeating the same information. For example, "I usually read books and do research in the library. Additionally, I complete my assignments there because it is quiet and has many useful books."

Exemplo: In the library, I usually read books and conduct research. Furthermore, I often complete my assignments there because the quiet environment helps me concentrate.

Sugestão: Avoid pronoun errors and improve sentence structure. Use linking words to make your answer coherent. For example, "I used to go to the library with my parents every weekend. It was a good place to do my homework and enjoy reading books."

Exemplo: When I was a child, I used to visit the library with my parents every weekend. It was a great place to do my homework and enjoy reading various books.

Sugestão: Improve grammar and sentence flow by using linking words. Also, clarify your points. For example, "Chinese parents encourage their children to visit the library because it offers a wide range of resources and books. Additionally, it is a good place for socializing."

Exemplo: Chinese parents often encourage their children to go to the library because it provides a variety of resources and books. Moreover, the library is a good place for children to meet and interact with others.

× I frequently go to the library to read books and do the research.

✓ I frequently go to the library to read books and do research.

The word 'research' is an uncountable noun and does not require the definite article 'the' before it in this context.

× It's really good place because it is quite.

✓ It's a really good place because it is quiet.

The sentence is missing the indefinite article 'a' before 'really good place'. Also, 'quite' is an adverb meaning 'completely' or 'to a certain extent', but the intended word is 'quiet', an adjective describing the place.

× It has many types of books it's provide online.

✓ It has many types of books; it provides them online.

The original sentence is a run-on sentence and uses incorrect verb form 'provide' instead of 'provides'. It needs to be split or connected properly and use the correct third person singular verb form.

× Go to the library to read books and do research.

✓ I go to the library to read books and do research.

The sentence lacks a subject, which is necessary for a complete sentence.

× Sometimes I do to to my assignment there due to the quietness the library provide also a wide range of books that provide me.

✓ Sometimes I do my assignments there due to the quietness the library provides and also the wide range of books it offers me.

The phrase 'do to to my assignment' is incorrect; it should be 'do my assignments'. Also, 'provide' should be 'provides' to agree with singular subject 'library'. The sentence structure is improved for clarity.

× He used to go to the library with my parents every weekend to enjoy the weekend and get the benefits from the books where available in the libraries and it was a good place to do my homework and enjoy.

✓ I used to go to the library with my parents every weekend to enjoy the weekend and benefit from the books available in the libraries; it was a good place to do my homework and enjoy myself.

The pronoun 'He' is incorrect as the speaker refers to themselves. Also, 'get the benefits from' is better expressed as 'benefit from'. The sentence is long and can be split for clarity. 'Enjoy' should be 'enjoy myself' to be reflexive.

× The Chinese parents encouraged their children to go to the library due to the variety, range of resources and the many books it's provided.

✓ Chinese parents encourage their children to go to the library due to the variety and range of resources and the many books it provides.

'The Chinese parents' is too specific; 'Chinese parents' is more general. 'It's provided' is incorrect; it should be 'it provides' to match present tense. Also, 'variety, range of resources' needs 'and' to connect properly.

× And it is really good place to meet.

✓ And it is a really good place to meet.

The sentence is missing the indefinite article 'a' before 'really good place'.