Library— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is understandable but lacks natural phrasing and clarity. Try to use more natural expressions and correct grammar, for example, say "I prefer to study at home by myself using the Internet." Also, avoid redundancy and keep your answer concise.

Exemplo: No, I usually study at home by myself using the Internet because it's more convenient for me.

Sugestão: Your answer has good content but needs better structure and clearer linking words. Avoid repetition and use linking words like "then" or "after that" to make your answer coherent. Also, try to be more specific about the topics or types of books you read.

Exemplo: First, I look for books that interest me or can help me learn new things. Then, I pick some and spend time reading them to gain more knowledge.

Sugestão: Your answer is a bit unclear and grammatically incorrect. Try to make your sentences simpler and clearer. For example, say "Yes, I used to go to the school library when I was a kid. We had a special library period during classes." Avoid unnecessary repetition and confusing phrases.

Exemplo: Yes, I used to go to the school library when I was a child. We had a special time during school for reading in the library.

Sugestão: Your answer does not directly address the question and is somewhat confusing. Try to answer the question clearly and directly. For example, say "Yes, many Chinese kids often go to the library to study and read books." Also, avoid unrelated information and keep your answer focused.

Exemplo: Yes, many Chinese children often visit libraries to read books and study because libraries are important places for learning.

× No, I prefer to study at home from Internet by my own.

✓ No, I prefer to study at home using the Internet on my own.

The phrase 'from Internet' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'using' or 'on' when referring to the Internet. Also, 'by my own' should be 'on my own' to indicate doing something independently.

× 1st I look around the library to find a suitable book for me and look for more topics which can help me which can which can help me in knowledge.

✓ First, I look around the library to find a suitable book for me and look for more topics that can help me gain knowledge.

The sentence is repetitive and awkwardly structured. 'Which can help me which can which can help me in knowledge' is redundant and incorrect. It should be simplified to 'that can help me gain knowledge' for clarity and correctness.

× I pick the books and read them.

✓ I pick the books and read them.

This sentence is grammatically correct and needs no correction.

× Yes, I went to library when I was a kid, but not enough private library of the public.

✓ Yes, I went to the library when I was a kid, but there were not enough private libraries for the public.

The noun 'library' requires the definite article 'the' when referring to a specific place. Also, 'not enough private library of the public' is incorrect; it should be 'not enough private libraries for the public' to indicate quantity and possession properly.

× But in a school library I used there was There used to be a specific library period in classes library classes in school.

✓ But in the school library I used, there used to be a specific library period during classes at school.

The sentence is confusing and poorly structured. 'I used there was There used to be' is incorrect and redundant. It should be rephrased for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Going to the library is not about only specific religion or group of people do anyone can go to the library.

✓ Going to the library is not only about a specific religion or group of people; anyone can go to the library.

The phrase 'not about only specific religion or group of people do anyone can go' is incorrect. It should be 'not only about a specific religion or group of people; anyone can go' to convey the intended meaning clearly.

× At any age library is used.

✓ People of any age use the library.

The original sentence is awkward and unclear. 'At any age library is used' is incorrect; it should be rephrased to 'People of any age use the library' for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Library is a place where people can read.

✓ The library is a place where people can read.

The noun 'library' requires the definite article 'the' when referring to a specific place. Adding 'The' makes the sentence grammatically correct.