Library— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 답변이 자연스럽지 않고, 단어 선택과 문법 오류가 많습니다. 'rivalry' 대신 'library'를 사용해야 하며, 문장을 간결하고 명확하게 구성하는 연습이 필요합니다. 또한, 중복된 표현을 피하고, 문장 길이를 5문장 이내로 유지하세요.

Exemplo: Yes, I often go to the library because I am a graduate student. I need to read many research papers and find data for my studies. The library is a quiet place that helps me concentrate. I usually spend a few hours there each day. It is very helpful for my academic work.

Sugestão: 답변이 반복적이고 문장이 완성되지 않았습니다. 주제 문장으로 직접 답변하고, 추가 설명을 연결어를 사용해 자연스럽게 이어가세요. 구체적인 활동을 명확히 표현하는 연습이 필요합니다.

Exemplo: I usually go to the library to read research papers for my studies. In addition, I search for relevant data to support my research. The quiet environment helps me focus better. Sometimes, I also use the library's computers to access online journals.

Sugestão: 문법과 단어 선택에 오류가 많고, 의미 전달이 명확하지 않습니다. 'rivalry' 대신 'library'를 사용하고, 문장을 간결하고 명확하게 구성하세요. 또한, 이유를 구체적으로 설명하는 연습이 필요합니다.

Exemplo: No, I did not go to the library when I was a child. I found the library to be a very large and unfamiliar place, so I felt uncomfortable. Because of that, I preferred to stay at home or play outside. I did not enjoy visiting the library at that time.

Sugestão: 답변이 불완전하고 문법 오류가 많으며, 주제에 대한 명확한 의견 제시가 부족합니다. 문장을 완성하고, 자신의 의견을 명확히 표현하는 연습이 필요합니다. 또한, 'rivalry' 대신 'library'를 사용하세요.

Exemplo: I am not Chinese, so I am not sure if Chinese children often go to the library. However, I have heard that Chinese students study very hard from a young age. Therefore, I think many of them probably use the library to help with their studies.

× Yes, I have gone to the rivalry often because I'm a student.

✓ Yes, I have gone to the library often because I'm a student.

The word 'rivalry' is incorrect in this context; it should be 'library'. This is a vocabulary error, not a grammar problem, so no grammar problem type applies here.

× I'm a graduated student from my master course, so I have to I have to read many, many paper and I had to search many data.

✓ I'm a graduate student from my master's course, so I have to read many papers and search a lot of data.

'Graduated student' should be 'graduate student' (adjective form). 'Master course' should be 'master's course' to show possession. 'Paper' should be plural 'papers' because it refers to multiple documents. 'Many data' is incorrect because 'data' is uncountable; use 'a lot of data' or 'much data'.

× As I said, I'm a graduated student so I have to read many paper for my research.

✓ As I said, I'm a graduate student so I have to read many papers for my research.

'Graduated student' should be 'graduate student'. 'Paper' should be plural 'papers' because it refers to multiple documents.

× So when I visit the library I search some data about my research and read that.

✓ So when I visit the library, I search for some data about my research and read it.

'Search some data' is missing the preposition 'for'. Also, 'read that' is awkward; 'read it' is better referring to the data. This involves preposition use (ID 11) and pronoun use (ID 12).

× No, I didn't go to the library because when I was a kid, I don't like visit the rivalry because the library is very broad space for me.

✓ No, I didn't go to the library because when I was a kid, I didn't like visiting the library because the library was a very big space for me.

Mixing past and present tense: 'don't like' should be 'didn't like' to match past context. 'Visit' should be 'visiting' after 'like'. 'Rivalry' is incorrect; should be 'library'. 'Broad space' is awkward; 'big space' or 'large space' is better.

× So I don't like visitor, right.

✓ So I didn't like visiting, right?

'Visitor' is a noun meaning a person who visits; the sentence needs a verb form 'visiting' to express the action. Also, tense should be past to match context.

× I didn't like the visit.

✓ I didn't like visiting.

'The visit' is a noun phrase but sounds unnatural here; 'visiting' as a gerund better expresses the action disliked.

× First of all, I'm not Chinese so I don't know the Chinese kid is open go to the rivalry or not, but in my opinion I heard the Chinese kids started very hard, so I think they.

✓ First of all, I'm not Chinese so I don't know if Chinese kids often go to the library or not, but in my opinion, I heard Chinese kids study very hard, so I think they do.

'Chinese kid is open go' is incorrect; should be 'Chinese kids often go'. 'Rivalry' should be 'library'. 'Started very hard' is incorrect; should be 'study very hard'. Sentence is incomplete; added 'do' to complete thought.