Library— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is understandable but contains grammatical errors and redundancy. Try to use a clear topic sentence and avoid repeating the same idea. For example, say "No, I don't often go to the library because I prefer reading books at home."

Exemplo: No, I don't often go to the library because I prefer reading books at home where I feel more comfortable.

Sugestão: Your answer has grammatical mistakes and lacks coherence. Use linking words to connect your ideas and correct verb forms. For example, "I usually read books in the library because I like the quiet space and it's convenient for me."

Exemplo: I usually read books in the library because I enjoy the quiet environment and find it more convenient than other places.

Sugestão: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Use past tense consistently and clarify your ideas. For example, "When I was a kid, I often went to the library, but I didn't stay long because I read only short books."

Exemplo: When I was a kid, I often went to the library, but I didn't stay long because I preferred reading short books.

Sugestão: Your answer is repetitive and has grammatical errors. Avoid repeating the same idea and use correct verb forms. For example, "I think Chinese kids often go to the library because they enjoy reading and are very studious."

Exemplo: I think Chinese kids often go to the library because they enjoy reading and are very studious.

× No, I don't go I often.

✓ No, I don't often go.

The adverb 'often' should be placed before the main verb 'go' to correctly modify it. The original sentence has incorrect word order, making it confusing.

× I don't often go to the library because I prefer reading a book at home.

✓ I don't often go to the library because I prefer reading books at home.

The phrase 'a book' is less natural here; 'books' is more appropriate when speaking generally. Also, the sentence is correct in grammar but can be improved for naturalness.

× I usually reading books at the library because I like seat.

✓ I usually read books at the library because I like to sit.

The verb 'usually' should be followed by the base form 'read', not the '-ing' form 'reading'. Also, 'like seat' is incorrect; it should be 'like to sit' or 'like sitting'.

× Because of this place is more convenient for me and I like reading book more quietly, space for me.

✓ Because this place is more convenient for me and I like reading books more quietly in this space.

The phrase 'Because of this place is' is incorrect; it should be 'Because this place is'. Also, 'reading book more quietly, space for me' is unclear and needs rephrasing for clarity and correct preposition use.

× When I was a kid I often go to the library, but I didn't stay a long time there because I was a kid and I already I read their more shortly books.

✓ When I was a kid, I often went to the library, but I didn't stay a long time there because I was a kid and I already read their shorter books.

The verb 'go' should be in past tense 'went' to match 'When I was a kid'. 'More shortly books' is incorrect; it should be 'shorter books'. Also, 'already I read their' is awkward and should be 'I already read their'.

× I think Chinese kids often go to the library because they like read books and they are very smart kids.

✓ I think Chinese kids often go to the library because they like to read books and they are very smart kids.

The verb 'like' should be followed by the infinitive 'to read' or the gerund 'reading'. 'Like read' is incorrect.