Library— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer needs to be clearer and more natural. Avoid incorrect phrases like 'right Bali' and improve grammar. Try to directly answer the question with a simple topic sentence, then add supporting details using linking words. Keep your answer concise and relevant.

Exemplo: Yes, I often go to the library when I have free time because it helps me relax and reduce stress after studying for a long day.

Sugestão: Your answer should be more coherent and grammatically correct. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid repetition. Also, use correct plural forms and articles. Provide specific details about what you do in the library.

Exemplo: I usually look for interesting books to read, especially novels. My university library is a good place to find a variety of books that I enjoy.

Sugestão: Your answer has grammatical errors and unclear meaning. Use the past tense correctly and avoid unrelated information like 'last weekend'. Focus on directly answering the question with clear supporting details.

Exemplo: Yes, when I was a kid, I loved going to the library because I enjoyed reading many books. It helped me learn new things and imagine different worlds.

Sugestão: Your answer is unclear and contains many errors. Make sure to answer the question directly and use correct vocabulary and grammar. Provide specific reasons or examples to support your opinion.

Exemplo: Yes, I think many Chinese children often go to the library because they study hard and need a quiet place to prepare for important exams.

× Yes, I always go to the right Bali when I have a free time because when I attend library I feel comfortable and release my stress when I study long a day.

✓ Yes, I always go to the right Bali when I have free time because when I attend the library I feel comfortable and relieve my stress when I study for a long day.

The phrase 'have a free time' is incorrect because 'time' in this context is uncountable and should not have an article 'a'. Also, 'attend library' is incorrect; the definite article 'the' is needed before 'library'. The verb 'release' is incorrect here; the correct verb is 'relieve' when talking about stress. Additionally, 'study long a day' is incorrect; it should be 'study for a long day' to indicate duration.

× I love to find interested book to read.

✓ I love to find interesting books to read.

The adjective 'interested' is incorrect here; it should be 'interesting' to describe the book. Also, 'book' should be plural 'books' because it refers to books in general, not a single book.

× For example, I love to read a novel book.

✓ For example, I love to read a novel.

The phrase 'a novel book' is redundant because 'novel' already means a book. Therefore, 'a novel' is sufficient and correct.

× So my university library is good choice for me to find some book in there.

✓ So my university library is a good choice for me to find some books there.

The phrase 'good choice' needs the indefinite article 'a'. Also, 'some book' should be plural 'some books' because it refers to multiple books. The phrase 'in there' is incorrect; 'there' alone is sufficient.

× Yes, when I were a kid, I am a good one who love to read a lot of books.

✓ Yes, when I was a kid, I was someone who loved to read a lot of books.

The verb 'were' is incorrect for the singular subject 'I'; it should be 'was'. The tense should be consistent in past tense, so 'am' should be 'was' and 'love' should be 'loved'.

× In last weekend I think book is help me to restart my energy and explore a new world in my head.

✓ Last weekend I thought books helped me to restart my energy and explore a new world in my head.

The phrase 'In last weekend' is incorrect; it should be 'Last weekend'. The verb 'think' should be in past tense 'thought' to match the time frame. 'Book is help me' is incorrect; it should be 'books helped me' to agree in number and tense.

× I believe Chinese student is study hard.

✓ I believe Chinese students study hard.

The noun 'student' should be plural 'students' to agree with the general statement. The verb 'is study' is incorrect; it should be 'study' to agree with the plural subject.

× They always go to rivalry to prepare girl call exam.

✓ They always go to the library to prepare for the college entrance exam.

The word 'rivalry' is incorrect; it should be 'library'. The phrase 'prepare girl call exam' is unclear and incorrect; it likely means 'prepare for the college entrance exam'. The preposition 'for' is needed after 'prepare'.

× I heard that is hosted exam in China so they need to prepare and study a lot.

✓ I heard that the exam is hosted in China, so they need to prepare and study a lot.

The phrase 'that is hosted exam' is incorrect; it should be 'that the exam is hosted'. The definite article 'the' is needed before 'exam'.