Library— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is generally clear but contains some redundancy and minor grammatical errors. Try to avoid repeating the same idea (concentrate) and use linking words to make your answer more coherent. Also, correct small mistakes like 'quite environment' should be 'quiet environment'.

Exemplo: No, I don't often go to the library now. However, when I was a student, I used to visit it regularly because it provided a quiet environment without distractions, which helped me concentrate better on my assignments.

Sugestão: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and contains filler words like 'uh'. Try to be more concise and use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. Also, avoid repeating similar phrases like 'complete and finish'.

Exemplo: I usually go to the library to study and focus on my assignments. Additionally, I borrow books that are not available online, which makes it easier for me to conduct research and complete my work.

Sugestão: Your answer is clear and well-structured with supporting details. To improve, use linking words like 'because' and 'also' more effectively to enhance coherence. Also, say 'the library' instead of 'library'.

Exemplo: I didn't go to the library very often when I was a kid because I wasn't interested in reading. Instead, I preferred playing outside with my friends. However, I had access to many books at home since my parents owned a variety of them.

Sugestão: Your answer has grammatical errors and unclear phrasing. Try to use correct pronouns and sentence structures. Also, use linking words to connect ideas logically and be more specific about Chinese kids' habits.

Exemplo: I believe many Chinese children often visit libraries to do research and complete their assignments because there are many distractions at home. Moreover, libraries provide access to a wide range of information that might not be easily available online.

× No, I don't, but I used to go to the library when I was a student because it was easier for me to concentrate and and to be oriented on my assignments in a library because it offered quite environment and without distractions and it was easier for me to concentrate on my studies rather.

✓ No, I don't, but I used to go to the library when I was a student because it was easier for me to concentrate and to be oriented on my assignments in a library because it offered a quiet environment without distractions and it was easier for me to concentrate on my studies.

The phrase 'and and to be oriented' contains a repeated conjunction 'and' which is incorrect. Also, 'quite environment' should be 'quiet environment' as 'quiet' is the correct adjective here. The phrase 'without distractions and it was easier' should be connected properly without 'and' before 'without distractions'. The correction removes the repeated 'and' and fixes the adjective to improve clarity and grammatical correctness.

× No, I don't, but I used to go to the library when I was a student because it was easier for me to concentrate and and to be oriented on my assignments in a library because it offered quite environment and without distractions and it was easier for me to concentrate on my studies rather.

✓ No, I don't, but I used to go to the library when I was a student because it was easier for me to concentrate and to be oriented on my assignments in the library because it offered a quiet environment without distractions and it was easier for me to concentrate on my studies.

The phrase 'in a library' should be 'in the library' because the speaker refers to a specific library previously mentioned. Using the definite article 'the' specifies the particular place, which is grammatically correct in this context.

× I usually go to the libraries to study and to, uh, to be more concentrated and oriented on my uh, assignment and to complete them.

✓ I usually go to the library to study and to be more concentrated and oriented on my assignments and to complete them.

The phrase 'go to the libraries' is incorrect because it implies multiple libraries in general, but the context suggests a specific place or the library in general, so 'the library' is appropriate. Also, 'assignment' should be plural 'assignments' to agree with 'them' later in the sentence.

× I usually go to the libraries to study and to, uh, to be more concentrated and oriented on my uh, assignment and to complete them.

✓ I usually go to the library to study and to be more concentrated and oriented on my assignments and to complete them.

The word 'assignment' is singular but refers to multiple tasks as indicated by 'them' later in the sentence. Therefore, 'assignments' should be plural to maintain agreement.

× Unfortunately, I didn't go to library very often when I was a kid because I was not interested in reading.

✓ Unfortunately, I didn't go to the library very often when I was a kid because I was not interested in reading.

The phrase 'go to library' is missing the definite article 'the' before 'library' because it refers to a specific place known to both speaker and listener. The correct phrase is 'go to the library'.

× I think every child needs to visit him in the libraries in order to do some research and their own assignments outside their house, because at home there are lots of distractions and also they had they don't have access to the information, variety of information in the on the Internet.

✓ I think every child needs to visit the library in order to do some research and their own assignments outside their house, because at home there are lots of distractions and they don't have access to a variety of information on the Internet.

The phrase 'visit him in the libraries' is incorrect because 'him' is an incorrect pronoun here; it should be 'the library'. Also, 'they had they don't have' is a confusing and incorrect phrase; it should be 'they don't have'. The phrase 'the information, variety of information in the on the Internet' is incorrect; it should be 'a variety of information on the Internet'. These corrections fix pronoun misuse and article/preposition errors for clarity and grammatical correctness.