Library— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is generally clear but could be more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy and improve sentence structure. For example, instead of "multi world resources," you could say "a wide range of resources." Also, try to limit your answer to about 3-4 sentences and use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Exemplo: Yes, I often go to the library because it's a quiet and welcoming place to study. I can borrow a wide range of books and resources there, which makes it a great experience for me.

Sugestão: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to organize your ideas clearly with a topic sentence and supporting details. Use linking words like "also" or "in addition" to connect ideas. Avoid unclear phrases like "cover the sleepers all over."

Exemplo: In the library, I usually read books about politics, which is my area of interest. In addition, I study subjects related to my bachelor's degree. During exam periods, I spend most of my time there preparing for tests.

Sugestão: Your answer provides relevant information but could be more concise and grammatically correct. Use past tense consistently and complete your sentences. Also, use linking words like "however" to contrast ideas.

Exemplo: As far as I remember, there wasn't a library near my house because I lived in the countryside. However, at school, we often went to the library for special classes or sessions.

Sugestão: Your answer is somewhat off-topic and contains repetition and unclear phrases. Try to answer directly and clearly. Use linking words to organize your ideas and avoid filler phrases like "to be honest."

Exemplo: I'm not sure about all Chinese kids, but in the libraries near my home in Brampton, I often see many Chinese and other Asian students studying there.

× I mostly find library very attractive place to study and it's very quiet and very friendly where I can borrow multi world resources and books and it's a very good experience.

✓ I mostly find the library a very attractive place to study and it's very quiet and very friendly where I can borrow multiple world resources and books and it's a very good experience.

The definite article 'the' is needed before 'library' because it refers to a specific place known to both speaker and listener. Also, 'multi world resources' is incorrect; 'multiple world resources' or 'many resources' is more appropriate.

× I mostly find library very attractive place to study and it's very quiet and very friendly where I can borrow multi world resources and books and it's a very good experience.

✓ I mostly find the library a very attractive place to study and it's very quiet and very friendly where I can borrow multiple world resources and books and it's a very good experience.

The phrase 'very attractive place' requires an article 'a' before 'very attractive place' to be grammatically correct.

× I usually read the books on my interesting politics subject and apart from that I study sometimes my bachelor degree subjects and in my exam days I mostly cover the sleepers all over just sitting in the library and studying.

✓ I usually read books on my interesting politics subject and apart from that I sometimes study my bachelor degree subjects and during my exam days I mostly cover the sleepers all over just sitting in the library and studying.

The preposition 'on' is correct with 'read books on a subject', but 'in my exam days' should be 'during my exam days' to indicate the time period. Also, 'study sometimes my bachelor degree subjects' is better as 'sometimes study my bachelor degree subjects' for natural word order.

× I usually read the books on my interesting politics subject and apart from that I study sometimes my bachelor degree subjects and in my exam days I mostly cover the sleepers all over just sitting in the library and studying.

✓ I usually read books on my interesting politics subject and apart from that I sometimes study my bachelor degree subjects and during my exam days I mostly cover the sleepers all over just sitting in the library and studying.

'The books' is better as 'books' when speaking generally. Also, 'politics subject' is singular but 'bachelor degree subjects' is plural, which is correct if referring to multiple subjects.

× As far as I remember in my childhood there wasn't any library nearby my house as we live in a countryside area.

✓ As far as I remember, in my childhood there wasn't any library near my house as we lived in a countryside area.

The verb tense should be past 'lived' to match 'in my childhood'. Also, 'nearby my house' is incorrect; 'near my house' is the correct prepositional phrase.

× But in my school I remember we always go to library whenever there were any special class we have or any session we have and.

✓ But in my school I remember we always went to the library whenever there was any special class or session.

The past tense 'went' is needed to match 'I remember' referring to past events. Also, 'go to library' requires the definite article 'the'. 'Were any special class' should be 'was any special class' because 'class' is singular.

× But in my school I remember we always go to library whenever there were any special class we have or any session we have and.

✓ But in my school I remember we always went to the library whenever there was any special class or session.

The definite article 'the' is required before 'library' because it refers to a specific place. Also, 'special class' is singular and needs 'was' instead of 'were'.

× To be honest I don't have any idea but I observed some wherever I go in the library like mainly in Brampton area and there are three libraries near my house and I often visit them to study.

✓ To be honest, I don't have any idea but I have observed some wherever I go in the library, mainly in the Brampton area, and there are three libraries near my house which I often visit to study.

The sentence is missing commas for clarity. Also, 'some' is vague; it should specify 'some students'. 'Like mainly in Brampton area' is awkward; 'mainly in the Brampton area' is correct. 'I often visit them' is better as 'which I often visit' for clarity.

× So I I've seen many Chinese student over there, maybe they are like mostly the Asian students.

✓ So I've seen many Chinese students over there; maybe they are mostly Asian students.

'Many Chinese student' is incorrect; it should be 'many Chinese students' to agree in number. Also, 'like mostly the Asian students' is awkward; 'mostly Asian students' is clearer.