Library— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 你的回答表达了观点，但存在语法错误和用词不当，如“it become”应为“it has become”，“cheaper”用词不够准确。建议注意时态和词汇的准确使用，同时回答可以更自然简洁。

Exemplo: No, I rarely go to the library because with technological advances, it has become much easier and more convenient to read books at home.

Sugestão: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不完整，如“read book”应为“read books”，“Feel my free time”表达不清。建议使用完整句子并增加连接词，使表达更连贯自然。

Exemplo: Usually, I read books in the library, and sometimes I order milk or coffee to enjoy during my free time.

Sugestão: 回答中时态错误，“have went”应为“have gone”或“went”，且表达略显笨拙。建议注意时态一致性，并用更自然的表达方式。

Exemplo: Yes, I went to the library when I was three years old, but I was very young, so I only read some legends and simple books.

Sugestão: 回答表达清晰，但句子结构可以更自然，避免“for them to”这样的冗余。建议简化句子结构，使表达更流畅。

Exemplo: No, most students in China don't have much free time to read books.

× With the development of technology, it become more and more cheaper and convenient for me to read a book at home.

✓ With the development of technology, it becomes more and more cheap and convenient for me to read a book at home.

句子中主语是第三人称单数"it"，谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式"becomes"，而不是原形"become"。此外，"cheaper"是比较级，前面没有比较对象，应使用形容词原级"cheap"。

× Most of the time I just read book in the library and sometimes I will order milk or coffee.

✓ Most of the time I just read books in the library and sometimes I will order milk or coffee.

"book"应使用复数形式"books"，因为这里指的是一般的书籍，不是特指一本书。

× Feel my free time.

✓ I enjoy my free time.

原句缺少主语和谓语，结构不完整，导致句意不明。应补充主语和谓语，使句子完整。

× Yes, I have went to the library when I was 3, but at that time I was so small that I only read some legend story or some easy books.

✓ Yes, I went to the library when I was 3, but at that time I was so small that I only read some legendary stories or some easy books.

"have went"是错误的过去分词形式，正确应为"have gone"，但此处时间点明确，应用一般过去时"went"。此外，"legend story"应为复数形式"legendary stories"，形容词"legendary"更合适。

× No, in China most of the students don't have much free time for them to read books.

✓ No, in China most of the students don't have much free time to read books.

"for them to read books"中的"them"多余且不合适，去掉后句子更通顺。