Library— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and lacks coherence. Try to avoid repeating the same idea and use linking words to connect your points smoothly. Also, be more specific about what kind of books or articles you read to enrich your answer.

Exemplo: Yes, I often visit the library because I enjoy reading a variety of books and articles. It provides me with peace and helps me gain valuable knowledge. Moreover, I like to explore different subjects there, which makes my learning experience unique.

Sugestão: Your answer is unclear and incomplete. Make sure to finish your sentences and clarify your ideas. Use linking words to connect your thoughts and specify the genres or topics you prefer to read.

Exemplo: Usually, I borrow books from the library and read them thoroughly until I fully understand the concepts. I especially enjoy romantic novels, as they help me relax and improve my language skills.

Sugestão: Your answer has grammatical errors and incomplete sentences. Use past tense consistently when talking about the past. Also, avoid leaving sentences unfinished and provide clear reasons or examples.

Exemplo: Yes, I used to visit the library when I was a kid. My parents often took me there to learn new things. At that time, I enjoyed reading crime novels because they were very interesting and exciting.

Sugestão: Your answer is somewhat vague and contains grammatical mistakes. Use correct subject-verb agreement and be more specific about why kids go to the library. Also, try to complete your thoughts clearly.

Exemplo: Yes, many Chinese kids often visit the library to learn about their history and culture through books written by their ancestors. This helps them become more humble and patient while understanding past events.

× I often visit library to read some books and articles.

✓ I often visit the library to read some books and articles.

The noun 'library' is a singular, countable noun and requires the definite article 'the' when referring to a specific place known to both speaker and listener. Omitting 'the' here is incorrect.

× At the same time, I often go to library in order to gain knowledge and to be different from others.

✓ At the same time, I often go to the library in order to gain knowledge and to be different from others.

Similar to the previous sentence, 'library' is a singular, countable noun and needs the definite article 'the' when referring to a specific place.

× I regularly go to the library and take the books that I love and read it completely until I understand about the concept clearly.

✓ I regularly go to the library and take the books that I love and read them completely until I understand the concept clearly.

The pronoun 'it' is singular but refers to 'books', which is plural. Therefore, 'it' should be replaced with 'them' to agree in number. Also, 'understand about' is incorrect; 'understand' does not require 'about'.

× I like romantic juniors mostly, so I love to read about it more and gain some kind of a.

✓ I mostly like romantic novels, so I love to read about them more and gain some kind of knowledge.

The phrase 'romantic juniors' is unclear and likely incorrect; 'romantic novels' fits the context better. Also, 'it' should be 'them' to agree with the plural 'novels'. The sentence ends abruptly and needs completion; 'some kind of knowledge' completes the thought.

× Yes, I visit a library.

✓ Yes, I visited a library.

The question is about past action ('Did you go...'), so the verb should be in the past tense 'visited' instead of present tense 'visit'.

× My friend has suggested one of.

✓ My friend has suggested one of them.

The sentence is incomplete and missing the object after 'one of'. Adding 'them' completes the sentence and makes it grammatically correct.

× I think many of the Chinese kids go to the library often to get more knowledge about the things that their ancestors has written in their book.

✓ I think many of the Chinese kids go to the library often to get more knowledge about the things that their ancestors have written in their books.

The subject 'ancestors' is plural, so the verb should be 'have' instead of 'has'. Also, 'book' should be plural 'books' to agree with 'ancestors'.

× It also makes them very humble and patient enough to know about certain things that has already happened in.

✓ It also makes them very humble and patient enough to know about certain things that have already happened.

The relative clause refers to 'things' which is plural, so the verb should be 'have' instead of 'has'. The sentence also ends abruptly; removing the incomplete ending improves clarity.