Library— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Try to make your answer more concise and avoid redundancy. For example, instead of repeating the purpose of the library multiple times, focus on one clear reason and support it with a specific detail. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

Exemplo: Yes, I often go to the library because it provides a quiet environment ideal for studying and completing projects without distractions. Additionally, I appreciate that I can borrow books there, which saves money and gives me access to a wide range of resources.

Sugestão: Avoid repeating phrases and filler words. Start with a clear topic sentence, then use linking words like 'also' or 'in addition' to add supporting details. Try to be more specific about the activities you do in the library.

Exemplo: Usually, I study or do my homework in the library because it is a quiet place that helps me concentrate. In addition, I often meet with my study group there to collaborate on projects and complete assignments together.

Sugestão: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to organize your ideas clearly: start with a direct answer, then add specific details. Avoid confusing phrases and check your grammar. Use linking words to connect ideas logically.

Exemplo: Yes, I used to visit the library every weekend with my parents. We would borrow storybooks, and now, when I borrow books, I feel nostalgic because some stories remind me of my childhood memories.

Sugestão: Your answer lacks clarity and contains grammatical mistakes. Focus on giving a clear opinion supported by specific reasons. Use linking words to organize your answer and avoid vague expressions like 'this kind of stuff'.

Exemplo: Yes, many Chinese children often go to the library because their teachers encourage them to develop critical thinking skills. They visit the library to conduct research and work on various projects related to their subjects.

× Yes, I frequently visit the library because I used to study and do my homework there.

✓ Yes, I frequently visit the library because I study and do my homework there.

The phrase 'used to' indicates a past habit, but the student is describing a current habit. Therefore, the present tense 'study' is appropriate here to match the current action.

× Actually, it's a quiet environment which is such a good place to do your homework and your projects without any distractions.

✓ Actually, it's a quiet environment which is such a good place to do your homework and projects without any distractions.

The use of 'your' before 'projects' is unnecessary and inconsistent with 'homework' which has no possessive pronoun. Removing 'your' makes the sentence more natural and grammatically correct.

× However, you can borrow books instead of buying them.

✓ However, you can borrow books instead of buying them.

This sentence is correct; no correction needed.

× I usually go to the library and study or do my homework.

✓ I usually go to the library to study or do my homework.

The phrase 'go to the library and study' is acceptable but 'go to the library to study' is more natural and grammatically correct to express purpose.

× And since it's, since it's, as I said, it's a quiet place and very good place to concentrate.

✓ As I said, it's a quiet and very good place to concentrate.

The repetition 'since it's, since it's' is redundant and awkward. Simplifying the sentence improves clarity and flow.

× And also I go there with my study groups to, to collaborate on a project or to do our assignments together.

✓ I also go there with my study group to collaborate on a project or do our assignments together.

'Study groups' should be singular 'study group' if referring to one group. Also, removing the repeated 'to' and 'and' improves sentence flow.

× Yes, I used to go there every weekend with my parents.

✓ Yes, I used to go there every weekend with my parents.

This sentence is correct; no correction needed.

× It's I we go there and get a box and stories.

✓ We used to go there and get books and stories.

The original sentence is unclear and ungrammatical. Correcting to 'We used to go there and get books and stories' clarifies meaning and corrects structure.

× It's now in this days when I borrow books, I feel like I have a memories on some stories when I substrate the neck.

✓ Nowadays, when I borrow books, I feel like I have memories of some stories when I read the back cover.

The original sentence contains multiple errors: 'It's now in this days' should be 'Nowadays'; 'a memories' should be 'memories'; 'on some stories' should be 'of some stories'; 'substrate the neck' is incorrect and likely means 'read the back cover'. Correcting these improves clarity and grammar.

× Yes, I think so. The Chinese children is very smart and they have like a multiple subjects.

✓ Yes, I think so. Chinese children are very smart and they have multiple subjects.

'The Chinese children is' is incorrect; 'children' is plural and should be used without 'the' here and with the plural verb 'are'. Also, 'a multiple subjects' is incorrect; 'multiple subjects' is correct without 'a'.

× It's about to it's about critical thinking and this this kind of stuff.

✓ It's about critical thinking and this kind of stuff.

The phrase 'It's about to it's about' is redundant and incorrect. Simplifying to 'It's about critical thinking and this kind of stuff' is correct.

× So their teacher send them to go and visit the library and doing their project and research.

✓ So their teacher sends them to go and visit the library and do their projects and research.

'Teacher send' should be 'teacher sends' to agree with third person singular subject. Also, 'doing' should be 'do' to maintain parallel structure with 'go and visit'. 'Project' should be plural 'projects' to match 'research'.