Library— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and contains some grammatical errors. Try to make your response more concise and natural by avoiding redundancy and correcting grammar. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. For example, instead of repeating 'go to the library,' you can say 'I often visit the library to study and read books because it offers a quiet environment and the opportunity to borrow books rather than buying them.'

Exemplo: Yes, I often visit the library to study and read books because it provides a quiet environment where I can focus. Moreover, I appreciate that I can borrow books instead of buying them, which is very convenient.

Sugestão: Your answer is a bit informal and contains filler words like 'like' and repeated phrases. Try to respond directly with clear sentences and use linking words to connect your ideas. Also, avoid informal expressions and improve grammar for clarity.

Exemplo: Usually, I go to the library to study, especially when I have a large amount of work to complete. The quiet environment helps me concentrate without any distractions, which is very helpful.

Sugestão: Your answer has grammatical mistakes and is incomplete at the end. Try to use past tense consistently and complete your thoughts. Also, avoid redundancy and use linking words to make your answer coherent.

Exemplo: Yes, when I was a kid, I usually went to the library because my school assigned tasks that required research. Therefore, I had to borrow books and complete my assignments there.

Sugestão: Your answer is vague and contains grammatical errors. Avoid making generalizations without evidence and try to express uncertainty clearly. Use linking words to organize your ideas and complete your sentences.

Exemplo: From my perspective, I believe many Chinese kids often go to the library because education is highly valued in their culture. However, since I do not have Chinese friends, I am not entirely sure about this.

× I really love to go there since you can borrow books instead of buy it.

✓ I really love to go there since you can borrow books instead of buying them.

The sentence has a singular/plural mismatch: 'books' is plural, but 'it' is singular. Also, after 'instead of', the verb should be in the -ing form ('buying'). So, 'buy it' should be corrected to 'buying them' to match the plural 'books' and correct verb form.

× And also the library is such a quiet environment and there you can look in or focus without.

✓ Also, the library is such a quiet environment where you can concentrate without distractions.

The phrase 'look in or focus without' is incorrect and unclear. 'Look in' is not appropriate here, and 'focus without' is incomplete without an object. The sentence is better expressed as 'where you can concentrate without distractions' to convey the intended meaning clearly.

× It's such a, it's such a quiet environment and you can focus for a long time without any disturbing or distractions.

✓ It's such a quiet environment and you can focus for a long time without any disturbance or distractions.

The word 'disturbing' is an adjective and does not fit here; the noun 'disturbance' is correct. Also, 'without any disturbing or distractions' mixes adjective and noun forms incorrectly. Using 'disturbance or distractions' is grammatically correct.

× Yes, when I was a kid I usually go to the library since my school give us some tasks to complete like as an assignment.

✓ Yes, when I was a kid I usually went to the library since my school gave us some tasks to complete as assignments.

The sentence refers to past habits, so the verb 'go' should be in past tense 'went'. Also, 'give' should be 'gave' to match past tense. 'Like as an assignment' is awkward; 'as assignments' is clearer and grammatically correct.

× So back in that day you must go to the library and borrow some books and start solving your assignment or homeworks.

✓ So back in those days you had to go to the library and borrow some books and start solving your assignments or homework.

'That day' should be plural 'those days' to indicate a period in the past. 'Must go' in past context should be 'had to go'. 'Assignment or homeworks' mixes singular and plural; 'assignments or homework' is correct, noting that 'homework' is uncountable.

× The Chinese people is very smart.

✓ The Chinese people are very smart.

'People' is a plural noun, so the verb should be 'are' not 'is'. This is a subject-verb agreement issue related to plural subjects.

× So yeah, I think they're like they live in the in the library.

✓ So yeah, I think they live in the library.

The phrase 'they're like they live in the in the library' is redundant and awkward. Simplifying to 'they live in the library' improves clarity and grammatical correctness.