Library— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Try to use correct adverbs and prepositions, and avoid redundancy. Make your answer more coherent by linking ideas clearly and using proper sentence structures. For example, say "I often go to the library because it is close to my house, which makes it easy to access books and learning materials that help me a lot."

Exemplo: I often go to the library because it is close to my house, which makes it easy to access books and learning materials that help me a lot.

Sugestão: Use correct verb forms and clearer vocabulary. Also, organize your answer with a topic sentence followed by specific details using linking words. For example, "In the library, I usually look for books related to my career path. For instance, I find books for my children and instructional tools for preschool kids."

Exemplo: In the library, I usually look for books related to my career path. For instance, I find books for my children and instructional tools for preschool kids.

Sugestão: Improve sentence clarity and grammar. Provide a clear topic sentence and support it with specific reasons using linking words. For example, "I did not go to the library often as a child because it was far from my home, making it difficult and time-consuming to visit."

Exemplo: I did not go to the library often as a child because it was far from my home, making it difficult and time-consuming to visit.

Sugestão: Make your answer more natural and structured. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid informal phrases. For example, "I don't think Chinese kids often go to the library because they can practice Chinese with their parents in daily life, which is easier for them."

Exemplo: I don't think Chinese kids often go to the library because they can practice Chinese with their parents in daily life, which is easier for them.

× Yes I oftenly go to the library because of it.

✓ Yes, I often go to the library because of it.

The word 'oftenly' is incorrect; the correct adverb form is 'often'. 'Often' is an adverb that does not take the '-ly' suffix. Use 'often' to indicate frequency.

× The library is nearby my house and its so easier to go that place and easier to get more.

✓ The library is near my house and it's so easy to go to that place and easier to get more.

The correct preposition is 'near' instead of 'nearby' when used before a noun. Also, 'it's' is a contraction of 'it is' and should be followed by an adjective 'easy' not 'easier' in this context. Additionally, 'go to that place' requires the preposition 'to' after 'go'.

× Some like books or any other tools for learning from my learning and it helped me a lot.

✓ Some books or other learning tools help me a lot.

The original sentence is unclear and uses pronouns incorrectly. 'Some like books' is ambiguous; it should be 'Some books'. 'Any other tools for learning from my learning' is confusing and redundant. Simplifying to 'other learning tools' clarifies meaning. Also, 'helped' should be present tense 'help' to match the context.

× I usually looking for umm some interested things about my career path like the books for my children or some instruct in tools for the preschool kids.

✓ I usually look for some interesting things about my career path, like books for my children or some instructional tools for preschool kids.

After 'usually', the base form of the verb should be used, so 'look' instead of 'looking'. 'Interested things' is incorrect; the correct adjective is 'interesting'. 'Instruct in tools' is incorrect; it should be 'instructional tools'.

× Not as much because in my home country it's too far from the library, it can't have from my home and it's not easier to to go to that place and take so long time.

✓ Not as much because in my home country the library is too far from my home, and it's not easy to go to that place as it takes a long time.

'It can't have from my home' is incorrect and unclear; it should be 'the library is too far from my home'. 'It's not easier' should be 'it's not easy' to express difficulty. 'Take so long time' should be 'takes a long time' with correct verb agreement and article usage.

× So probably like it gonna be the better option.

✓ So probably it will be the better option.

'Gonna' is informal and should be replaced with 'will' in formal speech. 'The better option' is correct if comparing options, but 'probably it will be the better option' is the correct future tense structure.

× I don't think so that they often go to the library because they can practice with, they can practice Chinese with their parents from the the current daily life, it's gonna be easier for them.

✓ I don't think they often go to the library because they can practice Chinese with their parents in daily life; it will be easier for them.

'I don't think so that they' is incorrect; it should be 'I don't think they'. The phrase 'practice with' is incomplete and should specify what is being practiced. 'From the the current daily life' is redundant and awkward; 'in daily life' is clearer. 'Gonna' should be replaced with 'will' for proper future tense.